推荐信
1.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你班的交换生Jim对中国文学作品感兴趣,准备下学期选修一门相关课程, 向你征询建议。请给Jim写一封邮件, 内容包括:
1. 推荐一门选修课;
2. 说明推荐的理由;
3. 提出学习这门课程的建议。
注意: 1. 词数 80 左右;
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
2.假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Mary对中国民歌很感兴趣,想请你推荐你最喜欢的歌曲。请你给她写一封邮件。内容包括:
1.你最喜爱的中国民歌,如《好一朵美丽的茉莉花》(Jasmine);
2.推荐的理由。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头及结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:民歌folk song
Dear Mary,
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Yours,
Li Hua
3.假设你是李华。你校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即,作为俱乐部负责人,你给Jim写一封电子邮件,请他推荐一名外籍指导教师,内容包括:
1. 阐明写信事由;2. 条件及要求;3. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
注意:1. 词数不少于50;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Christina,
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Yours,
Li Hua
4.假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom准备拍摄一个“Hello, China”的短视频。他写信请你帮忙策划主题,使视频更好体现中国元素。请你用英文写一封回信,内容包括:
1. 拍摄主题;
2. 推荐原因;
3 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
5.假如你是李华,正在准备就某一话题作英文演讲。请给你的英语老师Mr. Green 写一封信,希望得到他的帮助。内容包括:
1. 演讲的主题;
2. 演讲的目的;
3. 具体帮助(如推荐书籍等)。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
6.假定你是李华,得知你的外国笔友Henry对中国美食非常感兴趣。请根据以下写作提示,用英语给他写一封邮件。内容包括:
1.介绍中国食物的特点;
2.推荐一种受欢迎的中国美食;
3.欢迎他来中国品尝美食。
注意:
1.词数80左右
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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7.假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter打算这个寒假来中国旅游,让你推荐个城市,你想推荐杭州作为他旅游行程的首选。请用英语给他写封推荐信,内容包括:
1.推荐城市;
2.推荐理由;
3.你的祝愿。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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8.学校将开设更多课外活动,假定你是高一(6)班班长李华,请你代表班级向学校学生会主席David推荐你们班级认为合理的运动项目,并给出理由。
内容提示如下:
1.推荐项目;
2.推荐理由。
注意:字数80字左右,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
9.假如你是李华,你的外国朋友Jack对中国文化很感兴趣。你们原定本周日上午9点参观浙江省博物馆,现博物馆因故闭馆一周,请给他写一封邮件,内容要点如下:
1.告知闭馆消息;2.推荐其他活动:3.期待回复。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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10.假如你是李华,你们学校的外教Mr. James想找一个人教他8岁的儿子中文。请你写信推荐你的朋友王明,并说明推荐理由。注意:词数 80 左右;可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:推荐 recommend vt.
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参考答案
1.Dear Jim,
I am glad that you are interested in Chinese culture and eager to explore more. I think the Ancient Poetry is your best choice.
By learning Chinese ancient poems, you can have an extensive knowledge of history and culture in ancient China. Also, you can feel the charm of language by reading poems, which helps to improve your Chinese. To follow the course well, you’d better read and recite as many poems as possible. Besides, it is a good idea to search for related background knowledge so that you will fully understand the conception of poetry.
What do you think of the course? I am sure you will have a lot of fun from it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是一篇应用文,要求考生给交换生Jim写一封邮件,推荐一门选修课,并提出相关学习建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
选择:choice→option
帮助:help→assist
此外:besides→in addition
相关的:related→relevant
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To follow the course well, you’d better read and recite as many poems as possible.
拓展句:In order that you can follow the course well, you’d better read and recite as many poems as possible.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
I am glad that you are interested in Chinese culture and eager to explore more.(that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2]
Also, you can feel the charm of language by reading poems, which helps to improve your Chinese.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
2.Dear Mary,
Pride and excitement swelled in my mind upon knowing that you show a keen interest in Chinese folk songs, which make up an essential part of Chinese culture. While there are hundreds of popular folk songs, my favorite goes to the song Jasmine. Actually, I've been loving this song since my childhood.
Reflecting the beauty of nature and calling on us to love sweet life, the song has been appealing to us for decades. Whenever feeling depressed, I'll sing or listen to the familiar music, which will brighten me up to face any challenge in life. I like its beautiful lyrics and soft melody, which will make me feel relaxed.
I hope that you'll like it once you hear it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Mary写一封邮件,推荐自己最喜欢的歌曲。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
反映:reflect→mirror
感兴趣:be interested in→show a keen interest in
必要的:necessary→essential
吸引:attract→appeal to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Reflecting the beauty of nature and calling on us to love sweet life, the song has been appealing to us for decades.
拓展句:The song has been appealing to us for decades because it reflects the beauty of nature and calls on us to love sweet life.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Pride and excitement swelled in my mind upon knowing that you show a keen interest in Chinese folk songs, which make up an essential part of Chinese culture. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I hope that you'll like it once you hear it. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
3.Dear Jim,
How are you doing? I’m Li Hua who is a student , the president of English drama club. I hope everything's OK with you. I’m writing to ask for your help.
Our school's drama club plans to start practising. Since you're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher to be in your place. Would you please recommend one for us? He or she should be a native English speaker, currently in Beijing, and experienced in both directing and teaching.
Thank you for your help. Please take care of yourself. Remember to wear a mask when necessary. Looking forward to your early reply. Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,假设你是李华。你校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即,作为俱乐部负责人,你给Jim写一封电子邮件,请他推荐一名外籍指导教师,内容包括:阐明写信事由;条件及要求;表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
请求帮助:ask for your help→turn to sb. for help
需要:need→require→in need of
目前,当前:currently→at present
照顾:take care of→look after
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:He or she should be a native English speaker, currently in Beijing, and experienced in both directing and teaching.
拓展句:He or she should be a native English speaker, who is currently in Beijing, and experienced in both directing and teaching.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Since you're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher to be in your place. (运用了since引导的原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] Remember to wear a mask when necessary. (运用了祈使句和状语从句的省略)
4.Dear Tom,
In response to your request for an advisable theme of a short video entitled “Hello, China”, I’m more than delighted to recommend Beijing Opera, a representative of Chinese traditional dramatic art forms.
With a history of about 200 years, it is a scenic art integrating music, performance, literature and face painting. Audiences can know the story by observing the characters, facial paintings as well as their costumes. Therefore, this kind of short video will provide a platform where people can have a better understanding of China.
Wish your video a great success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇应用文。要求考生以李华的名义给英国笔友Tom写封回信,给他推荐关于拍摄“Hello, China”短视频的主题及原因。
【详解】
词汇积累
高兴的:happy→delighted
观看:watch→observe
种类:sort→kind
提供:offer→provide
2.句子拓展
高分句型的同义句
原句:In response to your request for an advisable theme of a short video entitled “Hello, China”, I’m more than delighted to recommend Beijing Opera, a representative of Chinese traditional dramatic art forms.
拓展句:In response to your request for an advisable theme of a short video which is entitled “Hello, China”, I’m more than delighted to recommend Beijing Opera, which is a representative of Chinese traditional dramatic art forms.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
Therefore, this kind of short video will provide a platform where people can have a better understanding of China.句中使用where引导限制性定语从句。
[高分句型2]
In response to your request for an advisable theme of a short video entitled “Hello, China”, I’m more than delighted to recommend Beijing Opera, a representative of Chinese traditional dramatic art forms.使用了过去分词作后置定语。
5.Dear Mr. Green,
I’m writing to ask you for a favor.
I’m preparing an English speech with the title “Cloning’s Role in Life”. I hope I can get people to think more about the significance of cloning and the potential problems it may cause. However,when it comes to the moral risks cloning may bring us,I find it quite hard to make my viewpoint convincing enough,as I lack solid evidence and relevant knowledge. So I wonder if you could recommend some books sharing experts’ arguments on this topic.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生英语老师Mr. Green 写一封信,希望得到他的帮助。
【详解】
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。
结构:总分法
总分法是指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 演讲的主题;
2. 演讲的目的;
3. 具体帮助(如推荐书籍等)。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
ask sb. for a favor;think about;when it comes to;look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1.I’m writing to ask you for a favor.
2.I’m preparing an English speech with the title “Cloning’s Role in Life” .
3.I hope I can get people to think more about the significance of cloning and the potential problems it may cause.
4.When it comes to the moral risks cloning may bring us, I find it quite hard to make my viewpoint convincing enough, as I lack solid evidence and relevant knowledge.
5.I wonder if you could recommend some books sharing experts’ arguments on this topic.
6.Looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态的问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表转折对比关系:However
2.表因果关系:So
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
I hope I can get people to think more about the significance of cloning and the potential problems it may cause.(hope后面是省略了that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]
When it comes to the moral risks cloning may bring us, I find it quite hard to make my viewpoint convincing enough, as I lack solid evidence and relevant knowledge.(it为形式宾语,动词不定式为真正的主语;as引导原因状语从句)
6.Dear Henry,
Delighted to know you're interested in Chinese food, I’m writing to share more information with you.
Chinese food is rich in vegetables and grains, which is considered as the healthiest food in the world. Chinese food varies greatly from region to region because available ingredients are different. The most popular food is jiaozi, also known as dump ling. It's not only delicious and nutritious, but also a part of Chinese culture. I suggest you try it in a Chinese restaurant or you learn to make it by yourself.
I'm sure you'll fall in love with Chinese food.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给对中国美食非常感兴趣的外国笔友Henry写一封邮件,向他介绍中国食物。
【详解】
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时,少量现在进行时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 介绍中国食物的特点;
2. 推荐一种受欢迎的中国美食;
3. 欢迎他来中国品尝美食。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
(be) delighted to do sth.; be interested in sth.; be considered as; vary…from…; (be) known as; fall in love with…
第三步:连词成句
1. Delighted to know you're interested in Chinese food, I’m writing to share more information with you.
2. Chinese food is rich in vegetables and grains, which is considered as the healthiest food in the world.
3. Chinese food varies greatly from region to region because available ingredients are different.
4. The most popular food is jiaozi, also known as dumpling.
5. I'm sure you'll fall in love with Chinese food.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表并列补充关系:not only…but (also)
2.表因果关系:because
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Chinese food is rich in vegetables and grains, which is considered as the healthiest food in the world. 用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
[高分句型2] I suggest you try it in a Chinese restaurant or you learn to make it by yourself. 用了省略that引导的宾语从句(从句用了虚拟语气)。
7.Dear Peter,
I’m delighted to know you’re coming to China for your winter holiday. Personally, I’d like to recommend the city of Hangzhou to you.
When it comes to Hangzhou, the first thing that comes to mind is West Lake, which has been a scenic spot for hundreds of years. Besides, there are many tourist attractions in and around the city, such as Tiger-running Spring, The Lingyin Monastery and Spring Dawn at Su Causeway. Most importantly, Hangzhou is home to delicious food, such as Dongpo Pork and Longjing Shrimp.
I hope the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国朋友Peter写一封信,向他荐杭州作为他旅游行程的首选。
【详解】
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时,少量现在完成时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 介绍推荐城市;
2. 介绍推荐理由;
3. 表达你的祝愿。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
be delighted to do sth.; recommend sth. to sb.; come to mind; in and around the city; such as; be home to
第三步:连词成句
1. I’m delighted to know you’re coming to China for your winter holiday.
2. Personally, I’d like to recommend the city of Hangzhou to you.
3. When it comes to Han