Topic4——提出建议
一、谨记写作模板
二、充盈语库材料
1.开头常用语
①I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on ...
②I’m very glad to receive your letter and it’s a pleasure to tell you something about ...
③You asked me for my advice on ...and I will try to make some suggestions.
④Thanks for trusting me.It’s my pleasure to give you some suggestions/advice.
⑤In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following action.
⑥Here are some tips to help you./Here are a few suggestions.
2.正文常用语
①It is important to do ...
②It should be a good idea to do ...
③If I were you, I would do ...
④Why not ...?/Why don’t you ...?
⑤Only in this way can you ...
⑥I think it would be more helpful if you could do ...
⑦First, you should do ...
⑧I would like to suggest you should do ...
⑨As far as I am concerned .../In my opinion ...
⑩You had better do .../You must .../You should ...
3.结尾常用语
①I hope you’ll make great progress in ...
②I hope you will find these suggestions useful.
③I hope you will take my advice into account.
④I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.
⑤I would be ready to discuss this matter with you about further details.
三、巧用3*3升级作文
[题目要求]
(2017·北京高考) 你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条线路可以选择:“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信,内容包括:
1.你建议的线路; 2.你的理由; 3.你的祝愿。
注意:1.词数不少于50;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
[学生习作]
Dear Jim,
I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.
①I highly suggest both of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai. For me, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze River, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. ②Also, the scenery along the river is amazing because there are many wellknown sightseeing spots.③So I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a better choice.
Hope you’ll have a good time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
[表达升格]
(一)3个词汇抓住眼(将文中加黑词汇升级)
1.suggest→recommend
2.For me→Personally
3.Also→Moreover
(二)3个句式点亮篇
1.用突出主题的被动句为表达“添彩”(用被动语态改写句①)
Of_the_two_trips_to_the_Yangtze_River_and_Mount_Tai,_both_are_highly_recommended.
2.用简而不凡的简单句为表达“奠基”(用介词with短语改写句②)
Moreover,_the_scenery_along_the_river_is_amazing,_with_many_wellknown_sightseeing_spots.
3.用花样繁多的复合句为表达“增色”(用表语从句改写句③)
That’s_why_I_think_the_tri