期中书面表达专项练习A假如你叫李华你在给你的efriendSam写一封邮件谈及你和父母就学生该不该与同学在周末外出活动进行的讨论请以Shouldteenagersgooutwithfriendsatweekends为主题参照表中所提供的信息完成这封邮件YourparentsideasYourideas1读书做作业1和同学外出活动2好好上床休息一下2外出活动也是一种调节和放松3考试分数marks最重要34帮助父母做家务活4要求1所写内容要包括表内信息2表中Yourideas中的34两个观点由你对应做出合理的说明还可适当发挥你父母和你的另外12个观点3字数为110词左右DearSamHowiseverythinggoingwithyouIhadadiscussionwithmyparentsrecentlyWetalkedaboutifteenagerscangooutwithfriendsatweekendsWhatsyourideaabouttheproblemImlookingforwardtoyourreplyYoursLiHuaMyparentsdontagreewithmeTheythinkweteenagersshouldreadmorebooksandspendenoughtimedoingourhomeworkTheythinkmarksintheexaminationarethemostimportantforusWhenwefeeltiredweshouldhaveabettersleepinbedSotheydontwantustoplayoutwithfriendsTheyalsothinkffwehavefreetimeweshouldhelpparentsdohouseworkathomeButIthinkteenagersshouldgooutwithourfriendsonweekendsLessonsarentouronlyworkWecanlearnalotfromouractivitiesandIbelievegoingoutisalsorestingandrelaxingtooItcangiveusmoreenergyforourstudyOfcourseifwehavemoresparetimeweshouldhelpparentsdohouseworkIhopeparentsgiveusmoresparetimeandwealsoneedthefreeskyofourownB2018年10月25日中国著名主持人李咏离世享年50岁得知这个消息许多观众和网友感到震惊和悲伤假如你是英语教师请用英文向你学生简单介绍李咏以表怀念整体介绍李咏1968年出生于新疆1991年毕业于中国传媒大学后工作与中央电视台是中国著名的主持人工作他诙谐幽默精力充沛深受大家欢迎对自己严格要求注意每个细节自拟生活最喜爱绿色爱好广泛擅长体育运动关爱他人但由于工作太忙没时间陪伴女儿自拟你的想法注意1表达中必须包含所给的要点可是适当发挥不要简单翻译2词数100左右开头已经写好不计入总词数3表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名备注主持人anchorman中国传媒大学CommunicationUniversityofChina中央电视台CCTV主持hostImsorrytotellyouthatmyfavouriteanchormanLiYonghaspassedawayinAmericaNowletmetellyousomethingabouthimLiYongwhowasborinXinjiangin1968graduatedfromCommunicationUniversityofChinain1991AfterthathejoinedCCTVasawriteranddirectorHewasafamousanchormaninChinaLiwassohumorsandenergeticthathewasverypopularamongthepeopleHewasverystrictwithhimselfandpaidattentiontoeverydetailHeworkedtohighstandardsandwasknownforhiseasygoingstylewhilehehostedseveralshowsincludingLucky52ASpecialSixPlusOneaswellasthetalkshowYongLeHuiHelovedgreenbecauseitsanenergeticcolourItrepresentsnewlifebecauseitisthecolourofnatureHehadmanyhobbiessuchassinginganddancingHeespeciallydidwellinsportsHecaredforothersHewastoobusywithhisworktostaywithhisdaughterAccordingtothenewsabouthimIrealizedthathehadaheartfullofloveLisdeathisnotonlyagreatlossforhisfamilybutalsoforthepeoplewholovehimYouwillnotfindanythingspecialabouthimuntilyoulearnmoreC根据下面提示以Mycousin为题介绍你的表弟刘昊性格自信从不害怕在众多人面前演讲有爱心捐钱给需要的人喜爱的颜色橙色让人振奋绿色让人感到精力充沛座右铭高矮胖瘦并不重要如果你永不言弃你可以做任何事情问题不擅长运动对体重不满意父母太在意分数压力过大你的建议针对刘昊的问题提出两至三条建议要求1短文应包括所给内容要点可适当发挥使文章连贯2词数90左右短文开头已给出不计入总词数3短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名校名等信息MycousinLiuHaoismycousinWeareinthesameschoolMycousinHeissoconfidentthatheisneverafraidofmakingaspeechinfrontofmanypeopleHealsohasaheartfullloveandgiveshismoneytopeopleinneedOrangeandgreenareLiuHaosfavouritecoloursWhenheissadorangecamcheerhimupGreenrepresentsnatureandwearinggreencanmakehimenergeticHismottoisthatsizeandbodytypedoesntmatteryoucandoanythingifyounevergiveupHoweverhehassomeproblemsHeisntgoodatsportsandunhappywithhisweightHisparentscaretoomuchabouthismarkssohealwaysfeelsstressedAsformehecantryhisbestinPEclassandenjoytheexerciseTakingmoreexerciseswithhisfriendsandeatingfewersnacksarealsogoodwaystokeephisweightInadditionhehadbettertalktohisparentsabouthisstressandsharehisproblemswithhisgoodfriendsD学校电台要选举一名主持人host你准备推荐Nancy请写一份推荐信给校长100词左右姓名Nancy出生地点江苏盐城出生时间2月12日性格活泼幽默很可爱喜爱的颜色黄色因为黄色能带给她温暖和智慧才能声音甜美曾于去年担任学校时装表演节目主持人汉语和英语的口头表达能力强在众人面前讲话不胆怯10thOctoberDearMrWangYourssincerely10thOctorberDearMrWangIamwritingtorecommendNancyasthehostoftheschoolradiostationIthinkshehasmanystrongqualitiesforthispositionShewasborninthecityofYanchnegJiangsuHerdateofbirthisonthetwelfthofFebruarySheisveryactiveShealwaystakespartinallkindsofschoolactivitiesShehasagoodsenseofhumourSheoftentellsusfunnystoriesandmakesusalllaughWeneverfeelboredwhensheiswithusSheisverylovelyAlltheteachersandstudentslikeherShelikesyellowbestAsyellowisthecolourofthesunanditisalsothecolourofwisdomYellowcanbringherwarmthandwisdomShelooksgoodinyellowclothesHervoiceisverysweetSheusedtobethehostoftheschoolfashionshowlastyearItwasabigsuccessSheisgoodatcommunicatingwithothersinChineseandEnglishSheisneverafraidofmakingaspeechinfrontofmanypeopleSheisveryconfidentIthinkNancyisthemostsuitablepersontobethehostIhopethatyoucanagreewithmeYourssincerelyE根据下列提示以ThePersonWhoHasInfluencedMeMost为题写一篇短文90词左右1对我影响最大的是我的妈妈她将近四十岁在当地一家银行工作2她总是全家起得最早睡得最晚的人操持家里的一切家务3她很有爱心只要有多余时间就会去界院做志愿者或4我认为ThePersonWhoHasInfluencedMeMostMymotheristhepersonwhohasinfluencedmemostSheisnearlyfortyyearsoldandworksinalocalbankSheisalwaysthefirsttogetupandthelasttogotobedinmyfamilyShehastodoallthehouseworkMymotherisfullofloveWhenevershehassometimeleftshemillalwaysworkasavolunteerinthehospitalorvisitthechildrenwhohavelosttheirparentsSheoftenmakeseveryefforttohelpchildreninneedIthinkmymotheristhegreatestpersonintheworldandIwillfollowherexampleandhelppeoplewhoneedhelpF中学生在成长过程中经常会碰到一些烦恼假设你是李华请根据下表提示用英语写一篇发言稿在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法你的烦恼你的做法个头不高相貌平常体重不满意不知如何改变不必在意相信自己父母不理解要求严格父母太忙没有时间陪自己学会沟通友善待人朋友少孤独学习压力大课外活动少作业多经常熬夜学习无暇顾及个人爱好充足睡眠计划每一天自主发挥至少两点要求1词数90左右开头及结尾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