专题01 投稿正文
Passage 1
假定你是李华,你校外教David正在策划一场英语辩论赛,现向同学们征集辩题。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 提供辩论题目;
2. 说明选题理由。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
Hoping this email finds you well. It would be delightful if my suggestions for the debate competition could help.
I propose "Social Media - Pros or Cons" as the topic. Given the significance of social media, this topic will spark insightful discussions on its impact and consequences, encouraging exploration of various perspectives. Apart from regular arguments presenting and debating rounds, I suggest introducing an "Audience Questions" session to create an interactive atmosphere.
The topic and novel session will hopefully make the event educational and engaging. Best wishes for organizing it!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你校外教David正在策划一场英语辩论赛,现向同学们征集辩题这一情况,给他写一封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
令人愉快的:delightful→ enjoyable
建议:suggestion → advice
各种各样的:various→ all kinds of
除了,此外:Apart from→ In addition to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Given the significance of social media, this topic will spark insightful discussions on its impact and consequences, encouraging exploration of various perspectives.
拓展句:Given the significance of social media, this topic will spark insightful discussions on its impact and consequences, which can encourage exploration of various perspectives.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It would be delightful if my suggestions for the debate competition could help.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句。)
【高分句型2】Given the significance of social media, this topic will spark insightful discussions on its impact and consequences, encouraging exploration of various perspectives.(非谓语动词中的现在分词作状语。)
Passage 2
同普通话一样,地方方言也是我们中华文化的重要组成部分。请你以“Protect And Pass On Our Dialects”为题写一篇短文向你校英语报文化专栏投稿,内容包括:
1. 地方方言的发展现状;
2. 地方方言的重要作用;
3. 呼吁大家保护地方方言。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:普通话 mandarin
Protect And Pass On Our Dialects
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【答案】
Protect And Pass On Our Dialects
Recent years have witnessed that fewer and fewer young people are capable of speaking their dialects. Dialects are facing challenges and losing ground gradually.
While mandarin is crucial for most Chinese people, the significance of local dialects is undeniable. Actually, not only are dialects communication tools, but they also play a very important role in cultural heritage, representing our roots and history. Furthermore, it is dialects that contribute to the diversity of cultures in different regions.
Therefore, it is high time that dialects should be preserved so that they can be heard by the next generations. Let’s embrace and celebrate the diversity of our dialects, ensuring their survival for generations to come.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“Protect And Pass On Our Dialects”为题写一篇短文向你校英语报文化专栏投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的:crucial→vital
无可争辩的:undeniable→incontestable
庆祝:celebrate→observe
确保:ensure→make sure
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Recent years have witnessed that fewer and fewer young people are capable of speaking their dialects. Dialects are facing challenges and losing ground gradually.
拓展句:Dialects are facing challenges and losing ground gradually because recent years have witnessed that fewer and fewer young people are capable of speaking their dialects.
【点睛】[高分句型1] While mandarin is crucial for most Chinese people, the significance of local dialects is undeniable. (运用了while引导让步状语从句)
[高分句型2] Let’s embrace and celebrate the diversity of our dialects, ensuring their survival for generations to come. (运用了现在分词作状语)
Passage 3
你校英文报社正在组织以“感恩(Gratitude)、独立(Independence)、青春(Youth)”为关键词的征稿活动,请你结合自己经历,选择至少一个关键词投稿表达自己对高中生活的感悟。
注意:
1.将题目补充完整:
2.词数100词左右。
_____: the key word (s) of my high school life
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【答案】Sample 1:
Gratitude and youth: the key word(s) of my high school life
My high school life is so fascinating that it is beyond the description. Nothing can represent it better than “gratitude” and “youth”.
The first day of my high school is still fresh in my mind. With youth and ignorance, I was completely at a loss and had nothing to expect. I cannot imagine how long this phenomena would last, which upset me seriously. It was the teachers’ and classmates’ concern that led me out of the initial confusion. Gradually, I deeply realize that my high school life is full of brilliant sunshine. The journey from confusion to getting the direction to persist in has taught me a lot. That is, youth lives for diligence and we should always be grateful!
There is no youth without diligence, and gratitude makes my school life full of sunshine.
Sample 2:
When it comes to my high school life, nothing can be better than “youth” and “gratitude” to describe it.
The first day of my high school is still fresh in my mind. With passion and dream, I entered the promising campus, seeing faces full of youth and energy. Hopefully, my heart was full of strength of striving for my dreams. However, youth can also have confusion. I remember once I failed the exam and felt so disappointed that I even couldn’t cheer up for long. It was the teachers’ and classmates’ help and concern that pulled me out of the dilemma. With encouragement and gratitude, I’ve been working hard to make progress.
Cherishing youth and learning gratitude, I believe I will achieve my dream.
Sample 3:
Independence: the key word(s) of my high school life
Before high school, I lived a sheltered life, with my parents taking care of most things. However, as I entered high school, a boarding one, I had to adapt to a new environment and way of life, which forced me to become self-reliant.
With less supervision, I had to learn to manage my time effectively. Creating a study schedule and sticking to it helped me keep organized. Besides, learning to make decisions was another challenge: Which subject to choose? Whether to join a club? I had to consider my preferences and interests. Making these choices allowed me to discover who I was and what I was passionate about, which furthered my personal growth.
As a conclusion, high school is a transformative period when I developed a sense of independence. It teaches me invaluable skills that I will carry through to my future life.
【导语】本文是一篇报社征稿。要求考生表达对自己高中生活的感悟。考生需要扣题,把“感恩(Gratitude)、独立(Independence)、青春(Youth)”三个关键词囊括在文中,还需要添加适合细节使文章真实自然。
【详解】1. 词汇积累:
受保护的:sheltered → protected/guarded
监督:supervision → oversight/monitoring
困境:dilemma → predicament/puzzle
感激:appreciation → gratitude/acknowledgment
2. 句式拓展:
简单句变复合句
原句:With passion and dream, I entered the promising campus, seeing faces full of youth and energy.
拓展句:When I entered the promising campus with passion and dream, I saw faces full of youth and energy.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It was the teachers’ and classmates’ concern that led me out of the initial confusion. (it was...that引导的强调句型)
【高分句型2】Cherishing youth and learning gratitude, I believe I will achieve my dream.(现在分词作伴随状语)
【高分句型3】Making these choices allowed me to discover who I was and what I was passionate about, which furthered my personal growth.(who和what引导的宾语从句,which引导的定语从句)
Passage 4
你校正在组织以旅游为主题的英语作文比赛。请你以“一次旅游经历”为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1.叙述旅游经历;
2.表达感受。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.短文题目已为你写好。
A memorable trip
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【答案】
A memorable trip
I had always wanted to visit the Great Wall, and I was finally able to make my dream come true last summer.
I took a bus from my home town to Badaling, which is the most popular tourist destination. The Great Wall is so huge and so well-preserved. I was really impressed. I also enjoyed the hiking on the Great Wall. The views from the wall was breathtaking. I could see for miles in every direction.
I had a great time on my trip to the Great Wall. It was an unforgettable experience that I will cherish forever.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“一次旅游经历”为题,写一篇短文参加学校组织的以旅游为主题的英语作文比赛。内容包括:
1.叙述旅游经历;
2.表达感受。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
实现,成真:come true→come into reality
珍惜:cherish → treasure
参观:visit→pay a visit to
景点:tourist destination→ tourist attraction/place of interest
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I could see for miles in every direction.
拓展句:It is amazing that I could see for miles in every direction.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I took a bus from my home town to Badaling, which is the most popular tourist destination.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】It was an unforgettable experience that I will cherish forever.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
Passage 5
你校英文报将以“志愿同行, 点亮青春”为主题,举办英语征文比赛,请你写一篇短文投稿,介绍自己曾参加过的一项志愿活动,内容包括:
1. 志愿活动简介;
2. 意义和启示。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】During my winter vacation, I worked as a volunteer tour guide at a history museum.
My main responsibility was to introduce the history of each exhibit, using clear and engaging language to vividly convey the intended allusions. When telling the stories for each exhibit, I paid special attention to cultural differences to foster a better understanding for visitors from various countries.
This tour guide role not only enriched my knowledge of national history, but also helped shape my passions and values. In addition to personal growth, volunteering shows that even small efforts can have a significant impact on many people. The world can be transformed through our choices, acts of kindness and engagement in volunteer activities.
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于记叙文。要求考生以“志愿同行, 点亮青春”为主题,写一篇短文投稿,介绍自己曾参加过的一项志愿活动,参加英语征文比赛。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
假期:vacation→holiday
不同的:various→different
帮助:help→assist
影响:impact→influence
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:When telling the stories for each exhibit, I paid special attention to cultural differences to foster a better understanding for visitors from various countries.
拓展句:When I told the stories for each exhibit, I paid special attention to cultural differences to foster a better understanding for visitors from various countries.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When telling the stories for each exhibit, I paid special attention to cultural differences to foster a better understanding for visitors from various countries. (运用了状语从句中的省略)
【高分句型2】This tour guide role not only enriched my knowledge of national history, but also helped shape my passions and values. (运用了not only…but also连接谓语)
Passage 6
Teens正在就我国社会老龄化越来越严重的问题举办征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1.关爱老人的原因;2.关爱老人的方式;3.倡议大家共同关爱老人。
注意:字数100左右。
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【答案】 As the aging population in our society grows, it’s crucial to show love and respect to our elders. They have contributed significantly to our society and deserve our care.
There are various ways to show love and care for the elderly. Firstly, we can visit them regularly, listen to their stories, and spend time with them. Secondly, we can provide practical help, such as assisting with daily tasks, providing transportation, or offering medical support. Additionally, we can also support policies and programs that benefit the elderly, such as pensions and healthcare.
I urge everyone to join hands in showing love and care for our elderly. By doing so, we can create a warmer and more harmonious society.
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇短文投稿,陈述关爱老人的原因、关爱老人的方式,并倡议大家共同关爱老人。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
增加:grow→increase
重要的:crucial→important/essential/vital
各种各样的:various→a variety of/all kinds of
提供:provide→offer
此外:additionally→in addition
2. 句式拓展
简单句改为倒装句
原句:By doing so, we can create a warmer and more harmonious society.
拓展句:Only by doing so can we create a warmer and more harmonious society.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As the aging population in our society grows, it’s crucial to show love and respect to our elders.(使用了As引导时间状语从句、it is+adj.+to do…句型)
【高分句型2】Additionally, we can also support policies and programs that benefit the elderly, such as pensions and healthcare. (使用了that引导定语从句)
Passage 7
你校正举办主题为“A Cool Try!”的英语征文活动。请你以自身经历写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 简述尝试的过程;
2. 收获或感想。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
A Cool Try!
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