平行展开法
这是第二段中最为实用的展开方法,也是消除模板作文的最好利器。在观点明确后,从下面给出的万能角度中找到需要的角度,用句子进行罗列就可以了。
平行展开法中可以用到的11个方面的万能角度:
1.角度一:物质回报
句子一:(主题)can provide people with not only delicious food but fashionable clothes and such benefits as comfortable dwellings and handsome automobiles.
句子二:Individuals and organizations can make money, take profits and even obtain wealth by doing(主题).
句子三:The industrious(努力的) and insightful(有远见的) people will never fail to(一定) profit from doing (主题).
句子四:It can improve one,s living standards and make an easy and comfortable life.
句子五:It can bring people fresh air, clean water, bright sunshine, safe food and comfortable dwellings(住处,住所).
2.角度二:时间角度
节约时间
句子一:(主题)saves time /takes up little time/occupies little time.
句子二:It can makes the most of one,s time, chance and technology.
句子三:(主题,eg:Confidence)saves people/students a great deal of time by eliminating hours spent on hesitation ,so they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on their academic/meaningful work.
句子四:(主题,eg:Learning more western culture),occupying spare time so constructively, makes a person contented(满足的,满意的),with no time for boredom and helps them achieve a more broadened horizon.
浪费时间
句子五:As we all know, the days of youth should not be frittered/idled away(消耗,虚度时光) and time should be cherished, but (主题:eg:Star worship追星) wastes hours, lavishes days and even squanders(挥霍,浪费) years, which leads us to say it kills and even murders youngster,s prime time.
3.角度三:效率角度
句子一:(主题,eg:Star worship/Addiction to the internet沉溺于网络)makes people weary(疲倦的,困乏的) of other important things,discourage him to learn more, and they finally lose their interest to learn, which leads to their low grades/low efficiency/underachievement.
句子二:One,s energy gradually wears off(耗尽)and one,s thought, creative thinking and exploration spirit have been stifled(镇压,遏制,扼杀,使窒息)/killed/murdered by doing(主题).
4.角度四:方便和快捷
句子一:(主题,eg: World Wide Web)provides people with up-to-date, concrete and accurate and vivid information.
句子二:(主题,eg:MSN and other instant messengers)can shrink the distance between cities and even continents, smooth the communication between residents and ride of the barrier between people.(并列的三个动词)
5.角度五:安全角度
句子一:(主题)can shield people from various kinds of hazards(危险)ranging from injury, robbery, assaults to(攻击,袭击)traffic accidents.
6.角度六:身心健康
句子一:(主题)can relieve not only pressure but also anxiety and such problems as depression, stress, isolation and solitude.
句子二:People can keep fit physically and mentally, by taking part in a variety of sport activities.
句子三:By doing (主题) people stay healthy, and therefore prevent heart diseases, hypertension(高血压), diabetes(糖尿病) and fattiness.
句子四:It cultivates an optimistic view toward the world, and extends people,s life expectancy.
句子五:(主题)can also have added benefit of increasing one,s knowledge, giving us a new perspective of the outside world.
7.角度七:生活娱乐
句子一:People go to amusement parks to relax themselves; they go to the seaside to enjoy sunshine or fresh air; they try sea food and taste local flavors; they visit places of interests in order to contact different customs; they go to museums to broaden their views on…….
句子二:It is well received as an instructive mode of entertainment that provides people with not only a bulk of information, but a source of imagination as well.
句子三:It can enhance people,s understanding on a subject, improve people,s learning capacity and skills, or create a vigorous (有活力的)atmosphere.
句子四:It provides a variety of leisure activities that enhance your energy, enthusiasm and charm. It adds a special means of entertainment to your seemingly tedious, routine and monotonous(无聊的)life.
句子五:We have to admit that (主题) has a role in our lives as a source of information, experiences, entertainment and relaxation.
PS:表受益的词组:broaden one,s mind; enrich one,s experience; enhance vigor and put more enthusiasm to one,s work.
8.角度八:有助于成长和成功(自己和他人)
句子一:People can obtain financial aids, material support, mental comfort, or spiritual back from your support.
句子二:They can draw on experience from you. Though your speeches, instructions or assistance, they can broaden their minds, increase their income.
句子三:Through your encouragement, they cultivate the spirit of competition, participation and cooperation and finally find the