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建议信1根据以下要点以WATER为题写一篇120字左右的短文1水的重要性人们的生活离不开水2水资源越来越缺乏请列举原因如人口增长水资源遭到污染等3我们必须2假定你是高三学生李华你的笔友Bob是一名高一新生他发来邮件询问Whattolearninseniorhighschool请根据以下要点给他回复一封邮件1学会学习方法习惯等2学会做人真诚友善等3学会注意1词数80词左右开头结尾已给出不计入总词数2可适当增加细节以使行文连贯DearBobIamgladtosharewithyoumyopinionsonwhattolearninseniorhighschoolYoursLiHua3假设你是李华得知你的笔友Jack和他的好友Mike最近关系很紧张他很沮丧请你给Jack回封信内容包括1表示安慰2建议朋友相处之道注意1词数80个左右2可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯4请你以你校学生会的名义写一则关于成立英语阅读俱乐部Englishbookclub的英语通知内容包括1阅读在生活中的重要性2成立英语阅读俱乐部的目的3欢迎报名参加及提供建议注意1词数100左右2可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯3通知的标题和结尾已为你写好不计入总词数TheStudentUnionNOTICEJune1020205假定你是李华你在英国参加夏令营时那里有来自多国的中学生夏令营团队当地计划为你们举行联谊晚会请你写一封邮件告知对方你所在的团队将应邀参加本次活动内容包括1写信目的2你所在团队准备的节目3合理建议注意1词数100左右2可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯6假定你是李华你所在的城市将有一场面向外国留学生的讲座Mike是你的留学生朋友你决定给他写封邮件告知该讲座的有关信息内容包括1讲座的时间和地点2讲座内容中国的名胜3建议他去听这个讲座注意1写作词数应为80左右2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答7假设你是校刊编辑李华近期收到一封署名为MissAnxiety的求助信在信中该同学表示由于考试临近压力剧增请用英文给该同学回信内容要点如下1表示安慰2提出建议3表达祝愿注意1词数80左右2可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯3信的开头与结尾已为你写好不计入总词数DearMissAnxietyYoursLiHua8假定你是李华你的英国朋友Leslie给你发邮件告知她参加汉语水平考试HSK未能通过请你根据下列要点写一封邮件回复她内容包括1对考试失利给予安慰2对汉语学习提出建议注意1词数100左右2可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯3开头语已为你写好不计入总词数DearLeslieIamsorrytohearthatyoufailedtopasstheHSKYoursLiHua9假定你是高一学生李华你校学生将在暑假进行读一本好书的活动以鼓励每个学生都参与到阅读当中你的英国朋友Leslie给你发邮件询问相关情况请你根据下列要点写一封邮件回复她1目前存在的一些不良现象2阅读的好处3你的建议注意1词数100左右开头已写好不计入词数2可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯DearLeslieWeareassignedtogetinvolvedintheactivitytoreadagoodbookinoursummerholidaywhichIthinkisgreatlymeaningfulYoursLiHua10假定你是健康专家李帆下面是胡波给你写的一封征求建议的信请你参照这篇短文及提示给胡波写一封信给他适当的建议并鼓励他DearLiFanPleasehelpmeIamafatteenagerMyclassmateslaughatmealotIdontdosportandmyfavouritemealisahamburgerchipsandsoftdrinksIsthisreallysuchaproblemIdontenjoyexerciseitmakesmetiredAlsoImhungryallthetimeandlovetoeatfastfoodWhatshouldIdoDoyouthinkIshouldtakesomeweightlosspillsWhataboutexerciseandfoodPleasedonttellmetostopeatingBestwishesHuBo注意1请勿提及与考生有关的真实信息2可以适当增加细节使行文连贯3词数100左右开头和结尾已给出不计人总词数DearHuBoIwassosadwhenIheardthatpeoplelaughedatyouforbeingalittleoverweightPleasewritebackandtellmewhatyouthinkaboutmyplanBestwishesLiFan1WATERWateristhebasicsourceoflifeWaterisveryimportantforusWemustdrinkwatereverydayWecantlivewithoutwaterButwiththeworldsgrowingpopulationandfastdevelopingeconomiestheworldswaterreservesaredryingupfastWhatsmorealotofriversandlakesarebeginningpollutedbythewastewaterfromfactoriesFishcantliveinthemanylongerAtthesametimethewastewaterdoesgreatharmtopeopleshealthWeshouldsavewaterFirstlytakeshortershowersanddontleavethetaprunningwhenwedontneedtousewaterSecondlytrytoreusewaterItsthemostimportantwayforustosavewaterAtlastweshouldnotpollutewatersothatwewillhavefreshwaterforyearsandyearsInawordwaterisveryimportantandweshoulddoasmuchaswecantosavewaterinoureverydaylife分析本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文要求考生写一篇短文介绍水的重要性水资源越来越缺乏的问题及我们必须采取哪些措施来改善这个问题详解第一步审题体裁说明文时态根据提示时态应为一般现在时个别表达需要用到一般将来时和现在进行时结构三部分第一部分介绍水的重要性引出主题第二部分阐述水资源越来越缺乏的问题及我们必须采取哪些措施来改善这个问题第三部分再次呼吁节约用水要求1介绍水的重要性人们的生活离不开水2介绍水资源越来越缺乏的现状请列举原因如人口增长水资源遭到污染等3阐述我们必须采取哪些措施来改善这个问题第二步列提纲重点单词及词组population人口economy经济reserve储备dryup枯竭干涸pollute污染notanylonger不再reuse重复使用doharmto损害伤害第三步连词成句1Wateristhebasicsourceoflife2Butwiththeworldsgrowingpopulationandfastdevelopingeconomiestheworldswaterreservesaredryingupfast3Alotofriversandlakesarebeginningpollutedbythewastewaterfromfactories4Itsthemostimportantwayforustosavewater5Weshouldnotpollutewatersothatwewillhavefreshwaterforyearsandyears6Waterisveryimportantandweshoulddoasmuchaswecantosavewaterinoureverydaylife根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句注意主谓一致和时态问题第四步连句成篇衔接词1表文章结构顺序firstofalltobeginwithfirstly本篇文章使用过firstsecondly本篇文章使用过secondandthenfinallyintheendatlast本篇文章使用过2表并列补充关系Whatsmore本篇文章使用过besidesmoreoverfurthermoreinadditionadditionallynotonlybutalsoaswellasbothand3表转折对比关系buthoweveronthecontraryinsteadalthoughinspiteofontheonehandontheotherhandsomewhileothers4表因果关系becausebecauseofforsosincethusthereforeasaresultwhy5表总结inshortinaword本篇文章使用过inconclusioninsummaryallinallgenerallyspeaking连句成文注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡书写一定要规范清晰第五步润色修改根据写作内容需要加入高级句式如名词性从句定语从句状语从句等Firstlytakeshortershowersanddontleavethetaprunning本句用来提出第一个节约用水的建议可以使用时间状语从句进一步描述什么时候不要让水龙头里的水一直流润色修改为Firstlytakeshortershowersanddontleavethetaprunningwhenwedontneedtousewater点睛范文内容完整要点全面语言规范语篇连贯词数适当上下文意思连贯符合逻辑关系作者在范文中合理使用了复合句如Firstlytakeshortershowersanddontleavethetaprunningwhenwedontneedtousewater这句话为when引导的时间状语从句其次使用了一些固定短语如dryupnotanylongerdoharmto等使语言更加丰富同时使用了一些高级词汇如populationeconomyreservepollute等让语言更加地道全文中没有中国式英语的句式显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力另外文章思路清晰层次分明上下句转换自然为文章增色添彩2DearBobIamgladtosharewithyoumyopinionsonwhattolearninseniorhighschoolFirstyoushouldlearntolearnefficientlyPersonallyIusedtotryeffectivemethodstoachievemyacademicgoalsDevelopingagoodhabitisalsoofimportanceItreallybenefitedmealottopreviewlessonsgetactivelyinvolvedinclassandreviewwhathadbeentaughtafterclassInadditionyoushouldlearnhowtogetalongwellwithothersFinallyyoushouldtakepartinsportsandoutdooractivitiesfrequentlywhichwerereallyhelpfultobuildupmybodyandenrichmyschoollifeIamsurethatwithgreateffortsyouwillenjoyacolorfulandfruitfullifeinseniorhighschoolYoursLiHua分析本篇书面表达属于应用文要求考生写一封邮件给此前向你询问Whattolearninseniorhighschool的笔友Bob给予他高中学什么的建议详解第一步审题体裁应用文时态根据提示时态应为一般现在时结构总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说把支持句作为分说并以这种方式安排所写内容要求1学会学习方法习惯等2学会做人真诚友善等3学会第二步列提纲重点词组usedtodosthbenefitsbgetinvolvedinsthgetalongwellwithsbtakepartinsthbuilduponesbody第三步连词成句1Iusedtotryeffectivemethodstoachievemyacademicgoals2Itreallybenefitedmealottopreviewlessonsgetactivelyinvolvedinclass3youshouldlearnhowtogetalongwellwithothers4youshouldtakepartinsportsandoutdooractivitiesfrequentlywhichwerereallyhelpfultobuildupmybodyandenrichmyschoollife根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句注意主谓一致和时态问题第四步连句成篇衔接词1表文章结构顺序FirstofallFirstlyFirstSecondlySecondAndthenFinallyIntheendAtlastLastbutnotleast2表并列补充关系WhatismoreBesidesMoreoverFurthermoreInadditionAswellasnotonlybutalsoincludingalso3表转折对比关系HoweverOnthecontrarybutAlthoughclause从句InspiteofndoingOntheonehandOntheotherhandSomewhileothersasforsothat4表因果关系BecauseAsSoThusThereforeAsaresult5表换一种方式表达Inotherwordsthatistosay6表进行举例说明ForexampleForinstancesuchasndoing7表陈述事实Infactfranklyspeaking8表选择eitheroror连句成文注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡书写一定要规范清晰第五步润色修改点睛范文内容完整结构严谨要点全面语言规范语篇连贯词数适当上下文意思连贯符合逻辑关系作者在范文中使用了主从复合句如Itreallybenefitedmealottopreviewlessonsgetactivelyinvolvedinclassandreviewwhathadbeentaughtafterclass这句话中用了what引导的宾语从句如Finallyyoushouldtakepartinsportsandoutdooractivitiesfrequentlywhichwerereallyhelpfultobuildupmybodyandenrichmyschoollife这句话中用了which引导的非限制性定语从句使用了非常好的短语如usedtodosthgetinvolvedinsthtakepartinsthbuilduponesbody等为文章增色不少并注意了句子的衔接如FirstInadditionFinally全文中没有中国式英语的句式显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力另外文章思路清晰层次分明上下句转换自然为文章增色添彩3OnepossibleversionDearJackIamsorrytohearofyourtroublethatyouhavesomeconflictswithyourfriendMikeNowIamwritingtoyoutoexpresswhatIthinkweshoulddotogetalongwellwithourfriendsItiseasytomakefriendsbutnoteasytomakegoodonesOfcoursetheconceptofagoodfriendvariesfrompersontopersonInmyopinionagoodfriendshouldhavethefollowingbasicqualitiesFirstagoodfriendmustbeanhonestpersonGoodfriendsshouldbehonestwitheachotherSecondagoodfriendmustbeakindandhelpfulpersonGoodfriendsshouldhelpeachotheriftheyareintroubleAsthesayinggoesafriendinneedisafriendindeedThirdwhoeveristhroughthickandthinmustbeyourgoodfriendInawordfriendsaremutualIhopethatbythetimethisletterreachesyouyouwillbefeelingmuchbetterYourssincerelyLiHua分析本篇表达属于应用文要求考生写信安慰朋友并给出朋友相处的建议详解第一步审题体裁应用文时态根据提示时态应为一般现在时要求1表示安慰2建议朋友相处之道第二步列提纲重点词组haveconflictswithgetalongwellvaryfromintroublemutual第三步连词成句1IamsorrytohearofyourtroublethatyouhavesomeconflictswithyourfriendMike2NowIamwritingtoyoutoexpresswhatIthinkweshoulddotogetalongwellwithourfriends3Ofcoursetheconceptofagoodfriendvariesfrompersontoperson4Goodfriendsshouldhelpeachotheriftheyareintrouble5Inawordfriendsaremutual根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句注意主谓一致和时态问题第四步连句成篇衔接词1表文章结构顺序FirstofallFirstlyFirstSecondlySecondAndthenFinallyIntheendAtlast2表并列补充关系WhatismoreBesidesMoreoverFurthermoreInadditionAswellasnotonlybutalsoincluding3表转折对比关系HoweverOnthecontrarybutAlthoughclause从句InspiteofndoingOntheonehandOntheotherhandSomewhileothersasforsothat4表因果关系BecauseAsSoThusThereforeAsaresult连句成文注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡书写一定要规范清晰第五步润色修改点睛范文内容完整要点全面语言规范语篇连贯词数适当上下文意思连贯符合逻辑关系作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句如IamsorrytohearofyourtroublethatyouhavesomeconflictswithyourfriendMike这句话运用了同位语从句NowIamwritingtoyoutoexpresswhatIthinkweshoulddotogetalongwellwithourfriends运用了宾语从句固定搭配运用了如haveconflictswithgetalongwellvaryfromintroublemutual等全文中没有中国式英语的句式显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力另外文章思路清晰层次分明上下句转换自然为文章增色添彩4TheStudentUnionNOTICEReadingisveryimportantintodaysworldaswegainvastknowledgeofhowtheworldworksmainlythroughvarietiesofreadingmaterialssodevelopingreadingabilityissomethingthatmustbedonetomeetvariouschallengesinlifeToencouragethestudentstobecomegreatEnglishreaderstheStudentUnionwillsetupanEnglishbookclubthataimstocreateanenvironmentwheretheycanspendtimereadingtogetherhavebookdiscussionssharegoodbooksandattendlecturesonreadingThosewhoareinterestedinthebookclubpleasesignupintheStudentUnionofficebyJune20andanycreativesuggestionsandideasarewelcomeJune102020分析本篇表达属于应用文要求考生写出成立英语俱乐部的通知强调阅读的重要性欢迎同学参加详解第一步审题体裁应用文时态根据提示时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时要求1阅读在生活中的重要性2成立英语阅读俱乐部的目的3欢迎报名参加及提供建议第二步列提纲重点词组vastknowledgevarietiesofvariouschallengessetupbeinterestedin第三步连词成句1aswegainvastknowledgeofhowtheworldworksmainlythroughvarietiesofreadingmaterials2sodevelopingreadingabilityissomethingthatmustbedonetomeetvariouschallengesinlife3theStudentUnionwillsetupanEnglishbookclubthataimstocreateanenvironmentwheretheycanspendtimereadingtogetherhavebookdiscussionssharegoodbooksandattendlecturesonreading4ThosewhoareinterestedinthebookclubpleasesignupintheStudentUnionofficebyJune20根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句注意主谓一致和时态问题第四步连句成篇衔接词1表文章结构顺序FirstofallFirstlyFirstSecondlySecondAndthenFinallyIntheendAtlast2表并列补充关系WhatismoreBesidesMoreoverFurthermoreInadditionAswellasnotonlybutalsoincluding3表转折对比关系HoweverOnthecontrarybutAlthoughclause从句InspiteofndoingOntheonehandOntheotherhandSomewhileothersasforsothat4表因果关系BecauseAsSoThusThereforeAsaresult连句成文注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡书写一定要规范清晰第五步润色修改点睛范文内容完整要点全面语言规范语篇连贯词数适当上下文意思连贯符合逻辑关系作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句如sodevelopingreadingabilityissomethingthatmustbedonetomeetvariouschallengesinlife这句话运用了定语从句先行词是something不定代词做主语连接词用thatToencouragethestudentstobecomegreatEnglishreaderstheStudentUnionwillsetupanEnglishbookclubthataimstocreateanenvironmentwheretheycanspendtimereadingtogetherhavebookdiscussionssharegoodbooksandattendlecturesonreading运用了非谓语动词todo做目的后半句用了定语从句先行词是environment先行词在从句中做地点状语连接词用where全文中没有中国式英语的句式显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力另外文章思路清晰层次分明上下句转换自然为文章增色添彩5DearSirIamLiHuaandIamtakingpartinthesummercampintheUKwheretherearemanymiddleschoolstudentssummercampteamfromdifferentcountriesIamgladtohearthatyouareplanningforustoholdafriendshippartyIamwritingtosignupforthepartyShouldIattendthepartyIwouldsingaChineseforksongforalltheparticipantsBesidesmyteamhaspreparedatraditionaldancewhichwillreflectChinesecustomsIsuggestthatyouinvitemoreparticipantstotakepartinthepartysowecangetalongwitheachotherbetterYoursLiHua分析这是一篇提纲类写作详解第1步根据提示可知假定你是李华你在英国参加夏令营时那里有来自多国的中学生夏令营团队当地计划为你们举行联谊晚会请你写一封邮件告知对方你所在的团队将应邀参加本次活动内容包括1写信目的2你所在团队准备的节目3合理建议第2步根据写作要求确定关键词组takepartin参加thesummercamp夏令营friendship友谊signupfor报名参加等第3步根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句注意主谓一致和时态问题此处文章主要应用一般现在时第4步连句成文注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡书写一定要规范清晰保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的点睛范文内容完整语言规范语篇连贯词数适当作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式如ShouldIattendthepartyIwouldsingaChineseforksongforalltheparticipants运用了虚拟语气的省略BesidesmyteamhaspreparedatraditionaldancewhichwillreflectChinesecustoms运用非限制性定语从句全文中没有中国式英语的句式显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力另外文章思路清晰层次分明上下句转换自然为文章增色添彩6DearMikeGoodnewsforyouTherewillbealectureforforeignstudentsat9onSaturdaymorninginthecitytrainingcenterThelectureisaboutplacesofinterestinChinaSowhydontyouattenditItsreallyagoodopportunityforyouasyouaresointerestedintravellinginChinaNotonlywillyoulearnmoreaboutfamousplacesinChinabutyouwillalsogetabetterunderstandingofChinesecultureandhistoryLookingforwardtoyourreplyYoursLiHua分析这是一篇提纲类写作详解第1步根据提示可知假定你是李华你所在的城市将有一场面向外国留学生的讲座Mike是你的留学生朋友你决定给他写封邮件告知该讲座的有关信息内容包括1讲座的时间和地点2讲座内容中国的名胜3建议他去听这个讲座第2步根据写作要求确定关键词组placesofinterest名胜古迹attend出席参加opportunity机会getabetterunderstandingof更好地理解等第3步根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句注意主谓一致和时态问题此处文章主要应用一般将来时第4步连句成文注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡书写一定要规范清晰保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的点睛范文内容完整语言规范语篇连贯词数适当作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式如ItsreallyagoodopportunityforyouasyouaresointerestedintravellinginChina运用原因状语从句NotonlywillyoulearnmoreaboutfamousplacesinChinabutyouwillalsogetabetterunderstandingofChinesecultureandhistory运用倒装句全文中没有中国式英语的句式显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力另外文章思路清晰层次分明上下句转换自然为文章增色添彩7DearMissAnxietyImsorrytoknowthatyouareexperiencingatoughtimenowActuallyeveryonewillencountersuchaperiodwhentheyareundergreatpressuresothereisnoneedtoworrytoomuchInmyopinionsharingyourfeelingswithyourfriendsisawisechoiceasyoucanremoveyournegativeemotionsAnothereffectivesuggestionisthatyoushouldtakemorephysicalexercisewhichcanliftyourspiritAlsokeepanoptimisticattitudetowardslifeaboutyourfutureIhopemyadvicewillbeofbenefittoyouMayyougetridofyourtroublesoonYoursLiHua分析这篇书面表达是一篇应用文写作假设你是校刊编辑李华近期收到一封署名为MissAnxiety的求助信在信中该同学表示由于考试临近压力剧增请用英文给该同学回信详解假设你是校刊编辑李华近期收到一封署名为MissAnxiety的求助信在信中该同学表示由于考试临近压力剧增请用英文给该同学回信内容要点如下1表示安慰2提出建议3表达祝愿分析可知应该以第一人称为主一般现在时为主进行写作考生要先想好写哪几点运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来描述要尽量选择简洁的语言难点在于选择词汇和句型可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来这样文章显得更连贯点睛这篇书面表达的关键在于句子内容的准确表述同时注意谋篇布局的顺序运用合适的连接词连接全文同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采Anothereffectivesuggestionisthatyoushouldtakemorephysicalexercisewhichcanliftyourspirit表语从句和非限制性定语从句的运用Ihopemyadvicewillbeofbenefittoyou宾语从句的运用8DearLeslieIamsorrytohearthatyoufailedtopassHSKIhopethattheunexpectedfailurewillnotletyoudownforIhavestillbeenamazedbytheexcellentChineseyouspokewhenwefirstmetAsweallknowlanguagelearningisneveraneasytaskbutneedsgreateffortsandpatiencePersonallyIthinkyoudbetterpaycloseattentiontotheformaluseofChinesewordsandexpressionswhichreallycountsMeanwhileyoumayaswellreadasmanyChinesematerialsasyoucanMoreimportantlyyoushouldlearnfromthemistakesthatyouhavemadeAnywayyouvealreadymadegreatprogressinyourlearningofChineseGoodlucknexttimeYoursLiHua分析本篇书面表达属于应用文要求考生写一封邮件表达对朋友考试失利的安慰和给与汉语学习的建议详解第一步审题体裁应用文时态根据提示时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时结构三段式结构第一段表达安慰第二段给与汉语学习的建议第三段寒暄结束要求1表达安慰hopenotletyoudown2给与汉语学习建议1需要努力和耐心greateffortsandpatience2关注词汇和表达的正式用法paycloseattentiontotheformaluseofChinesewordsandexpressions3阅读汉语材料readasmanyChinesematerialsasyoucan4从错误中吸取教训learnfromthemistakes3寒暄结束Goodlucknexttime第二步列提纲重点词组letsbdownasweallknowhadbetterpayattentiontomayaswelldoasasyoucanlearnfrommakegreatprogressgoodluck第三步连词成句1IhopethattheunexpectedfailurewillnotletyoudownforIhavestillbeenamazedbytheexcellentChineseyouspokewhenwefirstmet2Asweallknowlanguagelearningisneveraneasytaskbutneedsgreateffortsandpatience3PersonallyIthinkyoudbetterpaycloseattentiontotheformaluseofChinesewordsandexpressionswhichreallycounts4MeanwhileyoumayaswellreadasmanyChinesematerialsasyoucan5Moreimportantlyyoushouldlearnfromthemistakesthatyouhavemade6AnywayyouvealreadymadegreatprogressinyourlearningofChinese7Goodlucknexttime根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句注意主谓一致和时态问题第四步连句成篇衔接词连句成文注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡书写一定要规范清晰第五步润色修改点睛范文内容完整要点全面语言规范语篇连贯词数适当上下文意思连贯符合逻辑关系1作者在范文中使用了主从复合句如IhopethattheunexpectedfailurewillnotletyoudownforIhavestillbeenamazedbytheexcellentChineseyouspokewhenwefirstmet我希望这次意外的失败不会让你失望因为我们第一次见面时你说的一口流利的中文仍然让我惊叹不已这句话运用了that引导宾语从句同时forIhavestillbeenamazedbytheexcellentChineseyouspokewhenwefirstmet为原因状语从句PersonallyIthinkyoudbetterpaycloseattentiontotheformaluseofChinesewordsandexpressionswhichreallycounts就我个人而言我认为你最好密切注意汉语单词和短语的正式用法这才是真正重要的这句话中which引导非限制性定语从句Moreimportantlyyoushouldlearnfromthemistakesthatyouhavemade更重要的是你应该从你所犯的错误中吸取教训这句话中that引导限制性定语从句2使用了一些固定词组如letsbdownasweallknowhadbetterpayattentiontomayaswelldoasasyoucanlearnfrommakegreatprogressgoodluck等全文中没有中国式英语的句式显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力另外文章思路清晰层次分明上下句转换自然为文章增色添彩9DearLeslieWeareassignedtogetinvolvedintheactivitytoreadagoodbookinoursummerholidaywhichIthinkisgreatlymeaningfulAsweknownowadaysalotofstudentsprefertospendmuchtimeinwatchingTVandtheyarecrazyabouttheInternetSomostofthemdonthaveenoughtimetoreadbooksAndwhatsworsetheydontlikereadingHoweverreadingisnecessaryIfirmlythinkthatbyreadingnotonlycanweenrichourlifeandbroadenourhorizonsbutalsowecanlearntoperfectourpersonalityNowthatreadingisgoodforusletsdevelopagoodhabitofreadingIstronglysuggestthateveryoneofusshouldreadatleastoneortwogoodbookseverytermYoursLiHua分析本篇书面表达属于应用文要求考生写一封邮件向朋友介绍学校举办的读一本好书活动的相关情况以及个人建议详解第一步审题体裁应用文时态根据提示时态应为一般现在时结构三段式结构第一段为写信背景已给出第二段讲述关于活动的相关情况第三段提出个人建议要求1写信背景2关于活动的相关情况1原因不良现象的存在prefertospendmuchtimeinwatchingTVbecrazyabouttheInternet2阅读的好处necessaryenrichourlifeandbroadenourhorizonsperfectourpersonality3个人建议suggestreadatleastoneortwogoodbookseveryterm第二步列提纲重点词组prefertospendmuchtimedoingbecrazyaboutwhatsworsenotonlybutalsoenrichourlifeandbroadenourhorizonsperfectourpersonalitydevelopagoodhabitofdoingatleast第三步连词成句1AsweknownowadaysalotofstudentsprefertospendmuchtimeinwatchingTVandtheyarecrazyabouttheInternet2Andwhatsworsetheydontlikereading3Ifirmlythinkthatbyreadingnotonlycanweenrichourlifeandbroadenourhorizonsbutalsowecanlearntoperfectourpersonality4Nowthatreadingisgoodforusletsdevelopagoodhabitofreading5Istronglysuggestthateveryoneofusshouldreadatleastoneortwogoodbookseveryterm根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句注意主谓一致和时态问题第四步连句成篇衔接词连句成文注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡书写一定要规范清晰第五步润色修改点睛范文内容完整要点全面语言规范语篇连贯词数适当上下文意思连贯符合逻辑关系1作者在范文中使用了高级句式结构和一些主从复合句如Ifirmlythinkthatbyreadingnotonlycanweenrichourlifeandbroadenourhorizonsbutalsowecanlearntoperfectourpersonality我坚定地认为通过阅读不仅可以丰富我们的生活开阔我们的视野而且我们可以学习完善我们的人格这句话运用了notonlybutalso并列句结构且在that宾语从句中将notonly置于从句句首部分而使用了部分倒装句式Nowthatreadingisgoodforusletsdevelopagoodhabitofreading既然阅读对我们有好处就让我们养成阅读的好习惯吧这句话中nowthat引导原因状语从句Istronglysuggestthateveryoneofusshouldreadatleastoneortwogoodbookseveryterm我强烈建议我们每个人每学期至少要读一到两本好书这句话中that引导宾语从句且由于谓语suggest意为建议that引导的宾语从句为虚拟语气句式结构2使用了一些固定词组如prefertospendmuchtimedoingbecrazyaboutwhatsworsenotonlybutalsoenrichourlifeandbroadenourhorizonsperfectourpersonalitydevelopagoodhabitofdoingatleast等全文中没有中国式英语的句式显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力另外文章思路清晰层次分明上下句转换自然为文章增色添彩10DearHuBoIwassosadwhenIheardthatpeoplelaughedatyouforbeingalittleoverweightPleaseknowthatIamatruefriendandthatIdontlaughatyouorhavebadfeelingstowardsyouIthinkyoulookgoodbutyoullbecomehealthierandfeelbetteraboutyourselfifyoulosealittleweightIfitisanycomforttoyouIhavealsoputonsomeweightrecentlyandsoperhapsIcangoonadietalongwithyouHeresagreatideawhydontyouplaybasketballwithmenextSaturdayItwouldhelpyougetsomeexerciseanditwouldalsobegreatfunWecandothistogetherPleasewritebackandtellmewhatyouthinkaboutmyplanBestwishesLiFan分析本篇书面表达属于应用文要求考生给胡波写一封回信给他适当的建议并鼓励他详解第一步审题体裁应用文时态根据提示时态应为一般现在时第二步列提纲重点词组laughatoverweighttruefriendhavebadfeelingstowardssbfeelbetteraboutoneselfloseweightcomfortputonweightalongwithsbgetsomeexercisethinkabout第三步连词成句1IwassosadwhenIheardthatpeoplelaughedatyouforbeingalittleoverweight2PleaseknowthatIamatruefriendandthatIdontlaughatyouorhavebadfeelingstowardsyou3Ithinkyoulookgoodbutyoullbecomehealthierandfeelbetteraboutyourselfifyoulosealittleweight4IfitisanycomforttoyouIhavealsoputonsomeweightrecentlyandsoperhapsIcangoonadietalongwithyou5HeresagreatideawhydontyouplaybasketballwithmenextSaturday6Itwouldhelpyougetsomeexerciseanditwouldalsobegreatfun7Wecandothistogether8Pleasewritebackandtellmewhatyouthinkaboutmyplan根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句注意主谓一致和时态问题第四步连句成篇衔接词1表文章结构顺序FirstofallFirstlyFirstSecondlySecondAndthenFinallyIntheendAtlast2表并列补充关系WhatismoreBesidesMoreoverFurthermoreInadditionAswellasnotonlybutalsoincluding3表转折对比关系HoweverOnthecontrarybutAlthoughclause从句InspiteofndoingOntheonehandOntheotherhandSomewhileothersasforsothat4表因果关系BecauseAsSoThusThereforeAsaresult连句成文注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡书写一定要规范清晰第五步润色修改点睛范文内容完整要点全面语言规范语篇连贯词数适当上下文意思连贯符合逻辑关系作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句如IwassosadwhenIheardthatpeoplelaughedatyouforbeingalittleoverweight这句话运用了when引导的时间状语从句使用了一些固定词组如laughatloseweightputonweight等全文中没有中国式英语的句式显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力另外文章思路清晰层次分明上下句转换自然为文章增色添彩