大学英语四级优秀作文

大学英语四级考试优秀范文 Part 1:2010年12月 1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切 2.为了让孩子独立，父母应该…… How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent ①It is beyond reproach that children are always considered the apple of parents” eyes ,which is especially true in single-child families. ②However ,many parents go so far as to take over everything for their life and study even to their future. ③It is not unusual to witness that an increasing number of children are accompanied by parent on their first day in college. ④I declare in no uncertain terms that it will end up with the children” s lack of independence .In such a world full of fierce competition ,being independent becomes essential for a would-be success .Thus ,⑤what should parents do ? In my humble opinion, ⑥on the one hand ,parents should raise children in a free-ranging way instead of being “helicopter” parents, who always seem to hover over their children;⑦ on the other hand ,parents should teach children to be responsible for their own behaviors instead of monopolizing everything .⑧I cling to the belief that only when parents realize what is better for their children and care them in a right way ,can they help children develop independence. 精彩点评：①引入话题：孩子是父母的掌上明珠。②自然过渡：但是，有些父母却为孩子包办一切。③引用生活中的实例，证实父母为孩子包办并非空穴来风。④分析包办所带来的后果。⑤提出问题：父母应该如何做？⑥和⑦具体阐述解决问题的策略，层次分明。⑧简要总结前文所提的具体侧咧，是文章结尾不显突兀。 加分亮点：beyond reproach 无可非议 be accompanied by…有……陪同 declare in no uncertain terms 毫不讳言 fierce competition 激烈的竞争 essential 至关重要的 cling to the belief 坚信 Part 2:2010年6月 1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写 2.出现这种现象的原因是…… 3.为了改变这种状况，我认为…… Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling Nowadays,① an increasing number of students seem to attach less importance to spelling in English learning .②Thus ,numerous misspellings appear in their papers, ③and what ”s worse , a well-organized essay is therefore totally impossible. ④There are various reasons responsible for this embarrassing situation. ⑤For on thing ,much more students give priorities to oral English at the cost of dosing less spelling exercises ,let alone reflect on what they learned the other day .⑥For another ,many teachers put so much emphasis on communication and grammar in teaching that they seldom highlight spelling, and occasionally worse still, they themselves are caught in spelling. To change this situation, ⑦I hold to the belief that students and teachers should work together. ⑧On the one hand ,students should stop complaining about spellings ,and they should realize correct spelling is a must in learning English .⑨On the other hand, teachers should pay more attention to spelling in teaching, for example, focusing on pronunciation and word formation. Only via joint effort can students gain much ground in spelling. 精彩点评： ①开门见山，描述现象：很多学生不重视拼写。②和③使用thus, and what” s worse 说明该现象造成的结果：拼写错误连篇，文章结构混乱。④本段分析造成上述结果的原因。⑤和⑥for on thing…for another…具体列举不同的原因，层次分明。⑦概括提出解决问题的方法。⑧和⑨使用on the one hand …on the other hand …结构，针对上述成因，提出两种对应的解决方案。最后结尾常用的倒装句，总结前文。 加分亮点：embarrassing 令人为难的，尴尬的 give priorities to 认为优先 Put emphasis on 强调 Part 3：2009年12月 建设绿色校园十分重要 绿色校园不仅是指绿色的环境…… 为了建设绿色校园，我们应该…… Creating a Green Campus During recent years ,①the topic of a green campus ,which has aroused widely public attention, is becoming more and more popular. ②Undoubtedly, a green campus, the indispensable part for the development of college students ,has a profound impact on both individuals and society, for its significance cannot be neglected A green environment ,rather than anything else, plays a decisive role in the growth of college students .Meanwhile ,③it should also be mentioned that a preen campus includes not only the places where the students live, but also the mental environment .Without green surrounding ,the soul of students would be not as pure as we wish. In that case ,④in no place other than campus should we attempt to make a green atmosphere . Due to the seriousness of the situation, it is crucial for us to take effective measures to create a green campus .⑤In the first place, it” s essential that law and regulations should be worked out and enforced by the government and authorities. ⑥Furthermore, it is high time that we enhanced the awareness of the students themselves.⑦ Only in this way can we get satisfactory results. With these measures taken ,it is reasonable for us to believe that a green campus will be achieved in the near future. 精彩点评：①开门见山，提出绿色校园的话题已经引起社会关注。②点名绿色校园的重要意义。③用not only ..but also 句型介绍绿色校园的内涵和外延。④半倒装句的运用恰到好处，引出下文要阐述的内容，即社会各界应行动起来，推动绿色校园的建设。⑤和⑥结构连接词in the first place 和furthermore 的运用，使得论述清晰明了。⑦结尾常用的倒装句，总结前文。 加分亮点：undoubtedly 毋庸置疑地 indispensable必不可少的，必需的 significance意义 Part 4:2009年6月 越来越多的博物馆现在免费向公众开放，目的是…… 有人认为这样做会带来一些问题 在我看来… Free Admissions to Museums? ①Recently ,more and more museums are open to the public free of charge. By doing so ,they can attract more visitors ,and offer the visitors more opportunities to explore and get easy access to the world of history ,culture and knowledge. ②However, some people view that the practice also brings problems and concerns. They are right in a sense .③For one thing ,their main concern is that with more visitors ,it is possible that objects exhibited can get damaged more easily. ④For another ,it becomes a huge economic burden for museums to run as usual without any profits from the visitors. ⑤In my opinion, I am absolutely in favor of this practice. The reason lies in the fact that the government should provide more opportunities for citizens to explore and get access to the knowledge world .Moreover, kids and teenagers can acquire knowledge in a more vivid way in the museums .⑥I hope all the people can share the same national treasures in more free museums. 精彩点评：①开门见山，提出论点。并说明这样做的目的。②话题一转，阐明这个举措的弊端。③和④运用关联词For one thing …For another…,使文章层次分明。⑤利用in my opinion 衔接文章，引出自己的观点。⑥最后提出希望，总结全文。 加分亮点：get access to 接触 in favor of 赞同 vivid 生动的 鲜明的 Part 5:2008年12月 一次性塑料袋曾广为使用 由此带来的问题 限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义 Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags ①Recently, limiting the use of disposable plastic bags has been brought to popular attention in China. No one would deny that it was a real convenience in our daily life . ②However ,what would our society be like with the excessive use ? The sharp increase in using plastic bags has given a rise to such problems as environmental pollution. It takes many years for plastic bags to be absorbed by soil, ③which blocks the drainage system and causes water pollution. ④What ‘s worse ,some bags are of poor-quality, and even harmful to public health. ⑤Awareness of the matter in question is one thing ,but more important to us is the step of how to cope with it .From June 1st this year, using of disposable plastic bags in supermarkets is limited strictly. Consequently, people come to take environment-friendly cloth bags and the business cost in supermarkets is cut down as well. ⑥Only in this way can we protect both the environment and our own health. 精彩点评：①开门见山，提出议论点。②利用转折，承接下文，提出问题。③使用非限制性定语从句，丰富句子结构。④运用递进结构What’ s worse …,使文章有层次感。⑤利用过渡句衔接文章。⑥使用倒装句，总结全文。 加分亮点：sharp急剧的，大量的 give rise to 引起，使发生 in question 正被讨论 Consequently从此，因而 Part 6:2008年6月 娱乐活动多种多样 娱乐活动可以使人们受益，也可能带来危害 作为大学生，我认为……. Recreational Activities ①Abundant recreational activities are available for people to release their strain and stress, ranging from sports to online activities. ②There is a hot debate arguing whether they are good for the public or not, especially for college students. ③As for such a question, different people hold different views.④ Some believe that recreation is helpful if we want to keep healthy physically and mentally.⑤ While there also sounds an opposite voice, which claims activities bring many problems meanwhile. For example, some young people are easily addicted to the virtual world online, which affects their study badly and may lead to worse consequences as well. ⑥As for me ,I hold a belief that recreational activities do more good than harm. They do give us a good chance to relax and build good personal relationships with others, too. ⑦As long as we can arrange our time reasonably, they will definitely provide more benefits for us. 精彩点评：①开门见山，摆出事实。②提出讨论的问题：社会对娱乐活动的争论。③模板句引出两种对立观点。④和⑤运用对比结构Some believe that…While…说明不同的观点。⑥用模板句提出自己的观点。⑦给出原因。 加分亮点：be available for 可供…之用… range from…to…从……到…… Be addicted to 沉溺于，热爱 Part 7:2007年12月 各大学为大学生开设了多种多样的选修课 学生出于各种原因选择不同的选修课 以我自己为例…… What Electives to Choose Nowadays, ①there exist a wide range of selective courses in college which are ready for the undergraduates to choose from. These courses make the students’ college life more colorful. ②However, as for the purpose of choosing electives, different students have different ideas. ③Some students choose more electives just to get more knowledge, so that they could be well-prepared in the future job hunting. ④Some students just want to extend their interests.⑤ Some students suppose the knowledge in the text book is limited. They should choose more courses in order that they could spend four more colorful school years. ⑥Still, others have no definite aim and they just want to finish their study. ⑦As far as I am concerned, I just want to learn more knowledge for my future life