高考英语二轮复习作文：热点写作话题指导与解读：科技素材.doc

高中英语新高考英语作文热点写作话题指导与解读科技前言本篇作文和科技有关此类作文也是高考常见的大体思路也不会有多大的不同题目第六部分书面表达共1小题满分25分请阅读下面这段文字和图表并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章HaveyoueverpaidforknowledgeonlineAccordingtoBloombergaplatformtheDeDaoappofferswrittenarticlesandpodcastsfromfamouspersonalitiesthattheusersmustpayforwithtopicsrangingfrommusictoeconomicsByMay2017DeDaohad7millionusersAsisreportedinPeoplesDailyXimalayaFManotherpopularonlinelearningplatformhadabout450millionusersasofJanuary2018TheplatformallowspeopletopayforandlistentoonlinelearningcoursesManyChinesepeopleusedtobeunwillingtopayforcontentonlineHowevermanyinternetusersattitudeshavechangedsincetheybegantoseequalitycontentasvaluableInfact75ofinternetusersarehappytopayforqualitycontentaccordingtoa2017reportbyChinesesciencenewswebsiteGuokrandInternetNetease写作内容1请以约30个词概括上文和图表内容2请以约120个词谈谈你对PayforOnlineKnowledge的看法包括如下要点1分析哪些原因促进了网上知识付费市场的迅速发展不少于两点2你愿意为网上知识买单吗请阐述你的理由不少于两点写作指导如何写概括第一段主题句举例例子就不要管了主要体现越来越多的人付费网上知识第二段关注however后说的还是第一段的内容再看图数据从2017涨到2020不过请注意2020年还没有到说明这是预测概括以上内容即越来越多的人付费网上知识付费产品从2017年的多少到2020年的多少我的概括Agrowingnumberofinternetusersarekeenonpayingforcontentonlinepredictablypromotingthemarketsizefrom491billionyuanin2017to2351billionyuanin2020后半句仿照2017年的比较参考答案NowadaysmanyonlineappshavewitnessedmoreandmorepeoplepayingforonlineknowledgeItsestimatedthatby2020Chinasonlinepaidknowledgemarketwillexpand5timeswhatitwasin2017前半句参考2017年的后半句用了一个倍数表达法值得学习第二段的写法第二段分析原因写作思维所有作文思维一定要切记分两个方面考虑可以是对立方面即正反角色联系方面即文章涉及到哪些人物或事物功能方面等等这个没有统一答案就本文而言我从角色联系方面着手原因一从个人考虑大众对知识的渴望继续追问为什么渴望因为现在的AI时代对个人素质要求提高必须满足社会的需求原因二从app功能考虑讲到科技产品四个绕不过去的词efficientconvenientcheapabundantaccessible即高效方便或者便宜丰富易接触ManyreasonsgiverisetothephenomenonForonethingwithArtificialIntelligenceincreasinglyinfluencingourdailylifepeopleareeagertoimprovethemselvesforfearofbeingleftbehindWithoutdoubtonlinelearningplatformscanfacilitatetheirlearningandsatisfyalmostalltheirneedsbyprovidingabundantresourcesofhighqualityForanotherthingtheboomingdevelopmentoftechnologyallowsonlinelearningproductstobemoreconvenienttouseWhetheryoungoroldpeoplehaveeasyaccesstothem注释1giveriseto引起2beeagerto急切做3forfearofdoing以防4beleftbehind落后5satisfytheirneeds满足需求6ofhighquality高质量7haveeasyaccessto容易接触第三段的写法第三个要点的思维如果继续写赞成那就意味着继续思考知识付费的好处但是我上面已经写得差不多了继续硬凑当然不是太好的主意所以我选择从反面写毕竟科技的弊端也是明摆着的同样离不开四个词distractaddiction或者relianceprivacyalienate即分散注意力上瘾隐私分离人和现实世界Howeverdespitethoseadvantages衔接上文以退为进IamunwillingtopayforonlineknowledgeUnlikeappsfeaturingspeedandconvenience对比手法paperbooksmakeitpossibleformetothinkdeeplyandcreativelyBesidestoomuchinformationpresentedtendtodistractmyattentionandworsestillencourageheavyrelianceonthem注释1despitethoseadvantages主要是和上文衔接常用手段2unlikeapps用的对比手法可以参考昨天的盐城作文的五种思维之一3makeitforme这是it作形式宾语的常用句型4distractonesattentionencourageheavyrelianceon都是科技作文常见用词合并Agrowingnumberofinternetusersarekeenonpayingforcontentonlinepredictablypromotingthemarketsizefrom491billionyuanin2017to2351billionyuanin2020ManyreasonsgiverisetothephenomenonForonethingwithArtificialIntelligenceincreasinglyinfluencingourdailylifepeopleareeagertoimprovethemselvesforfearofbeingleftbehindWithoutdoubtonlinelearningplatformscanfacilitatetheirlearningandsatisfyalmostalltheirneedsbyprovidingabundantresourcesofhighqualityForanotherthingtheboomingdevelopmentoftechnologyallowsonlinelearningproductstobemoreconvenienttouseWhetheryoungoroldpeoplehaveeasyaccesstothemHoweverdespitethoseadvantagesIamunwillingtopayforonlineknowledgeUnlikeappsfeaturingspeedandconveniencepaperbooksmakeitpossibleformetothinkdeeplyandcreativelyBesidestoomuchinformationpresentedtendtodistractmyattentionandworsestillencourageheavyrelianceonthem范文写得也是非常好很值得背诵的另外作者的思维发散又多了两个角度1网络可以使得专家传播知识2对知识版权的尊重NowadaysmanyonlineappshavewitnessedmoreandmorepeoplepayingforonlineknowledgeItsestimatedthatby2020Chinasonlinepaidknowledgemarketwillexpand5timeswhatitwasin2017WhatonearthgivesrisetotheboomingoftheonlinepaidknowledgemarketFirstlypeoplefinditconvenienttoacquirelargequantitiesofselectedqualitycontentssavingthemtimeandenergyjustwithareasonableamountofmoneySecondlythedecentralizednatureoftheInternetallowsmoreprofessionalstospreadtheirknowledgeappealingtothosewhoarethirstyforknowledgeAlltheseprovideasolidfoundationforpayingforknowledgeindustrytogrowrapidlyImwillingtopayforknowledgeonlineForonethingImeagertoacquirethelatestknowledgetoadjustmyselftotherapidlychangingworldForanotherthequalitycontentsonlinedeservethepaymentwhichcanshowmyrespectfortheowneroftheintellectualproperty