材料作文
1.词数:60-70词。开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
假如你是李华,你和家人正在上海度假,请你根据下面的要点提示给你的笔友David写一张明信片。
提示:
1. 上海天气如何?
2. 此刻你正在做什么
3. 你的家人及他人正在做什么?
4. 你的感受是什么?
Dear David ,
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See you soon.
Li Hua
2.生活中总有些不经意的事让你感动,总有些平凡的人让你难以忘记。白杨是我的同学。她家境贫寒;她精心照顾患病母亲;她学习刻苦,成绩优异;她关心同学,乐于助人;她经常利用空闲时间做志愿者工作。请根据提示内容介绍白杨,并谈一谈她对你及同学们的影响。
There are always some things in life that move you. There are always some people that touch you. ________
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3.Write a passage of at least 50 words on the topic "I Like Outdoor Sports"(以“我喜欢户外运动”为题写一篇短文,词数不少于50个)
*Why do you like outdoor sports?
*What do you do for sports?
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4.书面表达
假设你遇到一位来自澳大利亚的商人,你从他那里了解到下列表格中的情况。请你根据以下表格中的信息用英语写一篇介绍Bill Smith的短文。
要求:语言通顺,意思连贯,书写规范,内容可适当补充,词数:80左右。
姓名
Bill Smith
性别
男
年龄
45
国籍
澳大利亚
职业
商人
爱好
电脑,音乐
家庭成员
妻子(医生),儿子(学生)
性格品质
工作努力,认真,心地善良,乐于助人
其他
已在福州开办两家工厂。在他的帮助下10名贫困孩子完成了学业。相信花园城市人民的生活会越来越好。
参考词汇:start,finish one’s studies,the Garden City,live a better life
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5.假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Jack想结交更多的中国朋友。请用英文写封邮件,将你的男同学陈东介绍给他。内容包括:
年龄与外表
16岁;高大健壮
兴趣与爱好
喜欢运动、阅读和听音乐;最喜欢的科目是英语
性格与为人
风趣幽默;乐于助人、容易相处
注意:1. 词数70左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 邮件的开头和结尾部分已给出,不计入总词数;4. 文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
参考词汇:高大健壮tall and strong 运动do sports 听音乐listen to music 最喜欢的科目favourite subject风趣幽默funny and humorous 乐于做某事be ready to do sth. 相处get on with
Dear Jack,How is everything going? Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you.
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I'm sure you'd like to have such a person as your friend. With my best wishes
Yours,
Li Hua
6.随着电脑的普及,许多中国学生逐渐忽视书写。针对该现象,请你根据下表提示,用英语写一篇短文向校刊投稿,阐述书写的重要性。
你的观点
电脑普及时代书写依然重要
你的理由
1.书写是中国传统文化的一个重要组成部分,所以练习书写有助于传承文化;
2.每个人的字迹都有个人意义,例如手写书信更能表达情感;
3.……(再自拟至少一个理由并加以阐述)
注意:
1. 必须包括表中所有提示内容,并作适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
4. 词数不少于90字(文章开头已经给出, 不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:handwriting 书法;字迹;书写(不可数名词)inherit 传承(及物动词)Nowadays many Chinese students no longer pay much attention to handwriting. They believe their keyboards can do the work. However, I think that handwriting is still important.
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7.根据要求完成大作文,词数:80-100词。
每年十月份,越来越多的游客来本溪赏枫叶。请你根据以下提示,说说如何给游客可留下“景美人更美”的好印象,从自身做起,做文明本溪人!
提示词:beautiful views美丽的景色
要求:
1.语意连贯,层次清晰,书写规范。
2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名。
3. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
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How to be a polite citizen
Benxi is a good place to watch maple leaves (枫叶) in October.
8.假如你是某市第三中学的一名学生,你的学校正在参加全市文明校园的评选.以下内容是学校根据《山东省中小学文明校园评比细则》列举的部分信息.请你根据表格内容,写一篇短文,向社会宣传自己的学校,并谈谈你能为创建文明校园所做的至少一件事,为母校评选文明校园尽一份力。
1. Teachers' team
(师资)
①experienced teachers
help us make progress
②friendly head teachers
grow as a person
2. School facilities
(设施)
①a big library
read books to learn more
②a playground
do sports
③some science labs
find something new
3. School environment
(环境)
①different kinds of trees and flowers
be clean and beautiful
②safety education classes
protect ourselves
4. ?
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要求:(1)语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称; 3)80~100词,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.I'm from No.3 Middle School. My school is making its effort to be a civilized school. Let me introduce it.
There are many experienced teachers in my school. They help us make progress in many ways.
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9.为弘扬中华传统文化,你校举办了一次“戏曲进校园”展演活动。假定你是李华,请你将活动的相关情况写信告知你的英国笔友John。
要点:
1. 时间:5月16日下午2:30;
2. 地点:学校操场;
3. 内容:校长在开幕式上致辞;戏曲知识竞赛;师生戏曲表演等;
4. 感受:对传统文化有了进一步的了解……
要求:
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名或地名;
2. 语言通顺,条理清楚,书写规范;
3. 要点齐全,内容可适当发挥;
4. 词数:80—100 (开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:戏曲 opera (n.) 开幕式 opening ceremony ( n.) 表演 performance ( n.)致辞 make a speech
Dear John,
How is everything going? I’m writing to share with you an activity called Opera Entering Campus in our school.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
10.请你根据以下内容提示,为学校广播站英语专栏写一篇短文,介绍发生在你好朋友王强Wang Qiang身上的一件事。
1.上周一放学后Wang Qiang骑车回家,在十字路口,看到一位老太太正要过马路。
2.当时交通灯坏了,所有车辆都一个接一个通过十字路口。
3.老太太犹豫不决,不敢独自穿过十字路口。
4.王强看到这种情况,主动上前拦住了车辆领着老人安全过了路口。
5.请就此事谈谈你的看法......
要求: 1.短文要包括以上所有要点。2.行文连贯,可适当发挥。3.词数:80-100。开头部分已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:十字路口 crossroads 在……犹豫不决 hesitate in
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参考答案
1.Dear David
Now I’m in Shanghai with my patents.We are on holiday here.The weather is sunny,but hot and wet.We are on the beach now.The beach is very beautiful and clean.I’m lying on the beach.My parents are taking photos.Some other people are swimming in the sea.This is a very beautiful and interesting place.I like it very much.I hope you will come here one day.
See you soon.
Li Hua
【详解】这是一篇要求介绍自己和家人度假的情况。动笔前先要认真阅读要点,围绕要点组织材料,然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来,在此基础上亦可适当发挥,注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态和现在进行时态,注意不同时态的谓语动词的正确形式,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
重点短语:on holiday在度假,on the beach在沙滩,be doing在做某事
2.There are always some things in life that move you. There are always some people that touch you.
My classmate Bai Yang comes from a poor family. She takes good care of her mother who has a serious illness. But she never gives up her studies. She keeps studying hard and has got good grades. What’s more, she cares for the classmates and is ready to help others. During her spare time, she often does voluntary work instead of relaxing herself like most of the students.
She sets a good example to us all. Everyone in our class likes her because of her kindness. In our eyes, she faces difficulties bravely. No matter how hard the life is, she smiles at life brightly.
【详解】这是一篇人物介绍。人物身份为同学白杨,介绍分四个要点:她家境贫寒;她精心照顾患病母亲;她学习刻苦,成绩优异;她关心同学,乐于助人;她经常利用空闲时间做志愿者工作。人称为第三人称,时态为一般现在时。注意语法正确,善用连词,使各个要点连贯。
【高分句型一】She takes good care of her mother who has a serious illness.她精心照顾生病的母亲。who has a serious illness为定语从句。
【高分句型二】No matter how hard the life is, she smiles at life brightly.不管生活多么艰苦,她仍然笑对生活。No matter how hard the life is为让步状语从句。
3.参考范文
Outdoor sports help people keep healthy and happy. Taking part in outdoor sports is the best way to keep fit. Of all the sports I like football best. Though I can't play it very well,I still like it because through playing football. I will be strong in health and character. In addition,through playing football I can learn to be responsible and cooperative .In short,playing football builds your character and teamwork besides keeping fit.
【详解】1、题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应将所给要求全部写进作文。
2、例文点评:例文采用总分总结构,先总说户外运动的好处,再说自己最喜欢足球以及原因等,最后再小结,呼应足球作为户外运动的好处。用第一人称来叙述内容;时态采用一般现在时。叙述完整且条理清晰。
3、高分亮点:
高分短语:help sb. do sth.;learn to do;in addition;in short。
高分句型:
1.Taking part in outdoor sports is the best way to keep fit.
2.Of all the sports I like football best.
4.Bill Smith is a businessman from Australia. He is 45 years old. He likes computer and music. There are three people in his family. His wife is a doctor and his son is a student. He works hard and carefully. He is kind and helpful. Bill Smith has started two big factories in Fuzhou. With his help, ten poor children have finished their studies. He is sure that the Garden City — Fuzhou will be more and more beautiful and the people here will live a better life in the future.
【详解】这是一篇材料作文,要求用英语介绍澳大利亚商人Bill Smith的一些个人情况。整篇文章主要内容基本来自表格所给内容,不需要学生自主发挥,所以只需要将所给要点全部写进文章中即可,切忌信息遗漏。范文主要采用第三人称进行叙述,其中所用单词难度不大,且有部分参考词汇可供使用,但要注意一些谓语的第三人称单数形式的转换,以免出现语法错误。
5.Dear Jack
How is everything going?Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you.He is a 16-year-old boy. He has round face,black hair and bright eyes.He is tall and strong. He likes smiling very much He likes doing sports.reading and listening to music.His favourite subject is English.because he thinks it is very interesting.
He is humorous and funny.He is ready to help others and easy to get on with others.He likes doing sports.reading and listening to music.His favourite subject is English.because he thinks it is very interesting.He also spends much time taking part in after-school activities.
He likes winter very much,because he thinks winter is a season to do many fun things,such as skating, making snowman and so on.His dream is becoming an English teacher,because he wants his students to get good grades.I'm sure you'd like to have such a person as your friend.With my best wishes!
Yours
LiHua
【分析】分析:
高分句型一
He likes smiling very much.此句是一般现在时的陈述句,运用短语like doing sth 喜欢做某事,短语very much非常,很,此句可翻译为“他很喜欢笑。”
注意like后加doing
高分句型二
He also spends much time taking part in after−school activities.此句是一般现在时的陈述句,运用短语spend some time(in)doing sth 花时间做某事,短语take part in 参加,此句可翻译为“他还花大量时间参加课外活动。”
【详解】这是一篇给材料作文,假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Jack想结交更多的中国朋友。要求根据表格中的内容提示,用英文写封邮件,将你的男同学陈东介绍给他。文章时态主要用一般现在时,人称主要用第三人称。在写作的时候,注意连句成篇,保持文章的连贯性。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的