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1中考书面表达解题技巧和专项训练18中考写作主要考查学生能否比较得体的表述个人的见解和想法是否具有清晰地描述事物和过程的能力近年来它以考生熟悉的生活题材为主给考生一定的思维空间只有掌握它的解题技巧才能做到有的放矢有备无患1写作前要做好两备捕捉信息包括材料提示写作要求文体和词数等列好提纲把所写的内容理清思路列成若干条选好要用的人称时态和词语2写作中要做到三要书写要规范认真句子要多用熟悉的符合英文习俗不熟悉的词语要用同近义句替换3写完后要做到四查查内容是否符合题意查句子是否流畅通顺查语法是否有错误包括时态语态单词拼写大小写和标点等查词数是否符合要求个案分析假设你叫李磊请你针对这封信的内容给这位父亲写封回信谈谈你的看法要求条例清楚语义连贯句式规范字迹工整词数80左右DeareditorImsorrytotroubleyouIhaveadaughterSheis13yearsoldShelikesmakingtelephonecallsAssoonashegetsbackfromschoolshepicksupthetelephoneandcallsherclassmatesShetalksandtalkssometimesfor2or3hoursWecantuseitItellhimnottodoitbutsheisunhappyWhatshouldIdoAworriedfather步步点拨本文主要谈如何纠正孩子爱打电话的问题属于学生比较熟悉的话题本文的格式是书信特别要求学生注意称呼正文结束语和署名问题的解决可从内因和外因两个方面出发内因可以从学生的天职是学习去谈外因可以去找老师找同学的家长帮忙也可以为她安装上部电话让她付话费本文属于论述文要求在文章中有明确的观点并用事例论证例文品读DearSirDontworryYoucanhaveawordwithherandtellherwhattodoAsastudentshemustputherheartintothestudyMakingtelephonestoomuchisbadforherstudyIfshegoesondoingityoucantellittoherteachersIthinktheycanhelpyouYoucanalsofindoutwhomyourdaughtercallsupYoumayasktheirparentsforhelpYoumaybuyatelephoneforherShecanmaketelephonecallswithherowntelephonebutshemustpayforitbyherselfYoursLiLeiLinPing2书面表达专项训练一记叙文ADearThankYouforYourLove提示在你的成长过程中得到了家人老师及朋友的关爱你一定对他们心存感激请你补全题目如DearMumThankYouforYourLove用英语写一篇短文叙述他们所做的一件令你深深感动的事情并表达你的感激之情要求1根据所给题目写一篇短文2词数不少于60个3语言流畅书写规范卷面整洁文中不得使用真实人名校名否则以零分计B一说到考试同学们总有讲不完的故事在你的记忆中那些发生在考场内外的故事一定有使你至今感慨难忘的吧请以考试为话题写一篇题为难忘的的短文以下提示词语可能对你有帮助可根据需要选用注意字左右请不要使用真实姓名和所在学校名称C你班班委会决定将于6月18日上午举行初三离校前的最后一次班级活动假如你是班长请你根据表格中的活动内容用英语写一篇短文向你班外籍老师汇报这次活动的安排短文的开头和结尾己给出时间内容8009001谈谈长大后你想做什么2谈谈如何过暑假390010101唱歌跳舞2表演短剧3其它101011001打扫教室2修理桌椅3其它110011301拍照2互留电话号码地址3其它说明1请自行设计表格中其它的内容所设计的内容必须具体合理2要求语言连贯条理清楚3词数70左右不包括已给出的短文的开头和结尾OurclassisgoingtohaveafarewellpartyonthemorningofJune18D昨天小华骑自行车上学过马路闯红灯时被一辆出租车撞倒被警察送去医院老师和同学们听到这个坏消息放学后去看望他他很高兴见到老师和同学他说我知道我错了我以后会遵守obey交通规则Xiaohuawenttoschoolbybikeyesterday二议论文E在一堂英语课上老师组织全班同学开展有关做家务的讨论假如以下是你所做的小组讨论记录请你根据这个记录用英语想全班做一个汇报NameHouseworkWuJunCleanuproomsJiaMeiHelpmuchcookdinnerWangPingWashclothesI提示1汇报内容你和你同学所做的家务活你对做家务活的看法2所写单词数在80个左右3汇报的开头和结尾已给出不记入总词数4DearclassGoodmorningNowletmereportthediscussionworkinourgroupThatsallThanksforlisteningF家庭作业是老师家长和学生共同关心的事情在某校的一次班会上就这个问题进行了热烈的讨论出现了下面两种观点观点支持理由作业过多有益可以复习学过的内容可以练习老师在课堂上讲的内容可以开阔思路可以弥补老师没讲到的内容作业过多有害老师应该教给学生怎样学怎样理解不能休息好作业是一种消极的学习要占用许多时间假设你是班主任写一个总结发言并提出自己的建议做适当的作业还是有必要有作用的参考词汇passive消极的suitable适当的三说明文G6月6日是全国爱眼日NationalEyesCaringDay请根据以下提示写出一份宣传稿让全校的学生关爱自己的眼睛题目已给出要求1词数50802书写规范语句通顺行文流畅结构完整语法正确内容需包括以下要点1爱眼日主题为保护视力2保护视力对中学生很重要3视力不好会给生活和学习带来不便4呼吁同学们都养成良好的用眼习惯以保护视力提示词语视力eyesight主题topicLoveYourselfLoveYourEyesH5阅读理解电视广告词Ifwedidntsavewaterthelastdropofwaterwouldbeourteardrop根据提示写一篇60词左右的短文提示1生活离不开水2水污染严重3应该保护水源节约用水I星期五上午830全市初三年级将进行英语测试你班的英语教师Smith临时有事请你替她在班上作一些事项交代要点如下1这次英语测试非常重要2作好考试的各项准备不要睡得太晚千万不要迟到3做题时一定要看清题目的要求书写要清楚4老师希望大家考出好成绩5要求不要逐句翻译字数6080你要讲的首句话已给出FellowstudentsMayIhaveyourattentionpleaseJ小明和小华是在手拉手活动中结成的一对学习伙伴前不久小明来信向小华询问如何学好英语请你以小华的名义给他写封回信内容包括1学习英语的基本方法listencarefullyspeakmuchreadwidelylearnbyheartpractisewriting2你的体会和其他建议词数80词左右信的开头与结尾已为你写好不计入总词数DearXiaoMingImgladtoreceiveyourletterInyourletteryouaskedmeabouthowtolearnEnglishwellK请以Believeyourselfandyouwillwin为题写一篇自己在学习或生活中遇到的并战胜困难的短文要求切合题意内容完整表达清楚书写规范提示1你6遇到了什么困难2你是如何克服困难的3你从中体会到什么四应用文L丰富多彩的暑假生活即将开始了快约上几个好朋友一起去旅行吧假设你是马琳请你通过email的方式对你的朋友张鹏发出邀请组织好这次旅行提示1对他发出邀请2你的计划简介包括活动内容目的时间地点等等3提醒他需要准备的东西4约定出发时间和见面地点5字数80100词6开头和结尾已给出不包括在所要求的字数内HiZhangPengIhopeallisgoingwellHopetoseeyousoonSincerelyyoursMaLinM假如你叫杨明今天头疼咳嗽发烧妈妈要带你去医院看病不能上学特想你的班主任吴老师请假请根据上面的提示写一份30词左右的请假条注意请假条的格式N假定你是第一中学三年二班的高峰6月27日你不慎将带有棕色小猴饰物的钥匙丢在操场上请以高峰的名义写一则30词左右的寻物启事LostJune26thGaoFeng7O假如你的名字叫Mike今天在网上看到下面这则征笔友Penpal的帖子请根据帖子内容写一封词数为5070的回信要求1表达交友愿望2陈述交友理由3提供个人信息注意文章的开头和结尾已给出不计入总词数写作时要求衔接过渡自然PostPenpalwanted14or15yrsoldPostedbyKaylaon6210HelloIam14yrsoldMynameisKaylaMybirthdayisMay13IliketoreadclimbtreesdomathsandIliketowatchfootballgamesIloveEnglishandIwantmorechancestotouchitIthinkIneedtodowhatIliketodoIdliketohaveapenpalwhohasdifferenthobbiesfrommesothatwecanlearnfromeachotherPleasewritetomeMyemailaddressiskaylahotmailcomThanksKayla收件人Tokaylahotmailcom抄送CcNone主题SubjectRePenpalwantedHelloKaylaBestwishesMikeP下面描述的是200年5月15日周三晴天你的一次经历请根据其内容用英语写一篇80词左右的日记日记的开头格式已给出不计入文章总词数注意要点完整语法正确上下文连贯并适当发挥要点1下午放学后2爸爸出差妈妈生病卧床3照顾妈妈送医院买药煮饭洗衣服等等4后来受父母表扬5该经历对自己的感触May15200WednesdayFine8Q假如你是班长请参考图中信息写一则口头通知SomethingtosayamatchwithClass4excitingwelcomeencouragewinthefirstplaceagoodtime要求1短文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校2可用所给信息也可适当发挥3词数6080词五看图作文R很多父母希望孩子将时间都花在学习上假如你是图中的学生根据图示将昨天下午放学回家后发生的事情和你的想法用英语简述词数60左右文章开头已给出不计入总词数注意不得用真实姓名和校名YesterdayafternoonIwenthomeafterschool9KeyADearMumThankyouforYourLoveDearmumIalwaysfeelIamtheluckiestchildinthewor1dbecauseIhaveyouasmymumYouaresuchagreatparentIstillrememberthedaywhenIfailedmymathsexamIwassofrustratedwhenIgothomeYouwerenotangrywithmeInsteadyoupraisedmeformyhardworkandencouragedmetokeeponTearscameintomyeyeswhenyoutookmeinyourarmIcametoknowhowmuchyouBCOurclassisgoingtohaveafarewellpartyontheroomingofJune18At800welltalkaboutWhatareyougoingtobewhenyougrowupAfterthatwewilldiscussourplanforthesumm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