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概要写作1DirectionsReadthefollowingpassageSummarizethemainideaandthemainpointsofthepassageinnomorethan60wordsUseyourownwordsasfaraspossibleAfterthesuddenlossofherfiveyearolddaughterElizabethNataliaSpencerfeltsheneededtodosomethingtohonorthelittlegirlThatstrongwishinspiredSpencertostartwhatshecallsaWalkofLovea6000miletrek长途旅行alongtheBritishcoastlineElizabethparticularlylovedthebeachandtheseaandwevisitedtheseasidealotAftershepassedawayIwenttotheseasideanditwasthefirsttimethatIhadfeltsomecomfortSpencersaidIknewthiswaswhatIhadtodoItwassomethingIcoulddoanditwouldmakelifemorebearableOnValentinesDaySpencerbeganwalkingDurdleDoorinDorsetEnglandthelastbeachshetookElizabethtobeforeshebecameillSofarSpencerhasjourneyedabout1500mileswalkingthroughDorsetCornwallDevonandtheentirecoastofWalesEverydayexceptSaturdaySpencerwalks20milesOftenlocalsjoinhermanytimestheysharestoriesaboutlosingtheirownchildrenEverythingchangedforSpenceronNov222015SpencernoticedElizabethwasillwithwhatshethoughtwasachestinfectionButthegirlshealthworsenedrapidlyDoctorsdiagnosedherwithalifethreateningimmuneconditionwheretheimmunecellsdamagethetissuesandorgansThiscausedElizabethsorganstoshutdownandstoppedthebloodsupplytoherarmsandlegsShewasmovedtoBristolChildrensHospitalwhereshespent18daysonlifesupportbeforepassingawayonDec10AfterElizabethdiedSpencerstruggledInJanuaryafriendencouragedSpencertogoforawalkandthetwoendedupattheGowerPeninsulainWalesWhilewalkingprovidesSpencerwithtimetogrieve悲伤shesalsousingthetriptoraise100000fortheBristolChildrensHospitalSpencerexpectstocompleteherwalknextspringShedlovetofinishonValentinesDaybutdoesntknowifthatisrealistic2DirectionsReadthefollowingpassageSummarizethemainideaandthemainpointsofthepassageinnomorethan60wordsUseyourownwordsasfaraspossibleLosingyourabilitytothinkandrememberisprettyscaryWeknowtheriskofdementia痴呆increaseswithageButifyouhavememoryslipsyouprobablyneedntworryThereareprettycleardifferencesbetweensignsofdementiaandagerelatedmemorylossAfter50itsquitecommontohavetroublerememberingthenamesofpeopleplacesandthingsquicklyThebrainagesjustliketherestofthebodyCertainpartsshrinkespeciallyareasinthebrainthatareimportanttolearningmemoryandplanningChangesinbraincellscanaffectcommunicationbetweendifferentregionsofthebrainAndbloodflowcanbereducedasbloodvesselsnarrowForgettingthenameofanactorinafavoritemovieforexampleisnothingtoworryaboutButifyouforgettheplotofthemovieordontrememberevenseeingitthatsfarmoreconcerningWhenyouforgetentireexperiencesitsaredflagthatsomethingmoreseriousmaybeinvolvedForgettinghowtooperateafamiliarobjectlikeamicrowaveovenorforgettinghowtodrivetothehouseofafriendyouvevisitedmanytimesbeforecanalsobesignsofsomethinggoingwrongButeventhenpeopleshouldntpanicTherearemanythingsthatcancauseconfusionandmemorylossincludinghealthproblemsliketemporarystoppageofbreathingduringsleephighbloodpressureordepressionaswellasmedications药物likeantidepressantsDefenseagainstmemorylossistotrytopreventitbybuildingupyourbrainscognitive认知的reserveReadbooksgotomoviestakeupnewhobbiesoractivitiesthatforceonetothinkinnovelwaysInotherwordskeepyourbrainbusyandworkingAndalsogetphysicallyactivebecauseexerciseisaknownbrainbooster3DirectionsReadthefollowingpassageSummarizethemainideaandthemainpointsofthepassageinnomorethan60wordsUseyourownwordsasfaraspossibleNowadaysleaderstheworldoverarebusymappingoutblueprintsforanewagewithenvironmentalprotectionhighontheiragendaSustainabledevelopmenthitsheadlinesalmosteverydayItisofutmostimportancetorestoretheharmoniousbalancebetweenmanandnaturegiventhedamagewevealreadydonetoitFirstofallwemustrealizethatmanandnatureareinteractiveTobeginwithwederiveeverythingfromnatureAmongotherthingsImsureyouvealltastednaturalproducethatisotherwiseknownasgreenfoodAndyoumusthavenoticedthatnearlyallbeautifyingproductsboastofbeingnaturalcreamsnaturallotionsornaturalgelsFormannaturehasanirresistibleappealButontheotherhandwemustalsorealizethatnaturecanbeunrulyNatureisindeedlikeariddlesomeareasofwhicharebeyondthereachofscienceandtechnologyatleastintheforeseeablefutureNeverthelesstheadvancementofscienceandtechnologywillstillcharacterizethenextmillenniumThecomingnewagewillprovidemanyopportunitiesbutitwillbelikewiserunofchallengesForinstanceUnitedNationsdemographerspredictthatglobalpopulationcouldsoarfromitscurrent59billiontoasmanyas112billionby2050ThiswillworsenthecurrentscarcityofnaturalresourcescausedbyenvironmentaldegradationMoreconflictsoverthisscarcitymayoccurwiththeghostofnuclearwarsalwayshidinginthebackgroundTopreventthisnightmarefromcomingtruegovernmentsneedtoworkcloselywitheachotherandbackuptheirverbalcommitmentbyactionsHoweveritisnotenoughonlytoaskwhatgovernmentscandotoachievetheharmonybetweenmanandnatureWemustaskourselveswhatweasindividualscandoCanweallbeeconomicalwithfoodwaterelectricityorotherresourcesCanweorrathersomegreedyonesamongusstopmakingrareplantsandanimalsintodeliciousdishesCanwestopusingtheunrecyclablestyleoflunchboxesIfnotonedaytheymayburyusinanoceanofwhiterubbishAfteralltheearthisnotadustbinitsourcommonh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teracyornumeracy7DirectionsReadthefollowingthreepassagesSummarizethemainideaandthemainpointsofthepassageinnomorethan60wordsUseyourownwordsasfaraspossibleTheWorldShouldWelcometheRiseoftheRobotsThewordrobotwascoinedin1020bytheCzechplaywrightKarelCapekwhoimaginedartificialfullyfunctionalservantsFormostoftheirhistoryhoweverrobotshavebeendumbinelegantmechanicaldevicessittingoutofsightinfactoriesThingsarestartingtochangehoweverRobotshavebenefitedfromrapidinnovationsinsmartphoneswhichbroughtcheapcamerasandsensorsfastwirelesscommunicationsandpowerfulsmallercomputerchipsMorerecentadvancesinmachinelearninghaveaddedsoftwaretomakerobotsbetterinformedabouttheirsurroundingsandequippedthemtomakewiserdecisionsRobotsareleavingcarefullymanagedindustrialsettingsforeverydaylifeInapandemicravagedworldshortofworkersbutwithlotsofelderlyfolktolookafterhavingmorerobotstoboostproductivitywouldbeagoodthingAndyetmanypeoplefearthatrobotswilldestroyjobsApaperin2013byeconomistsatOxfordUniversitywaswidelymisinterpretedasmeaningthat47ofAmericanjobswereatriskofbeingautomatedInfactconcernsaboutmassunemploymentareoverblownTheevidencesuggestsrobotswillbedisruptivebutultimatelybeneficialforlabourmarketsJapanandSouthKoreahavethehighestrobotpenetrationbutverystrongworkforcesAYaleUniversitystudythatlookedatJapanesemanufacturingbetween1978and2017foundthatanincreaseofonerobotunitper1000workersboostedacompanysemploymentby22ResearchfromtheBankofKoreafoundthatrobotizationmovedjobsawayfrommanufacturingintoothersectorsbutthattherewasnodecreaseinoverallvacanciesInevitablysomepeoplewillbeonthelosingendofchangeevenastherobotsmakesocietyasawholebetteroffItmaytriggerapoliticalbacklashbecausethelosersfeelleftbehindThatisonemorereasonwhyfirmsandgovernmentswoulddowelltorecognizethevalueofretrainingandlifelonglearningAsjobschangeworkersshouldbehelpedtoacquirenewskillsThepotentialgainsfromtherobotrevolutionarehugeThereisnoreasontothinktherobotswillrevoltagainsttheirhumanmastersandcausemassunemploymentandworse8DirectionsReadthefollowingthreepassagesSummarizethemainideaandthemainpointsofthepassageinnomorethan60wordsUseyourownwordsasfaraspossibleWhatdoWeKnowAboutMathephobiaMathematicianMarydeLellisGoughwhooftenobservedherstrugglingstudentsfailtoworkoutmathematicalproblemscoinedthetermmathephobiain1953ShedescribeditasadiseasethatprovesfatalbeforeitspresenceisdetectedOtherexpertshavedefineditasthepanichelplessnessandmentaldisorganizationthatarisesamongsomepeoplewhentheyarerequiredtosolveamathematicalproblemandageneralfearofcontactwithmathematicsSianBeilockacognitivescientistandhercolleaguesofBarnardCollegeinNewYorkhaveshownthatmathanxietycanstartassoonasweenterformalschoolingMathisoneofthefirstplacesinschoolinwesterncultureswherewereallylearnaboutwhetherwegotsomethingrightorwrongandareexposedtobeingevaluatedintimedtestsGirlsmaybemorepronetoitthanboysPrimaryschoolteachersoftenhavehighlevelsofmathanxietysaysBeilockandintheUSandelsewheretheyaremostlyfemaleSinceyoungchildrentendtoidentifywithadultsofthesamegenderthismeansgirlsaremorelikelytopickupmathanxietyfromtheirfemaleteachersHavingafemaleteacherwithmathanxietymakesgirlsmorelikelytobelievegenderedstereotypesaboutmathleadingtopoorerachievementOnceyouhaveititcanbeselflastingWorryingaboutitcanmakeitworsesaysBeilockwhosestudyofchildrenbetweentheagesoffiveandeightsuggestsmathanxietymightweakenperformancebyburdeningworkingmemoryAsourabilitytofocuslimitedourattentiongetsdividedwhenwedomorethanonetaskatatimeshesaysIfyoureworriedabouthavingtodomathyoumayhaveaninternalmonologuesayingyoucantdothisandatthesametimeyouretryingtocalculatenumbersWhenpeoplehavemathanxietytheytendtoavoidthesubjectasresearchersfrom2019showButsincemathbuildsonitselfavoidingitmakesithardertocatchupMathisfoundationalIfyoumissacertainideaitshardertolearnthenextonesaysDarcyHallettAndthenyoucanfallbehindwhichmightmakemathmoreofatargetedanxietycomparedtoothertopics9DirectionsReadthefollowingpassageSummarizethemainideaandthemainpointsofthepassageinnomorethan60wordsUseyourownwordsasfaraspossibleGlobalCooperationInthe21stcenturyweveseenanewtrendthatispushingtheboundariesofhumaninventionandinnovationglobalcooperationScientificandtechnicalresearchanddevelopmentisnowsocomplicatedthatnoonescientistcanknowitallSoincreasinglyinnovationiscomingfromthecombiningofcuttingedgeexpertise专业知识fromdifferentscientificfieldsTherearenowover8000scientificjournalsworldwideanditisimpossibletobeanexpertinallareasThereforeinthishighlyspecializedworldscientistsmedicsandengineershavetocooperateinordertoinnovateProfessorBobLangeratMassachusettsInstituteofTechnologyMIThasmadesignificantbreakthroughsinthefieldofbiomedicalengineeringButhehasntdoneitonhisownHehasinvitedexpertsfromaroundtheworldindifferentfieldstoformaglobalteamtodesignnewsubstanceswhichcangoinsidethebodydelivermedicinesandthendissolveAlsoatMITwhenCesarHaradaheardabouttheoilspillintheGulfofMexicoin2010hequithisdreamjobthereandtriedtodevelopamoreefficientwaytoremovetheoilButratherthanfocusingonprofithedecidedtoopensourcethedesignHesharedhisownideasonthewebforfreeandthengotexpertsfromallaroundtheworldtocontributeideasandevendonationsThankstothisfreenotforprofitwayofsharingideasandintellectualpropertyontheinternetaboatcapableofcleaningoilquicklycameintobeingObviouslyinternationalcooperationbasedonsharinginformationfreelyhasproducedinnovativeapproachestosolvingproblemsItappearsthatthedaysofbrilliantindividualsworkingintheirgaragesontheirownareoverGlobalteamswithaunitedpurposebuildingoneveryonesexpertisecancollectivelydofarmorethanonebrilliantindividualTodaysworldcallsforglobalcooperatorssharersandnotprotectorsofideas10DirectionsReadthefollowingpassageSummarizethemainideaandthemainpointsofthepassageinnomorethan60wordsUseyourownwordsasfaraspossibleToadjustyoubabytotheexternalworldeducatinghimisyourmainassignmentHowwillyoueducatehimWhatrolewillheplayintheworldAccordingtoDarwinstheoryoftheevolutionofthespeciesweareacompetitivespeciesandonesurvivesbyadaptingitselfbiologicallytovariousenvironmentsthroughvariouswaysCompetitionwasusefulfortheprogressofsocietyandforthesurvivalofhumanbeingsTodayhoweverthechallengesaredifferentThereareenvironmentalimbalancedeathsofthousandsofchildreneverydaybystarvationandcountlessdiseasesThereforeitisurgentthatthephilosophyofpreparingourchildrenforcompetitionandpowerbereplacedbyoneofpreparingthemforloveandcooperationTheearthisauniquehometousallWemusteducateourchildrensothattheywanttopreservenatureanditcaninreturnmakethemmorepowerfulandcapableinsocietyOurchildrenhavetolearnthatwedontneedtopracticeactionsthatbenefitonlyourhomelandwhileallothercountriesaredestroyedThedestructionofothercountriesandlivesleadstotheimpossibilityofthefutureexistenceofourhomeWemustteachourchildrenthatthemainnecessityofmenandchildrenisloveLoveisgoodtoourselvesothersandnatureButitisgettinghardertoloveWearenotcapableofdemonstratinghatetoaflowergrabbingitandthrowingitatthefloorandsteppingonitItsoundsinsaneButweareinsensitivetotheextentofseeingahomelesspersononthegroundandpretendingitsnotourproblemOurstrongideaofcompetitionhasledustototalinsensibility参考答案1ApossibleversionTohonorherdaughterwhorecentlydiedNataliaSpencerstartedthe6000mileWalkofLovealongtheBritishcoastlinewhichshewishestofinishnextspringShedidthistomakelifemorebearableandtoraise100000fortheBristolChildrensHospitalTheWalkprovidedherchancestosharewiththelocalsstoriesaboutlosingchildrenwordcount58导语本文是一篇记叙文文章介绍一个叫NataliaSpencer的人为了纪念自己死去的女儿参加了一个步行项目缓解自己生活的同时也为儿童医院筹钱这次步行给她提供了与当地人分享关于失去小孩的故事的机会文章大意详解1要点摘录AfterthesuddenlossofherfiveyearolddaughterElizabethNataliaSpencerfeltsheneededtodosomethingtohonorthelittlegirlThatstrongwishinspiredSpencertostartwhatshecallsaWalkofLovea6000miletrek长途旅行alongtheBritishcoastlineItwassomethingIcoulddoanditwouldmakelifemorebearableOftenlocalsjoinhermanytimestheysharestoriesaboutlosingtheirownchildrenWhilewalkingprovidesSpencerwithtimetogrieve悲伤shesalsousingthetriptoraise100000fortheBristolChildrensHospitalSpencerexpectstocompleteherwalknextspring2缜密构思将第126这三个要点进行重组将第35这两个要点进行整合3遣词造句TheWalkprovidedherchancestosharewiththelocalsstoriesaboutlosingchildren点睛高分句型1TohonorherdaughterwhorecentlydiedNataliaSpencerstartedthe6000mileWalkofLovealongtheBritishcoastlinewhichshewishestofinishnextspring运用一个动词不定式短语作目的状语以及一个非限制性定语从句对第126这三个要点内容进行了概括表达高级高分句型2Shedidthistomakelifemorebearableandtoraise100000fortheBristolChildrensHospital用两个并列的动词不定式短语作目的状语对第第35这两个要点的内容进行了概括表达精炼且全面2ApossibleversionPeopleaged50andovertendtodevelopmemoryproblemsbecausechangesinbraincellshaveaffectedbrainscommunicationwithinandthatthenarrowingofvesselsreducesthebloodflowHoweversignsofmemorylossdonotnecessarilyleadtotheconditionitselfAnywaytryingtothinkcreativelyandgettingphysicallyactivehelptokeepyourbrainhealthyeffectively导语本文是一篇说明文文章主要介绍了50岁及以上的人容易出现记忆力问题因为脑细胞的变化影响了大脑内部的交流血管的狭窄减少了血流然而记忆丧失的迹象并不一定会导致这种情况本身无论如何试着创造性地思考和积极锻炼有助于有效地保持大脑健康详解1要点摘录After50itsquitecommontohavetroublerememberingthenamesofpeopleplacesandthingsquicklyChangesinbraincellscanaffectcommunicationbetweendifferentregionsofthebrainAndbloodflowcanbereducedasbloodvesselsnarrowTherearemanythingsthatcancauseconfusionandmemorylossincludinghealthproblemsliketemporarystoppageofbreathingduringsleephighbloodpressureordepressionaswellasmedications药物likeantidepressantsReadbooksgotomoviestakeupnewhobbiesoractivitiesthatforceonetothinkinnovelwaysAndalsogetphysicallyactivebecauseexerciseisaknownbrainbooster2缜密构思将第12两个要点进行重组将第3个要点进行释义将第45两个要点进行整合3遣词造句Peopleaged50andovertendtodevelopmemoryproblemsbecausechangesinbraincellshaveaffectedbrainscommunicationwithinandthatthenarrowingofvesselsreducesthebloodflowHoweversignsofmemorylossdonotnecessarilyleadtotheconditionitselfAnywaytryingtothinkcreativelyandgettingphysicallyactivehelptokeepyourbrainhealthyeffectively点睛高分句型1Peopleaged50andovertendtodevelopmemoryproblemsbecausechangesinbraincellshaveaffectedbrainscommunicationwithinandthatthenarrowingofvesselsreducesthebloodflow运用了because引导的原因状语从句高分句型2Anywaytryingtothinkcreativelyandgettingphysicallyactivehelptokeepyourbrainhealthyeffectively运用了动名词短语作主语3ApossibleversionToachieveharmonybetweenmanandnaturepeoplemustbeawarethatalthoughtheyareinteractivenatureisnotalwaysatmansmercyScienceandtechnologywillbeadvancingbutpopulationexplosionwillresultinworseningenvironmentTomaintainsustainabledevelopmentbothgovernmentsandindividualsshouldfulfilltheirpromiseofprotectingtheearthourcommonhome导语本文是一篇说明文文章介绍说要实现人与自然的和谐人们必须认识到虽然人与自然是相互作用的但自然并不总是听命于人科学技术将会进步但人口爆炸将导致环境恶化为了保持可持续发展政府和个人都应该履行他们的承诺保护地球我们共同的家园详解1要点摘录ItisofutmostimportancetorestoretheharmoniousbalancebetweenmanandnaturegiventhedamagewevealreadydonetoitFirstofallwemustrealizethatmanandnatureareinteractiveFormannaturehasanirresistibleappealNeverthelesstheadvancementofscienceandtechnologywillstillcharacterizethenextmillenniumForinstanceUnitedNationsdemographerspredictthatglobalpopulationcouldsoarfromitscurrent59billiontoasmanyas112billionby2050HoweveritisnotenoughonlytoaskwhatgovernmentscandotoachievetheharmonybetweenmanandnatureWemustaskourselveswhatweasindividualscandoAfteralltheearthisnotadustbinitsourcommonhome2缜密构思将第1个要点进行总说将第23三个要点进行分说3遣词造句ToachieveharmonybetweenmanandnaturepeoplemustbeawarethatalthoughtheyareinteractivenatureisnotalwaysatmansmercyScienceandtechnologywillbeadvancingbutpopulationexplosionwillresultinworseningenvironmentTomaintainsustainabledevelopmentbothgovernmentsandindividualsshouldfulfilltheirpromiseofprotectingtheearthourcommonhome点睛高分句型1Toachieveharmonybetweenmanandnaturepeoplemustbeawarethatalthoughtheyareinteractivenatureisnotalwaysatmansmercy运用although引导让步状语从句对原文第一段和第二段进行了概括高分句型2Tomaintainsustainabledevelopmentbothgovernmentsandindividualsshouldfulfilltheirpromiseofprotectingtheearthourcommonhome用不定式作引导目的状语从句对最后两段进行了概括表达非常高级4ApossibleversionFourwaystocopewithstressareofferedinthepassageFirstworkoutwhichreleasesmuscletensionbuildsuponesenergyandhelpsonecalmdownSeconddrinkherbalteawhichfightseffectivelyagainststressandanxietyThirdrelaxinnewcleansurroundingswhereonefeelsbetterFourthchattingwithclosepeoplemakesonelessstressed导语本文是一篇说明文文章中提供了四种应对压力的方法首先锻炼可以缓解肌肉紧张建立一个人的能量帮助一个人冷静下来第二喝花草茶它能有效地对抗压力和焦虑第三在新的干净的环境中放松让人感觉更好第四和亲近的人聊天可以减少压力详解1要点摘录WhatifwedonottrytochangeothersbutrathertryandchangeourattitudetostressandtensionthatweoftenexperienceatworkPhysicalactivitywillboostyourenergylevelandhelpyoucalmdownWorkingoutisbeneficialforbothyourbodyandmindHerbsworkmiraclesSomeofthemsuchaschamomileandpeppermintareapowerfultoolhelpingtofightstressandanxietyIfyourofficeislocatedinanenvironmentallycleanplaceforexamplenearacityparkYoucanthenrefreshyourselfandrelaxabitbeforeyoudivebackintoyourworkingroutineAstudyshowsthatcommunicationwithclosepeoplesuchasyourfriendsorparentsproducesoxytocininyourbodythehormonethatisneededtosuccessfullyfighttensionandstress2缜密构思将第1个要点进行总说将第2345四个要点进行分说3遣词造句FourwaystocopewithstressareofferedinthepassageFirstworkoutwhichreleasesmuscletensionbuildsuponesenergyandhelpsonecalmdownSeconddrinkherbalteawhichfightseffectivelyagainststressandanxietyThirdrelaxinnewcleansurroundingswhereonefeelsbetterFourthchattingwithclosepeoplemakesonelessstressed点睛高分句型1Fourwaystocopewithstressareofferedinthepassage运用不定式作后置定语对原文第二段进行了概括高分句型2Seconddrinkherbalteawhichfightseffectivelyagainststressandanxiety用which引导非限制性定语从句对第四段进行了概括表达非常高级5OnepossibleversionAnimalssometimesfallfromtheskyInYoroHondurasithasrainedsilverfishmanytimesScientistsclaimwaterspoutsandtornadoescanpickupanimalsfromwaterwhicharecarriedformilesbythestormWhenthestormsstoptheanimalsfallThesamethingalsohappenedtootheranimalsinotherareasbutitsstillnotthatcommon导语本文是一篇说明文文章介绍说动物有时会从天上掉下来在洪都拉斯的约罗下过很多次银鱼雨科学家称龙卷风和水龙卷走了水中的动物并被风暴带到了数英里之外当风暴停止时动物们就会倒下同样的事情也发生在其他地区的其他动物身上但仍然不常见详解1要点摘录FishfrogsandevenspidershavefallenfromtheskyduringstormsYoroacityinHondurasisonesuchplaceHundredsofsilverfishfelllikewrigglingraindropsStormswithstrongwindssuchaswaterspoutsandtornadoescansuckupwaterastheypassoverriverslakesoroceansThewindswillalsosuckupwhateverisswimminginthatwaterThesestormscanthencarrytheanimalsformanymilesWhenthewindsstarttodiedowntheydropthewaterandanimalsOverallanimalrainstormsarentverycommonInmostyearsfewerthantenanimalstormsarereportedaroundtheworld2缜密构思将第1个要点进行总说将第234三个要点进行分说3遣词造句AnimalssometimesfallfromtheskyInYoroHondurasithasrainedsilverfishmanytimesScientistsclaimwaterspoutsandtornadoescanpickupanimalsfromwaterwhicharecarriedformilesbythestormWhenthestormsstoptheanimalsfallThesamethingalsohappenedtootheranimalsinotherareasbutitsstillnotthatcommon点睛高分句型1Scientistsclaimwaterspoutsandtornadoescanpickupanimalsfromwaterwhicharecarriedformilesbythestorm运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句高分句型2Thesamethingalsohappenedtootheranimalsinotherareasbutitsstillnotthatcommon用一个并列句对原文最后两段内容进行概括6AndreasSchleicherOECDSheadofeducationtalksaboutsomeofthetrendsthatareaffectingeducationsystemsThesetrendsincludethebroadeninggapbetweenrichandpoortheincreasingwealthinAsiamoreandmoremigrationfundingandincreasingdependencyontechnologyHoweverforworldspoorestchildrenthemainproblemistheiraccesstoschool导语本文是一篇说明文文章主要介绍了影响教育系统的一些趋势这些趋势包括贫富差距的扩大亚洲财富的增加越来越多的移民及教育系统对资金和对技术的依赖等对于贫穷的儿童来说他们很难拥有上学的机会详解1要点摘录TheOrganizationforEconomicCooperationandDevelopmentOECDwhichpromotespoliciesthatwillimprovetheeconomicandsocialwellbeingofpeoplearoundtheworldhasbeenlookingatthefutureofglobaleducationItsheadofeducationAndreasSchleicherhasbeentalkingaboutsomemajorinternationaltrendsaffectingeducationsystemsaroundtheworldOnetrendisthewideninggapbetweenrichandpoorAnothertrendistherisingwealthinAsiaIncreasingmigrationwillalsohaveanimpactoneducationsystemsTheriseindependencyontechnologyisanotherconcernButtheyremainirrelevantforhundredsofmillionsoftheworldspoorestchildrenwhodontevenhaveaccesstoschoolplacesorreceivesuchlowqualityeducationthattheyleavewithoutthemostbasicliteracyornumeracy2缜密构思将第和两个要点进行整合将第和四个要点进行整合3遣词造句FirstlythewideninggapbetweenrichandpooraffectseducationsystemsaroundtheworldSecondlyincreasingmigrationisanotherconcernLastbutnotleasttheriseindependencywillhaveanimpactoneducationsystems点睛高分句型1AndreasSchleicherOECDSheadofeducationtalksaboutsomeofthetrendsthatareaffectingeducationsystems运用了that引导的限制性定语从句对原文第一段行了概括高分句型2ThesetrendsincludethebroadeninggapbetweenrichandpoortheincreasingwealthinAsiamoreandmoremigrationfundingandincreasingdependencyontechnology运用了现在分词作定语对原文第二段到第五段行了概括7WiththeprogressofscienceandtechnologyrobotsaregrowingrapidlyunderthebackgroundofthewidespreadapplicationofsmartphonesHoweversomepeoplethinkrobotswilldestroyjobsIncontrastthepotentialbenefitsofrobotsinthefuturedevelopmentsuchasimprovedlearningskillsarehugeandshouldnotbeseenasareasonformassunemployment导语本文是一篇说明文文章介绍说随着科技进步机器人在智能手机广泛应用的背景下迅速成长然而有些人认为机器人会毁掉工作相反机器人在未来的发展中其潜在的收益是巨大的如提升学习技能而不应该视其为造成大规模失业的理由详解1要点摘录ThingsarestartingtochangehoweverRobotshavebenefitedfromrapidinnovationsinsmartphonesRobotsareleavingcarefullymanagedindustrialsettingsforeverydaylifeAndyetmanypeoplefearthatrobotswilldestroyjobsInevitablysomepeoplewillbeonthelosingendofchangeevenastherobotsmakesocietyasawholebetteroffAsjobschangeworkersshouldbehelpedtoacquirenewskillsThereisnoreasontothinktherobotswillrevoltagainsttheirhumanmastersandcausemassunemploymentandworse2缜密构思将第14两个要点进行重组将第23两个要点进行整合3遣词造句DuringthepandemicrobotshavereachedouttomoreelderlypeopleHavingmorerobotsincreasesproductivitywhichisagoodthingUsingrobotscanteachgovernmentsandbusinessesthevalueofretrainingandlifelonglearningInconclusionweshouldnotattributemassunemploymentorsomeotherworsesituationtorobots点睛高分句型1Withtheprogressofscienceandtechnologyrobotsaregrowingrapidlyunderthebackgroundofthewidespreadapplicationofsmartphones运用with的复合结构交代了机器人使人类受益的背景对第二段内容进行总结写法高级高分句型2Inconctrastthepotentialbenefitsofrobotsinthefuturedevelopmentsuchasimprovedlearningskillsarehugeandshouldnotbeseenasareasonformassunemployment运用了情态动词的被动语态以及介词短语作状语对最后三段的部分内容进行概括用法比较高级8MathephobiaisdefinedasageneralfearofsolvingmathsproblemswhichusuallystartsatschoolandisrevealedthroughtestsGirlsdevelopmathephobiamoreeasilyundertheinfluenceofmathanxiousfemaleteachersChildrensufferpoorperformanceinmathwhenburdenedwithworryoveritFurthermoreattempttoevadetheproblemmayworsenthesituation导语本文是一篇说明文文章介绍说数学恐惧症被定义为对解决数学问题的普遍恐惧它通常从学校开始通过测试被发现在对数学焦虑的女教师的影响下女生更容易产生数学恐惧症孩子们在数学上的表现很差因为他们对数学感到忧虑此外试图逃避问题可能会使情况恶化详解1要点摘录OtherexpertshavedefineditasthepanichelplessnessandmentaldisorganizationthatarisesamongsomepeoplewhentheyarerequiredtosolveamathematicalproblemandageneralfearofcontactwithmathematicsSianBeilockacognitivescientistandhercolleaguesofBarnardCollegeinNewYorkhaveshownthatmathanxietycanstartassoonasweenterformalschoolingMathisoneofthefirstplacesinschoolinwesterncultureswherewereallylearnaboutwhetherwegotsomethingrightorwrongandareexposedtobeingevaluatedintimedtestsGirlsmaybemorepronetoitthanboysPrimaryschoolteachersoftenhavehighlevelsofmathanxietysaysBeilockandintheUSandelsewheretheyaremostlyfemaleSinceyoungchildrentendtoidentifywithadultsofthesamegenderthismeansgirlsaremorelikelytopickupmathanxietyfromtheirfemaleteachersOnceyouhaveititcanbeselflastingWorryingaboutitcanmakeitworsesaysBeilockwhosestudyofchildrenbetweentheagesoffiveandeightsuggestsmathanxietymightweakenperformancebyburdeningworkingmemoryWhenpeoplehavemathanxietytheytendtoavoidthesubjectasresearchersfrom2019showButsincemathbuildsonitselfavoidingitmakesithardertocatchup2缜密构思将第12两个要点进行整合将345三个要点进行重组3遣词造句MathephobiaisdefinedasageneralfearofsolvingmathsproblemswhichusuallystartsatschoolandisrevealedthroughtestsGirlsdevelopmathephobiamoreeasilyundertheinfluenceofmathanxiousfemaleteachersChildrensufferpoorperformanceinmathwhenburdenedwithworryoveritFurthermoreattempttoevadetheproblemmayworsenthesituation点睛高分句型1Mathephobiaisdefinedasageneralfearofsolvingmathsproblemswhichusuallystartsatschoolandisrevealedthroughtests运用一个复杂的主从复合句对原文第一段和第二段进行了概括其中which引导的非限制性定语从句表达高级高分句型2Childrensufferpoorperformanceinmathwhenburdenedwithworryoverit用when引导的时间状语从句对第四段进行了概括从句中省略了主语be动词表达非常高级9ReferenceanswerInthiscenturyglobalcooperationinscienceandtechnologyisdesirablebecausenosinglescientistcanbeaknowallduetothecomplexityofresearchanddevelopmentScientistsareworkingtogethertomakebreakthroughsTheyalsomanagetosolveproblemsbysharingideasandinformationfreelyGonearethedayswhenoneexpertcanmakeitalone56words导语本文是一篇说明文文章介绍说在21世纪我们看到了一种推动人类发明和创新边界的新趋势全球合作本文对全球合作出现的背景和采用的方法进行了描述详解1要点摘录Inthe21stcenturyweveseenanewtrendthatispushingtheboundariesofhumaninventionandinnovationglobalcooperationScientificandtechnicalresearchanddevelopmentisnowsocomplicatedthatnoonescientistcanknowitallProfessorBobLangeratMassachusettsInstituteofTechnologyMIThasmadesignificantbreakthroughsinthefieldofbiomedicalengineeringHehasinvitedexpertsfromaroundtheworldindifferentfieldstoformaglobalteamtodesignnewsubstanceswhichcangoinsidethebodydelivermedicinesandthendissolveHesharedhisownideasonthewebforfreeandthengotexpertsfromallaroundtheworldtocontributeideasandevendonationsItappearsthatthedaysofbrilliantindividualsworkingintheirgaragesontheirownareover2缜密构思将第1个要点进行整合将第234三个要点进行重组3遣词造句InthiscenturyglobalcooperationinscienceandtechnologyisdesirablebecausenosinglescientistcanbeaknowallduetothecomplexityofresearchanddevelopmentScientistsareworkingtogethertomakebreakthroughsTheyalsomanagetosolveproblemsbysharingideasandinformationfreelyGonearethedayswhenoneexpertcanmakeitalone点睛高分句型1Inthiscenturyglobalcooperationinscienceandtechnologyisdesirablebecausenosinglescientistcanbeaknowallduetothecomplexityofresearchanddevelopment运用一个复杂的主从复合句对原文第一段进行了概括其中because引导的原因状语从句表达高级高分句型2Gonearethedayswhenoneexpertcanmakeitalone用表语提前的部分倒装句和when引导的定语从句对最后一段进行了概括表达非常高级10AsparentsweshouldeducateourchildrenhowtoadapttotheoutsideworldBecausethechallengesaredifferentweareboundtoteachthemtoloveandcooperateratherthancompeteChildrenaresupposedtolearntoprotectnatureandknowtheimportanceoflovethoughoursenseofcompetitionmakesithardforustolove导语本文是一篇说明文文章主要介绍了在当今这个社会作为家长我们应该教育孩子为未来做好准备如今我们面临的挑战已经和过去大不一样我们应该教会孩子如何去爱和合作而不是一味地竞争只不过长期的竞争已经让我们变得麻木很难去爱详解1要点摘录ToadjustyoubabytotheexternalworldeducatinghimisyourmainassignmentThereforeitisurgentthatthephilosophyofpreparingourchildrenforcompetitionandpowerbereplacedbyoneofpreparingthemforloveandcooperationWemusteducateourchildrensothattheywanttopreservenatureanditcaninreturnmakethemmorepowerfulandcapableinsocietyButitisgettinghardertolove2缜密构思将第12要点重组将第34要点进行整合3遣词造句AsparentsweshouldeducateourchildrenhowtoadapttotheoutsideworldBecausethechallengesaredifferentweareboundtoteachthemtoloveandcooperateratherthancompeteChildrenaresupposedtolearntoprotectnatureandknowtheimportanceoflovethoughoursenseofcompetitionmakesithardforustolove点睛高分句型1Becausethechallengesaredifferentweareboundtoteachthemtoloveandcooperateratherthancompete运用了一个复杂的从句对原文第二段和第三段进行了概括其中because引导的为原因状语从句高分句型2Childrenaresupposedtolearntoprotectnatureandknowtheimportanceoflovethoughoursenseofcompetitionmakesithardforustolove用一个复杂的主从复合句对原文的第四段和第五段进行了概括其中though引导的为让步状语从句