2022高考英语写作专题复习之推荐信.doc

2022高考英语写作专题复习之推荐信 目录 内容 Part A 题目呈现 Part B 谋篇布局 短语句式罗列 解析题目内容；确定行文要点 罗列关键词以及必备表达 话题词汇写作储备 句式升级美化 Part C 写作模板总结 Part D 学生作文点评 范文赏析 学生习作点评 学生习作美化升级 Part E 课后练笔巩固提升 Part A 题目呈现 假如你是李明；现想给朋友推荐一部你最喜欢的电影；以此写一封推荐信 1：推荐你最喜欢的电影名称 2：写上2-3条推荐理由 Part B 谋篇布局以及短语句式罗列 1：解析题目内容；确定行文要点 题目信息解读 指令关键词 要点归纳 规定应用文类型为书信 Write a letter 1.题目要求写一封信，书信格式需完整; 2.收信人为朋友,用词不需要太客气、正式;应随意；自然 3.信的内容必须包括:电影名称；推荐理由 揭示收信人身份为朋友 a friend of yours 规定信件内容:推荐一部喜欢的电影并给出推荐理由 1：recommend one of your favorite movie 2：give reasons for your recommendation 2：罗列关键词以及必备表达haunt[v.]浮现在脑海中 explore [v. ]探索，探究 be inspired by灵感来自,本文指“电影改编自” struggle to build a future为未来奋斗 touching[a.]感人的[同义替换表达:affecting,moving ] inspiring [a. ]激励人心的 recommendable[a.] 值得推荐的 create a box office miracle创造票房奇迹 appealing [a.]吸引人的[同义替换表达:attractive, interesting] coincidence [n. ]巧合 3：写作储备 话题表达补充：电影推荐理由 情节：good story 故事情节好 illuminating[a.]有启迪意义的,humorous [a.]幽默的, inspiring[a.]激励人的 演员：a galaxy of famous巨星云集 deliver excellent performance表演出色 口碑：have national and international reputation 享誉国内外，win numerous awards获得数不清的奖项 [推荐信常用表达] 1.开头语 1 want to/ can't wait to recommend sth to you.我忍不住向你推.... I am writing this letter to recommend sth to you.我写信向你推..... I want to introduce you sth which you will certainly get interested in.我向.介绍.... ,你肯定会对它感兴趣。 2.发展部分 It is attractive/ appealing/interesting, etc. ，because.. 它有吸引力、有趣，因为.... It is famous/ well- known/ noted for... 它因.....而出名。 I especially like its ...我特别喜欢它的.... It is recommendable for ... .....值得推荐。 I want to especially recommend it to you, because..我特别推荐它，因为... It is worth... because. ..它值得-.，因为.... 3.结束语 You shouldn't miss such a .你不应该错过如此好的....... I wish you could enjoy it希望你能有愉快的体验。 1 hope you would love it希望你能喜欢它。 I’m sure you will like is...我相信你会喜欢它的 4：句式升级美化 ①写出简单句 ①写出简单句 我想推荐你去看The Pursuit of Happiness.。 I want to recommend you The Pursuit of Happiness. 我昨晚看了这部电影。 I watched this film last night. 我仍然在想它的情节。 I still think about its plot. ②利用衔接词将简单句整合 I want to recommend you The Pursuit of Happiness which I watched this film last night whose plot I still think about ③增加表达精确性和美感 1 can't wait to recommend you The Pursuit of Happiness, a film which 1 watched last night and whose plot still haunt me 课堂练习 句子成形步骤: ①写出简单句 句子成形步骤: ①写出简单句 它是关于克里斯·加德纳的真实故事的。 It is about the true story of Chris Gardner. 克里斯·加德纳是一名推销员。 Chris Gardner was a salesman. 他试图为他自己和他5岁的儿子创造一个未来。 He tried to build a future for himself and his 5-year old son. ②利用衔接词将简单句整合 It is about the true story of Chris Gardner who was a salesman and tried to build a future for himself and his 5- year-old son. ③增加表达精确性和美感 It is inspired by the true story of Chris Gardner, a salesman struggling to build a future for himself and his 5-year-old son. Part C 写作模板总结 My dear friend, I can't wait to recommend you . explores the meaning of填写积极正面的名词. Besides.，it is recommendable for 。Another appealing feature of is . I am sure you will love this Hope to discuss it with you later. Yours, Li Ming Part D 学生作文点评与范文赏析 作文一 学生作文赏析 (5分) 点评意见 Dear Hu Xing', I ‘m writing to recommend the movie, The War, that is my favorite movie to you. I believe That you will get different thoughts from the movie . This movie directs some things of the War II. It is a document. You will angry and feel sadness, and cry when you look at common people's eyes I like this movie very much. I hope you would like it as well. I look forward to yours. Yours, Li Ming 1：定语从句使用错误 2：表达过于笼统；没有细节表述 3：词性混用 4：表达中式化 5：句式不够高级；表达偏中式 作文二 学生作文赏析 (10分) 尝试修改丰富文章句式 Dear friend, I didn't meet you for a long time. What are you doing. Today I will introduce a very good movie to you which is my favorite movie，Its name is Brave Heart. The story begin in a war. From that movie, you can see how a hero grows up. He always fights with the evil for the freedom of his people. I'm moved by it and can't help learning the virtue of him Could you watch it for a rest? If you say yes, I‘ll be very happy. Yours, Li Ming Dear friend, 1 have not met' you for a long time. How Are you doing? Today I am writing to' introduce you a very inspiring movie-- Brave Heart' which is my favorite; and highly recommendable. At first, it tells an interesting story. The story highlights the life journey of a hero during the first war of Scottish independence. What 'S more, it can serve as an incentive for us to persist and work hard. The main character is a true inspiration. He never gave up fighting against the evil for the freedom of his people in whatever harsh situation. I'm moved by his spirit and eager to learn from him It would be regretful if you missed such a great film, I wish you could enjoy it when you have time. Yours, Li Ming 范文及译文 范文 译文 My dear friend, I can’t recommend you The Pursuit of Happiness ，a film which I watched last night and whose plot haunts me. The film explores the meaning of love, optimism, persistence, and, certainly, happiness. It is inspired by the true story of Chris Gardner, a salesman struggling to build a future for himself and his 5 year old son. Besides its touching and inspiring story, this film is recommendable for its great reputation. It has created a box office miracle and won numerous international prizes. Another appealing feature of this film is a coincidence: it stars Will Smith, an African American actor, and his real-life son, I am sure you will love this film. Hope to discuss it with you later. Yours, Li Ming 我亲爱的朋友， 我不能推荐你《追求幸福》，这是我昨晚看的电影，情节一直困扰着我。 这部电影探讨了爱、乐观、坚持，当然，还有幸福的意义。它的灵感来自于克里斯·加德纳的真实故事，一个努力为自己和他5岁的儿子建立一个未来的推销员。除了其感人和鼓舞人心的故事外，这部电影的良好声誉也值得推荐。它创造了一个票房奇迹，并赢得了无数的国际奖项。这部电影的另一个吸引人的特点是巧合：由非裔美国演员威尔·史密斯和他现实生活中的