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Nowadaysitismoreconvenientandeasierforpeopletotraveltoothercountriesisitdevelopmentapositiveornegativeeffect参考范文NeverbeforewastravellingtoaliencountriessoconvenientandpopularasinthiscenturyThisphenomenonispartiallyattributedtoimprovedtechnologyandcheapflightticketsFacingthistravelfrenzysomeareconcernedthatitwillbringabouttoomanysideeffectswhilstothersinsistthatisshouldbesupportedandmaintainedAdmittedlycrossbordertravelhasmoredownsidesthanoneFirstlythecarbondioxideplanesemittedisreportedtobedisproportionatelymorethanthatemittedbyothertransportationmeansThecarbondioxidewillleadtoozonelayerthinningandtherebyincreasetheprobabilityofpeoplecontractingskincancerMoreoverbeingeasierandmoreconvenienttotravelamongcountriesmeansthatsomecriminalscouldfleetoothercountriesaftercommittinghideouscrimeThiswillposeathreattolocalsecurityandcommunitystabilityHoweverthedownsidescannotovershadowitsupsidesForstarterstravellingaroundtheworldwithmoreeasecouldexpandindividualshorizonsandstimulatetheirloveoflifeandtheywillbemoreproductiveatworkinthefutureMoreovercompaniescouldvisitforeignmarketsmoreconvenientlythanbeforeandasaresulttheycouldlocatepotentialtargetmarketandsellgoodsthereorbuymaterialsfromthereifthepriceiscompetitivelyenoughIfacompanycouldflourishthiswayemployeeswillbenefitandthesocietyinwhichcompaniesareoperatingwillbemorestableandharmoniesLastbutnotleastifmoreandmorepeopleareaffordedopportunitiestogotoothercountriestherewillbelessmisunderstandingandmorerespectamongcountriesAllthesewillcontributetoadiversebutharmoniouscultureTosumupdespitethenumerousdrawbacksmentionedabovetravellingtoothercountrieswithmoreconvenienceandeaseisbyandlargeapositivedevelopmentIntroductionRecentyearshavewitnessed背景whichhasarousedaheateddebateofwhether把要讨论的话题引入进来ViewsonthisissuevaryfrompersontopersonFrommypointofviewbeforeairingmyownopinionIdothinkitsnecessarytoanalyzeexplorethisthornyissuefromdifferentanglesbothsidesofthisthornyissueMainbodyThosewho正面观点tendtopresentthefollowingreasonsTobeginwithInadditionWhatsmore尽量用不同的论证方法HoweverotherpeoplemayexamineexplorethisissuefromanotherangleForonethingForanotherthingFurthermoreConclusionInconclusionalthoughitsverydifficulthardtodrawcometoreacharriveatanabsoluteconclusiontothisissueIwouldnothesitatetoassenttotheformerlatterviewpointbecauseImfullyconvincedthat万能开头AsDescartes笛卡尔oncesaidIfyouwouldbearealseekeraftertruthitisnecessarythatatleastonceinyourlifeyoudoubtasfaraspossibleallthings然后后面再加上你自己的模板althoughtheauthorsclaimthatisnotwhollyinsupportableitwouldstillbeamistaketodrawtheconclusiongenerallyInmyobservationChildrenwhogrowupinfamilieswhichareshortofmoneyarebetterpreparedtodealwiththeproblemsofadultlifethanchildrenwhoarebroughtupbywealthyparentsTowhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreeSomefeelthatthechildrenoflowincomefamiliesarebetterequippedtodealwithdifficultiesposedbytherealworldwhentheygrowupandtheyalsobelievetheprivilegedchildrenofwealthyfamiliesarelessfittodealwiththesedifficultiesTheimplicationsandveracityofthisargumentseemselfevidentbutinfactrequirecloserexamination58words点评11模式最后1句为主题句此段的主题句稍微有点特殊它的确否定了前面所提到的观点从而表达出了自己的观点此外还引出了下文特别是最后半句butinfactrequirecloserexamination感觉是在抛砖引玉ThepopularwisdomisthatchildrenofpoorerfamilieslearnearlyonthevalueofabuckandarethusnaturallybettersuitedtostretchingmoneywhentimesgettoughinadulthoodInverselythechildrenofwealthyfamiliesthosebornwithasilverspoonintheirmouthsarebelievedtobecompletelyignorantofthevalueofmoneyhavinghadeverythingprovidedforthemintheiryouthandoftentimeserroneouslyexpectingthesamesituationinadulthoodTheyarebelievedtobepronetooverspendingandfinancialirresponsibilityThisbeliefthoughlogicaloverlooksonekeypointwhichisofcourseeducation100words点评13模式第1句是主题句请注意从此段的内容来看这是个让步段即分析自己并不赞成的观点虽然4段论的作文的主体段是两面讨论但是本人还是喜欢这样的写作即主体段的观点还是有侧重的把让步段放在前面最后1句话引出下一段这样过度地很自然而且自己的观点也比较明确ThebasisofthisargumentisofcourseknowingthevalueofmoneyandtheideathatchildrenofthepoorknowthisandthoseofthewealthydonotWhothoughisinabetterpositiontoteachtheirchildrenthevalueofmoneysomeoneskilledinearningandkeepingitthewealthyparentorsomeonewhocannotseemtoacquireitthepoorparentBothwealthyandpoorchildrenareequallylikelytoacquireaneducationinmoneywhetheritisformalorintheschoolofhardknocksConverselybothchildrenareaslikelytoignorethiseducation101words点评这段的内容感觉写得不够直接还是在分析对方观点的漏洞请注意前面让步段已经这么写过了那么这一段最好是正面地论证自己的观点这样从内容上来说更convincing一点此外需要说明的是大家发现作者的内容还是有一定深度但是这是要有一定的英语功底才行的如果英语功底不行的话建议内容不要写太深因为那样容易造成考官看不懂你在说什么ApoorchildmaybelievethatonecangetalongifnotaseasilywithoutwealthAwealthychildmaybewelltrainedbyaparentsteepedintheknowledgeofmoneymanagementthekeytodevelopingthisskilliseducation点评最后一段有点像是提出解决这个问题的办法即education它没有像传统的结尾段那样简单的重申自己的观点总结之总结全文的观点有待揣摩作者很明显是不赞成题目的说法即Childrenwhogrowupinfamilieswhichareshortofmoneyarebetterpreparedtodealwiththeproblemsofadultlifethanchildrenwhoarebroughtupbywealthyparents但是作者自己是更偏向穷人家的孩子呢还是富人家的孩子呢根据文章来看作者是中立他所看重的是他们所接受的教育Inotherwords整篇文章又是一次中立的写法在雅思考试中这种写法经常使用还是非常实用的大家可以学习一下此外文章中有很多好词好句特别是长句值得模仿一下此篇9分