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串讲资料现象分析型作文的范文三原创转载表明出处一1每年高校许多大学生受到鼓舞去西部贫困地区支教2支教活动的意义3我的看法1WiththedevelopmentofhigheducationthephenomenonofmanycollegegraduatespouringtothewestasvolunteerteachershasbecomeincreasinglypopularnowadaysInonejobmarketbeforeapostboardforrecruitingvolunteerteachersstandsanoceanofcollegegraduateswritingtheirnameseducationalbackgroundsandtheirlikeontheregisterpaperswithmanymorewaitinginalinetojointhemwhichisacommonsceneryinmanycitiesinChinaespeciallytheseyearsTheissuebeingsocommonhastriggeredaheateddiscussionontheWeibo45themostinfluentialsocialmediainChina2ManyprofoundmeaningscanbebroughtbybeingavolunteerteacherwiththefollowingonesbeingtheforemostFirstlybeingavolunteerteacherofthewestcandeepentheirunderstandingoflifeenlargingtheirsocialexperienceandthusenrichingtheirlifecircleSecondlygreatprogressineducationofthewestwillbebroughtsurelybythecollegegraduatesbeingduetotheirrichknowledgeandprofessionalteachingskillswhichwillenhancewestseconomicaldevelopmentatlast二1现在许多传统文化正慢慢消失2传统文化消失的原因3我的看法WiththedevelopmentofeconomythedisappearingofmanytraditionalculturehasbecomeincreasinglyterriblenowadaysBeforeanancientquadranglecourtyardinZhengzhoustandsmanyseniorcitizensangrilyprotestingtheremovalofthecityslastcourtyardwithplentyofjournalistsstandingaroundtophotographandreporttheprotestwhichisacommonsceneryinmanycitesinChinaespeciallythesedaysTheissuebeingsoserioushastriggeredaheateddiscussionontheWeibo45themostinfluentialsocialmediainChinaManyreasonscanaccountforthisphenomenonwiththefollowingonebeingtheforemostFirstlynowadaysespeciallyinthetimesofdevelopingeconomyasthepriorityforthegovernmenttheeducationalabsenceofappreciatingthetraditionalcultureleadstomanyyoungsloseinterestinthetraditionalsymbolicelementsSecondlythetrendofglobalizationbringswesterndevelopedcountriescultureattractpeoplesattentionfromourcountiestraditiontothewest串讲资料现象分析型作文的范文二原创转载表明出处今天大部分同学可能已经知道了自己是哪个考场了如果考场离自己学校比较远的话建议6月6日当晚最好住在考场附近的宾馆里免得第二天堵车这两天郑州各个高考考场周围的宾馆已经开始预订房间了如果不抓紧的话很可能过两天就预订不到房间了如果觉得经济承受不起的话可以几个同学可以合租一个房间彼此间也有个照应大家可以在今天中午空间的说说下边找留下自己的考场学校名第几考场等信息这样就能提前找到6月7日一个战壕里的战友了不早了大家这两天注意调节自己的生物钟早点儿睡就别再熬夜了晚安串讲资料现象分析型作文的范文二原创转载表明出处今天大部分同学可能已经知道了自己是哪个考场了如果考场离自己学校比较远的话建议6月6日当晚最好住在考场附近的宾馆里免得第二天堵车这两天郑州各个高考考场周围的宾馆已经开始预订房间了如果不抓紧的话很可能过两天就预订不到房间了如果觉得经济承受不起的话可以几个同学可以合租一个房间彼此间也有个照应大家可以在今天中午空间的说说下边找留下自己的考场学校名第几考场等信息这样就能提前找到6月7日一个战壕里的战友了不早了大家这两天注意调节自己的生物钟早点儿睡就别再熬夜了晚安1在现代社会城市交通问题变得越来越严重2城市交通问题的表现以及对人们生活所带来的影响3解决的方法与措施1Withthedevelopmentofeconomytheissueofcitytrafficjamshasbecomeincreasinglyseriousnowadays2InthesunshineliesmanycarscreepingasslowasantsonthewideroadswithplentyofthemjammingsteadilyalltogetherwhichisacommonsceneryinmanybigcitiesinChinaespeciallyintheseyears3TheproblembeingsoserioushastriggeredaheateddiscussionontheWeibo45themostinfluentialsocialmediainChina4Theissueleadstomanybadeffectstoourlifewiththefollowingonesbeingtheforemost5Firstlyasweallknoweverydayofourlifeshouldnotbefritteredawayandthetimeshouldbecherishedbutserioustrafficjamwastesourminuteslavisheshoursandevensquandersonewholedaywhichleadstosayitkillsandevenmurdersourprimetime6Secondlytrafficjamleadingtomanyairpollutiongreatlythreatensourhealth二1目前网络教育形成热潮2分析这股热潮的原因3你对网络教育的评价7Withthedevelopmentofeconomytheissueofnetworkeducationhasbecomeincreasinglyseriousnowadays8BeforeacomputersitsseveralstudentslisteninglecturescarefullyonthenetworkeducationwebsiteswiththeirteachersstandingbesidethemandlisteningeagerlyalsowhichisacommonsceneryinmanycollegeshighschoolsinChinaespeciallyintheseyears9TheissuebeingsocommonhastriggeredaheateddiscussionontheWeibo45themostinfluentialsocialmediainChina10Manyreasonscanaccountforthisphenomenonwiththefollowingonesbeingtheforemost11Firstlythenetworkeducationbringinggreatconveniencetomanystudentsespeciallyforthosewholocatesfardistancefromdevelopedregionssavesgreatdealoftimeandgreatlyenhancetheirstudysefficiency12Secondlythenetworkeducationislecturedbythemostprofessionalexpertsofeveryfieldwhichcanbringmoreknowledgeandbroadenstudentshorizonvastly串讲资料现象分析型作文的范文一原创转载表明出处今天晚上把两篇现象分析型的范文放在一起来分析提炼下这类文章的写法现象分析型的文章一般来说第一个提纲是让大家来描写一个现象第二段让大家分析现象出现的原因第三段让大家写如何来解决这类现象按照我们课上讲的方法第一段用数字扩展来写会变得非常简单第二段让写原因我们可以在主题句里阐释说明导致这种现象的一个原因然后后边的扩展句用正反扩展模板来扩展这一个原因就可以了也就是说用正反扩展来写第二段的时候我们只能写一个原因第三段用我们讲过的解决措施万能模板来写会非常简单因为不能剧透所以课上我们讲的这些写法就不能公开在这里了今晚给大家新整理出了一些万能句型和模板是我在课上从来没讲过的供大家参考如果实在掌握不了这篇日志中的写法那就算了一定以课上说的为主先看两篇文章的中文提纲第一篇1近几年出现了大学生就业难的现象2产生这种现象的原因3如何解决这一问题第二篇1在现代社会城市交通问题变得越来越严重2城市交通问题的表现以及对人们生活所带来的影响3解决的方法与措施一两篇文章第一段都是让描写现象除了可以用数字扩展来描写外可以用举例例证的扩展方式来写至于具体如何来举例例证一起来看下我写的两篇文章第一段的范文第一篇1Nowadaysanincreasingnumberofcollegestudentscantfinddecentjobsaftergraduationthephenomenonofwhichhasarousedgreatconcernamongpublic2Inthejobmarketsstaggers蹒跚hundredsofcollegegraduateseagerlylookingfordecentjobswithmanybeingrefusedtogivethemanofferbytheemployerswhichisacommonsceneryinmanybigcitiesespeciallyinthesefewyears3TheproblembeingsoserioushastriggeredaheateddiscussionontheWeibo45themostinfluentialsocialmediainChina现在越来越多的大学生一毕业都找不到体面的工作这个现象引起了公众广泛的关注近几年在中国很多大城市都可以看见很多大学生徘徊在各种人才市场很期待找一份工作但是很多人求职的时候都被拒了这个现象这几年很普遍这个问题如此的严峻已经在微博45中国最有影响力的媒体平台引起了热烈的讨论第二篇8Nowadaysanincreasingnumberofcitesareshortofenergythephenomenonofwhichhasarousedgreatconcernamongpublic9Inagasstationliesplentyofautomobilesincludingpublicbusesengineeringvehiclesprivatescarsandtheirlikeeagerlywaitingforabarrelofgastosupporttheirvehicleswithplentymoreautomobilesliningalongstreamwaitingoutsideofthestationwhichisacommonsceneryinmanybigcitiesespeciallytheseyears10TheproblembeingsoserioushastriggeredaheateddiscussionontheWeibo45themostinfluentialsocialmediainChina现在越来越多的城市能源都短缺这引起了公众广泛的关注近几年在中国很多的大城市都可以看到很多的车辆停在加油站内包括公交车工程车私家车等排着队焦急地为自己的车辆加油还有更多的车排着长长的队伍在加油站外焦急地等待这种现象近几年很普遍这个问题如此的严峻已经在微博45中国最有影响力的媒体平台引起了热烈的讨论第1句和第8句都是主题句模板套出来的这个主题句模板在精讲班里没给大家说过不过在空间的一篇日志里这两篇的第2句和第9句是扩展句是用一个霸气外漏的句型分别列举了两个例子Inthejobmarketsstaggers蹒跚hundredsofcollegegraduateseagerlylookingfordecentjobswithmanybeingrefusedtogivethemanofferbytheemployerswhichisacommonsceneryinmanybigcitiesespeciallyinthesefewyears这个句子如果让大家写肯定这么写TherearehundredsofcollegegraduatesstaggeringinthejobmarketTheyarelookingfordecentjobsButmanyofthemarerefusedtogivethemanofferbytheemployersThisisacommonsceneryinmanybigcitiesespeciallyinthesefewyears也就是说让大家来写大家会把这一个句子用四个独立的句子来表达我们来观察下这四个独立的句子的主语是一样的都是collegegraduates那我们可以尝试着把Therearehundredsofcollegegraduatesstaggersinthejobmarket这个therebe句型的倒装句改成另外一种形式的表系主的倒装句Inthejobmarketsstaggers蹒跚hundredsofcollegegraduates这两个句型怎么转换的知识点在有些班上我说过有些班没讲过所以这个句子可以这么来写Inthejobmarketsstaggers蹒跚hundredsofcollegegraduatesandmanycollegegraduateseagerlylookfordecentjobsbutmanyofthemarerefusedtogivethemanofferbytheemployers也就是说成了连词and和but连接的两个独立的分句学过语法的童鞋都知道第二个句子和第一个句子主语一样可以把第二个句子的主语省略掉第二个句子的谓语动词换成相应的非谓语形式就ok了第三个句子的主语又和第一个第二个句子主语一样第三个句子换成with引导的独立主格结构就可以了所以就变成了Inthejobmarketsstaggers蹒跚hundredsofcollegegraduateseagerlylookingfordecentjobswithmanyofthembeingrefusedtogivethemanofferbytheemployers再在后边加一个万能的非限制性定语从句whichisacommonsenseinmanybigcitiesespeciallyinthesefewyears来修饰前边整个句子就可以了如果大家觉得这个句子特复杂的话那就对了因为在上篇日志里说过独立主格结构和非谓语动词确实比较难不过如果大家真的掌握的话真的是霸气外漏啊相同的变法也适应于9Inagasstationliesplentyofautomobilesincludingpublicbusesengineeringvehiclesprivatescarsandtheirlikeeagerlywaitingforabarrelofgastosupporttheirvehicleswithplentymoreautomobilesliningalongstreamwaitingoutsideofthestationwhichisacommonsceneryinmanybigcitiesespeciallytheseyears具体如何来变在这里就不赘述了其实在近期大家很想知道答案的一个问题的回答这篇日志里用这套组合拳写出了一个句子InthesunshinerunsajoyfulboytightlyholdingsomeEnglishtestpapersofZSBpublishedbysomeEnglishtrainingschoolsyellingexcessivelyexcitedtohisclassmatesigetitigetitfinallyigetitwithallofhisclassmatesboysandgirlssuddenlycrowdingmadlytohimjustforasimpleglimpseofthemysteriouspapersonhishand大家临睡前有兴趣可以分析下用了这么多篇幅给大家写这种写法其实心里怪怪的这毕竟是辛苦研究出来的虽然比较复杂但绝对的霸气外漏本来计划等下一届同学上精讲班的时候再讲给大家的现在公开出来最坏的结果就是大家没学会但是让其他机构同行知道了可真的就剧透了有些基础差的男同学这几天特浮躁平时一点儿都不学习就等着这几天背所谓的押题卷在昨晚的日志里说了几句真话结果引来一些同学的不理解甚至是无端谩骂把这些写法这么详细地公布出来就是想让有些同学知道押题玩的是概率哪怕到了最后一刻我们都应该抓住一切机会接地气地学习这两篇的第3句和第10句都是客套话也是万能的大家可以背一下就ok了二这两篇的第二段都是让分析原因我们一起来对比下第一篇4Manyreasonscanaccountforthisphenomenonwiththefollowingonesbeingtheforemost5Firstlytheknowledgestudentsstudiedincollegeisnotsufficientenoughtosupportdailyworkrequiredbythejob6Secondlysomestudentsarepursuingtoohighagoalwhenseekingforjobs7Theycareaboutvariousfactorssuchassalariesworkingconditionsandsoforthwhichnarrowstheirchoices第二篇11Manyreasonscanaccountforthisphenomenonwiththefollowingonesbeingtheforemost12Firstlythepastdecadeshaswitnessedahugedevelopmentinourcountryseconomywhichboostsenormousdemandofenergysupplies13Secondlyenvironmentprotectionbeingimportantlycrucialfortheharmonioussocietytheauthoritiesenactstrictlawsandregulationstorestrictenergyexplorationandmanufacturinginordertopromotesustainabledevelopment这两段的写法都中规中矩里边也用了一些上课讲的写句子的技巧时间关系就不在这里赘述了下边把这两篇文章的前两段的写法完整给大家罗列出来供大家参考一1近几年出现了大学生就业难的现象2产生这种现象的原因3如何解决这一问题1Nowadaysanincreasingnumberofcollegestudentscantfinddecentjobsaftergraduationthephenomenonofwhichhasarousedgreatconcernamongpublic2Inthejobmarketsstaggers蹒跚hundredsofcollegegraduateseagerlylookingfordecentjobswithmanybeingrefusedtogivethemanofferbytheemployerswhichisacommonsceneryinmanybigcitiesespeciallyinthesefewyears3TheproblembeingsoserioushastriggeredaheateddiscussionontheWeibo45themostinfluentialsocialmediainChina4Manyreasonscanaccountforthisphenomenonwiththefollowingonesbeingtheforemost5Firstlytheknowledgestudentsstudiedincollegeisnotsufficientenoughtosupportdailyworkrequiredbythejob6Secondlysomestudentsarepursuingtoohighagoalwhenseekingforjobs7Theycareaboutvariousfactorssuchassalariesworkingconditionsandsoforthwhichnarrowstheirchoices二1许多城市出现能源短缺现象2分析原因3给出建议8Nowadaysanincreasingnumberofcitesareshortofenergythephenomenonofwhichhasarousedgreatconcernamongpublic9Inagasstationliesplentyofautomobilesincludingpublicbusesengineeringvehiclesprivatescarsandtheirlikeeagerlywaitingforabarrelofgastosupporttheirvehicleswithplentymoreautomobilesliningalongstreamwaitingoutsideofthestationwhichisacommonsceneryinmanybigcitiesespecialtheseyears10TheproblembeingsoserioushastriggeredaheateddiscussionontheWeibo45themostinfluentialsocialmediainChina11Manyreasonscanaccountforthisphenomenonwiththefollowingonesbeingtheforemost12Firstlythepastdecadeshaswitnessedahugedevelopmentinourcountryseconomywhichboostsenormousdemandofenergysupplies13Secondlyenvironmentprotectionbeingimportantlycrucialfortheharmonioussocietytheauthoritiesenactstrictlawsandregulationstorestrictenergyexplorationandmanufacturinginordertopromotesustainabledevelopmenthttp1254628164zkz2013160另外登陆网址http1254628164zkz2013输入自己的身份证号准考证号报名序号可以查询自己的考场及座位号考点名称考点地址等信息晚安