在大学英语六级考试中,写作部分是不是会另很多同学头疼。不知如何下笔,写出来之后也不知道自己写的怎么样。为了让同学有更加清晰地写作思路,下面为为大家提供点评作文,希望能帮助到同学们。
怎样改善学生的心理健康
1. 学生心理健康的重要性
2. 学校应该怎样做
3. 学生自己应该怎样做
How to improve psychological health?
There is no denying the fact that mental health is of great importance to college students. Nowadays, many students in college suffer from mental illness, which severely affects their life and study. Taking a look around, we can find examples too numerous to list. Reports are often heard that some students committed suicide or murdered their roommates. Typical examples include the case of Ma Jiajue and that of a girl stabbing her schoolmates.
In view of the seriousness of the situation, effective measures must be taken before things get worse. On the one hand, due attention has to be paid by colleges to students' mental health. First, lectures on psychological health should be frequently given to students to prevent problems from happening. Secondly, psychological clinics should be set up to provide troubled students with timely help.
As to students, we should keep the channel of communication open among ourselves and between us and our teachers and parents. Besides, in case of mental illness, we should not hesitate to go to psychological counselors for help. Only with these measures taken can we expect sound growth of college students.
题:For this part , your are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance 。You can give explain to illustrate your point .You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words .
六级作文范文:
Currently, judging people by appearance has already become a common practice in our daily life. Is it wise to do this? The answer is definitely not.
Admittedly, a good and charming appearance will leave others a good impression for the first place. However, just as an old saying goes'"Never judge a book by its cover", it is not wise to judge one by appearance for the reasons given below. For one thing, along with the development of science, plastic surgery can change one's appearance, so good looking cannot reflect one's true inner thought. Thought the history, we can find ample handsome boys and girls who turn out to be dangerous ones. For another, appearance is not the only element judging others, but there are many aspects more important than it, such as kindness, warmheartedness and its like.
To summarize, judging people by appearance is the wise choice. Therefore I suggest that we should pay more attention to one's inner thought and quality rather than one's appearance.
作文三:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
Living in an age when the adolescents are lack of the necessary guidance and supervision, we can never fail to figure out the fact that teenagers are become especially self-conscious. Under this circumstance, the youngsters are more likely to believe in what they have listened or seen instead of thinking twice before drawing their conclusions, which is pathetically and undoubtedly considered controversial or even unreasonable.
The reasons why I insist on the viewpoint that we should never directly and irresponsibly come to conclusions only by listening or seeing mainly lie in the following two aspects. To begin with, it is a invariable law to every existence in the world that nothing will stay still even for just one second.So are the things happening around us. What we see or listen may be just some particular period of the development of things, which proves unstable and changeable. In addition, t