2025届高考英语复习 读后续写六、提升作文颜值 导学案.doc

读后续写六提升作文颜值一巧用形容词Useadjectivestoconveyavividpicture1Janeroseatthebreakofday2Fortunatelywegotinthehelicopter3Shebegansobbing4Marysatstillagainstthedoor5WewerethrilledtoseetheboywasrescuedWejumpedtoourfeet6ShewasexhaustedShestillkeptyellingatthetopofherlung7YoucantmaginethatIwasveryanxiouswhenIknewyouwereinabadmood升级版1Janeroseatthebreakofdayhungryandthirsty2Fortunatelywegotinthehelicoptersafeandsound3FrightenedandfrustratedShebegansobbing4LostintheaghtMarysatstillagainstthedoor5Sothrilledwerewetoseetheboywasrescuedthatwejumpedtoourfeet6Exhaustedasthoughshewasshestillkeptyellingatthetopofherlung7YoucantimaginehowanxiousIwaswhenIknewyouwereinabadmood句式总结主谓adj短语adj短语主谓soadjthatadjasthoughsbiswasHowadj主谓Practice1Mary满脸通红气喘吁吁地从大门口跑了进来2Jack是如此的焦急以至于他在他的房间里来回踱步3困在迷雾中我什么也做不了只能哭泣无助又失落答案FlushedandbreathlessMaryrushedoutofthegateSoanxiousasJackthathepacedupanddowninhisroomTrappedinthedensemistIcoulddonothingbutburstintotearshelplessanddisappointed二活用副词副词使表达更具活力副词突出画面感例如1Tearsofjoyfloodedhereyesassheprayedsilently2ShesstolenmywatchLeesaidangrily怒地说Itwentmissingatschoolyesterday3Deeplymoved深地被感动weappreciatedhimandfeltasenseofwarmth4Hopelesslystandingontheroadside绝望地站在路边Iwassosadthatthetearswerefilledwithmyeyes5Myparentsscoldedmeforrunningoutofthehousesecretly偷地跑出房间butwerealsogladthatIwasnotseriouslyinjured我受伤并不很严重6TotallyAbsolutelyCompletelyfrightened完全被吓着Macrodehisbikeasquicklyashecould三非谓语动词1动词的一种形式可以充当出了谓语以外的其他成分它不受人称和数的限制在句中起nadjadv的作用1HewastremblinginablanketandhesaidImcoldTremblinginablankethesaidImcold2WhenshearrivedthereshesearchedtheunfamiliarbuildingandaskedforZatannasdormitoryfromdoortodoorArrivingthereshesearchedtheunfamiliarbuildingaskingforZatannasdormitoryfromdoortodoor3ForafewmomentsIjuststoodthereIheldthattendollarbillandIwonderedwhattobuyandwhotobuyitforForafewmomentsIjuststoodthereholdingthattendollarbillandwonderingwhattobuyandwhotobuyitfor4ShewroteToBobbyFromSantaClausonitThenshedrovemeovertoBobbyDeckershouseassheexplainedIwasofficiallyoneofSantashelpersHavingwrittenToBobbyFromSantaClausonitshedrovemeovertoBobbyDeckershouseexplainingIwasofficiallyoneofSantashelpersPractice1我小心翼翼地打开信希望能找到一些有关钱包主人身份的线索2女孩微笑着长发在微风中飘动3他的妻子伤心极了眼里满是泪水4他又沮丧叉低落低着头走在队伍的最后5他聚精会神地听着咬着嘴唇眼睛盯着地板6天亮时Jane醒了觉得头晕晕的7当然有圣诞老人啊奶奶说道一边用手指拨弄着我的头发8她穿着圣诞老人的服装悄悄溜进房间没有被看到9Ronny沉浸在强烈的恐惧感中一句话也说不出来10好奇心切她从河岸边跑开穿过田野去追兔子11他痛苦地喘着气强迫自己站了起来迈着缓慢的步子摇摇晃晃地开始走答案1Iopenedthelettercarefullyhopingforsomecluetotheidentityoftheownerofthewallet2Thegirlsmiledwithherlonghairflowinginthebreeze3Hiswifewasindeepsorrowwithhereyesfilledwithtears4Depressedandlowspiritedhewalkedattheendofthelinewithhisheaddrooping5Helistenedwithcloseattentionbitinghislipsandstaringatthefloor6ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeupwithherheadspinning7OfcoursethereisaSantaClauseGrandmasaidstrokingherfingersthroughmyhair8DressedinaSantaClauscostumesheslippedintotheroomwithoutbeingnoticed9ImmersedinastrongsenseofscareRonnycouldntutterasingleword10Burningwithcuriositysheranawayfromtheriverbankandacrossthefieldtochaseaftertherabbit11Gaspingwithpainheforcedhimselftohisfeetandwithslowshakystepsbegantowalk四with的复合结构句式with情感名词主谓withoneseyesfullofn1周围的人满意地笑了Peoplearoundmesmiledwithsatisfaction2她生气地盯着我Shestaredatmewithanger3我热泪盈眶冲出公寓沿着街道跑WithmyeyesfulloftearsIrushedoutoftheflatandranalongthestreet4他停下来转向我眼里满是恐惧Withhiseyesfullofterrorhestoppedandturnedtome句式with宾语doingdonetodo主谓1HestoodsilentlyTearsofregretwererollingslidingstrearingdownhischeeksHestoodsilentlywithtearsofregretrollingdownhischeeks2HerushedtotheroomHisheartbeatwildlyHerushetotheroomwithhisheartbeatingwildly3AsherplanwasruinedbytheaccidentsheletoutacrywithangerWithherplanruinedbytheaccidentsheletoutacrywithanger4AsalltheexamswerepassedshedancedwithjoyWithalltheexamspassedshedancedwithjoyPracticeHeissmilingHeburiedhisfaceinhishandscryingSeeingtheunexpectedpresentshejumpedtoherfeetAfterseveralattemptstosaveherselfshesatstillintheliftwaitingforrescueFiguringoutthatshehadmadeastupidmistakeshesmiledandapologizedtotheman五无灵主语一Whatis无灵主语用无生命的事物做主语用人或者是社会团体的行为动作做谓语无灵主语有灵谓语有种拟人化表达egRomewitnessedmanygreathistoricevents罗马发生过许多重大历史事件Rome无生命的事物witness目击是人的动作有灵谓语无灵主语物品动作情感时间地点等vs有灵主语有生命的SuddenlyIhaveagoodideaAgoodideasuddenlystrikesme二无灵主语的分类情感状态的抽象名词谓语描写人物情绪心理时可以替换掉sbfeel情感状态的抽象名词谓语动词的描写有Feargrippedthevillage整个村庄笼罩在恐怖之中Couragedesertedhim他失去了勇气Angerchokedmywords我气的说不出话Awaveofnervousnesswashedoverhim一阵紧张的情绪涌上他的心头Achillofhorrorsuddenlysweptoverhim他突然感到不寒而栗Excitementseizedhim他好兴奋Tips常见的情绪名词happinessjoydelight开心快乐surpriseastonishment惊奇惊讶shame羞耻羞愧anger愤怒despair绝望regret遗憾后悔sorrow悲伤horror惊恐anxiety焦虑disappointment失望沮丧satisfaction满意满足puzzlement困惑不解等等常见的谓语动词seize侵袭choke噎住堵住flood充满creep不知不觉产生grip紧抓givewayto被xx代替washover洗涤侵袭deserted丢弃遗弃等等思考动作行为的名词谓语描写人物动作思考行为时可以替换sbdo思考动作行为的名词谓语动词的描写有Thesightofthescenefilledmewithhorror看到这个情景我心中充满了恐惧Aterriblethoughtsuddenlystruckme我突然想到一个可怕的想法Atenminuteswalkbroughtustothehotel我们步行十分钟就到了旅馆Thethoughtofseeinghersonverysoonfilledherheartwithgreathappiness想到不久就要见到她的儿子她心中感到十分快乐Tip常见词汇补充可根据文中人物动作或思考的行为挑恰当的词自行搭配常见的人物行为词汇有sight看到thought想法glance一瞥look看到idea想法feeling感受walk走路等等常见的谓语动词overwhelm压倒strike打击侵袭arouse唤起remind想起fillwith充满xxchange改变bring带来等等身体部位音容样貌谓语描写人物外貌性格时可以替换sbis身体部位音容类名词谓语动词的描写有Smilecrumpledhisface他笑得一脸皱纹HerfacebrightenedwhenIgaveherthepresent我给她礼物时她的脸上焕发出了光彩Hiswordssentmeaquiverthroughmybody他的话让我全身不寒而栗Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom笑声在房间里萦绕TearswelledupinAnniseyes泪水从安妮的眼中涌出Tip常见词汇补充可根据文中的人物的外貌或性格挑恰当的词自行搭配常见的身体部位音容的名词有facelaughtersmiletearwords说的话等等常见的谓语动词lightupbrighten照亮linger继续存留wellup涌出flash闪烁crumple弄皱等等时间地点场景类谓语描写故事的时间或背景时时间地点场景类名词谓语动词的描写有Ahushfellupontheclassroom教室一片寂静Beijinghaswitnessedgreatchangesinrecentyears北京见证了最近几年的的巨大变化Duskfoundthechildcryinginthestreet黄昏时孩子在街上哭Thatchillyafternoonwitnessedhimtrudginginthesnow那个寒冷的下午他在雪地里跋涉Nighthasfallenoverthecountry夜幕已经笼罩着乡间Tip常见词汇补充可根据文中需要交代的时间或地点背景挑恰当的词自行搭配常见的时间地点场景类名词sliencehush安静沉默dusk黄昏dawn黎明破晓morningafternoonnight等等常用的谓语动词有see看见witness见证find发现fall降临进入等等自然现象类名词谓语描写环境时可以替换Itissunny自然现象类名词谓语动词的描写有Asuddenshowerkilledthewind突然下了一阵雨风停了Aheavyrainvisitedthecity这个城市刚下过一场大雨Thesunhascomeout太阳出来了Thethickfogblanketedthefield浓雾笼罩着整个大地Tip常见词汇补充可根据续写所需的环境描写挑恰当的词自行搭配常见的自然现象名词sunsunshinemoonmoonlightfogmist雾rainearthquake地震等等常见的谓语动词blanket覆盖comebringprevent妨碍阻止strike打击侵袭threaten威胁即将来临等等练习一1他没有了勇气Couragedesertedhim2他感到非常轻松Agreatsenseofrelaxationfloededoverhim3他感到不寒而栗恐惧Asenseofhorrorseizedcreptuponhim4一阵焦虑撕名了他Awaveofanxietytearshimintopieces5一股自豪感油工心头Asenseofprideoftenwellsupinmymind6看到这个情景我心中满是恐惧Thesightofthescenefilledmewithhorror7想到你们即将回国我们很难过Thethoughtofyourcominghomemakesussad1WhenIwasyoungIwasshyAt14yearsolditwasmyturntogiveapresentationinclass2SeeingsomanyclassmatesIwasfearfulAlthoughhavingwellprepared3IsuddenlylostmycourageIforgotallmywordsabsolutelyAfterclassmyteacherencouragedmetobecourageousandnottohideawayFromthenon4IbecamemoreconfidentinsteadifbeingshyAnd5Iwouldremembertheexperienceforever1ShynesstookovermylifewhenIwasyoung2Thesightofsomanyclassmatesfilledmewithfear3Mycouragedestroyedmesuddenlydespitefullpreparations4Myshynessgavewaytomycourage5Theexperiencewouldtakerootinmymindforever