常考题型08书信之申请信和推荐信
2023-2024学年中考英语书面表达素材考点纲目
申请信
写作方法:
由于此类题目常有较多的文字提示,写作时除了应注意格式上的要求,还应注意审题全面,不能遗漏要点,并要注意人称和时态的变化,避免出现逻辑混乱,可以遵循“三段法”来写作。
第一段,简要说明信息来源,并陈述自己能胜任;
第二段,突出自己的特点,具体说明能胜任的原因,
第三段,请求尽快答复并给予机会。
【模板范文】
(2023·陕西西安·西安行知中学校考模拟预测)2022年第24届冬奥会在北京成功举办,我国热情友好、乐于助人的志愿者也得到了世界各地人民的好评。第19届亚运会(the 19th Asian Games)将于2023年9月23日在杭州举办。假设你是王鹏,你想成为本次亚运会的一名志愿者。请根据下列要求,从结构图的三个方面,用英语写一封自荐信。
参考词汇:be proud of, happy, be good at, communicate, help, experience, practise, training...
要求:
1. 可选择使用参考词汇,亦可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文章不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于70词。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Wang Peng. I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer for the 19th Asian Games.
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Wang Peng
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Wang Peng. I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer for the 19th Asian Games.
I want to be a volunteer because I like to help people, and would like to do something I can for the 19th Asian Games. I have some advantages that would help me be a good volunteer. First, I am a careful boy and I can do everything quickly and correctly. Second, I treat everyone equally and I am very friendly, so I can get on well with everyone. Third, I am good at English so I can communicate with most foreign athletes. If I become a volunteer, I will work hard and do everything well.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Wang Peng
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“想成为志愿者的原因,优势以及自己的打算”,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“我叫王鹏。”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“想要成为志愿者的原因,自己的优势以及自己的打算”重点介绍我的具体情况;
第三步,书写结语。表达“我期待着你的答复。”的强烈愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① be good at擅长
② get on well with与……相处融洽
[高分句型]
① I want to be a volunteer because I like to help people, and would like to do something I can for the 19th Asian Games.(because引导的原因状语从句)
② If I become a volunteer, I will work hard and do everything well.(if引导的条件状语从句)
推荐信
写作方法:
第一步,自我介绍并说明推荐的人物,说明写信的目的;
第二步,介绍被推荐者,说明推荐理由;
第三步,表示谢意,期待对方回复。
【模板范文】
(2023·重庆沙坪坝·重庆八中校考模拟预测)阅读沁润人心,启智增慧,我们的书香校园处处飘香,风景独好。一年一度的“书香班级(Literary Class)”评选活动于本周正式拉开帷幕。假如你是一班班长李华,请你代表班级写一封参评推荐信,谈谈你们班书香教室的布置、班级师生对书籍的热爱与良好的阅读习惯,以及阅读给大家带来的益处。
要求:
字数不少于80词,文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
参考信息:
1.书香教室布置(a reading corner; a wall newspaper …)
2.班级阅读热情与习惯(bookcrossing(漂书); group discussions…)
3.阅读益处(……)
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua from Class One. I am writing to recommend my class to be the “Literary Class”,
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【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua from Class One. I am writing to recommend my class to be the “Literary Class”,
There is a reading corner in our class, and there are different kinds of books so that students can read any time. There is also a wall newspaper. There are some calligraphy tablets there. We often read books three times a week and we often work group to discuss what we have read. There is also bookcrossing, which enables us to read different kinds of books.
Reading has a lot of benefits. It can open up our eyes because books are full of knowledge, and it makes us wiser in life.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据题干中的提示内容推荐自己班级为“书香班级”,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,介绍自己班书香教室的布置、班级阅读热情与习惯;
第三步,介绍阅读的益处。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of各种各样的
②enable sb. to do sth.使某人能够做某事
③be full of充满
[高分句型]
①There is a reading corner in our class, and there are different kinds of books so that students can read any time.(so that引导的目的状语从句)
②We often read books three times a week and we often work group to discuss what we have read.(what引导的宾语从句)
③There is also bookcrossing, which enables us to read different kinds of books.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【真题再现】
A
(2022·四川眉山·统考中考真题)
本周日上午,一些外国学生将到三苏祠参观,现三苏祠急需招募十名志愿者。假定你是李华,请写一封电子邮件推荐自己。要点包括:
1. 自荐目的:成为志愿者;
2. 个人信息:身份,年龄,性格(外向、善于与人相处),本周日上午有空;
3. 个人优势:擅长英语,……;
4. 表达期望:获得机会并能做好,请本周五前回复。
注意:
1. 词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
参考词汇:三苏祠Sansu Temple
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am glad to see your notice Volunteers Wanted. Some foreign students
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am glad to see your notice Volunteers Wanted. Some foreign students will visit Sansu Temple this Sunday morning. I’m willing to be a volunteer.
Let me introduce myself to you. I’m a middle school student aged 15. I’m an outgoing girl/boy who can always get on well with others. As for the time, I will be available this Sunday morning. My oral English is so excellent that I have no difficulty communicating with foreign friends. More importantly, I know a lot about Sansu culture. I’m sure I can help them have a better understanding of it.
I believe I can manage it if you give me a chance. Please reply to me by Friday!(103 words)
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示内容,写封邮件自荐成为三苏祠的志愿者,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍自荐的目的,自己的信息和优势,以及自己的期望。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
B
(2023·湖南湘潭·统考中考真题)
湘潭市博物馆正在为“讲好湘潭故事,传播本土文化”的大型宣传活动招募英语讲解员。假设你是李华,你想参加此次活动,请根据以下提示用英语向活动负责人写一封自荐信。
要点提示:
(1)个人基本情况(姓名、年龄等);
(2)自荐的原因(性格、特长等);
(3)对活动的认知(感想或意义等)。
注意:
(1)字数在80词左右,可适当发挥(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)不能出现可能透露真实身份的任何信息(如校名,个人姓名等)。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’d like to be a volunteer in this “Telling Xiangtan Stories, Spreading Local Culture” activity.
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