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书信作文 1．初三学生Sandy面临中考，面对父母和老师的期望，以及每天堆积如山的作业感到非常苦恼。昨天她因为看了一小时的电视和妈妈吵架，最后摔门而去。于是她写信给老师倾诉烦恼，请你根据下列提示，以老师Nancy的身份用英语给她写一封回信。 要求：不少于100词。 提示： 1. 如何舒缓目前的压力； 2. 如何安排好每天的学习和休息； 3. 如何处理与父母的关系。 Dear Sandy, I am really glad that you can share your problems and feelings with me. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Nancy 2．假设你是李华，你的朋友Tom即将面临第一次月考，然而他却非常焦虑，请你写一封信给他提一些有益的建议，帮助他调整心态，轻松迎考。要点如下： （1）学会放松自己（体育锻炼，听音乐……）； （2）保持健康的饮食（多吃蔬菜……）； （3）保证充足的睡眠。 要求： （1）词数80词左右； （2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （3）开头和落款已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, You are not alone. Don’t worry about your study too much. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 3．三年的初中生活即将结束，你是否很期待暑假的来临？假如你是李华，你的英国网友Tony打算暑假来中国旅行，并要求你为他制定一份旅行计划。请根据以下提示写篇短文，把你的计划和理由告诉他，并征求他的意见。 Key points（要点）  Word and expressions for reference（参考词汇）   What to do  climb the Great Wall enjoy Beijing Opera .. .. ..   Reasons         one of the most popular tourism attractions learn about Chinese culture .. .. ..   要求: 1. 文中必须包含全部提示要点，可适当发挥，参考词汇供选择使用。 2. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。 4. 词数 80—100。 Dear Tony, I’m extremely excited to hear that you’re coming to China during the summer vacation. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 4．假如你是心理老师Mrs. Wang，九（2）班同学给你发了一封求助邮件，请你根据邮件内容，用英语给Peter回一封电子邮件，帮助他分析情况并提出合理建议。 Dear Mrs. Wang,        I’m Peter from Class Two, Grade Nine. I have met a problem, being shorter than other students in my class. And they often play jokes on me. I’m feeling angry and often want to fight with them. Could you help me? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Peter   要求： 1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2.必须包括提示中的所有信息，并适当发挥； 3.词数在100词左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数； 4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Dear Peter, Thanks for your letter. I hope I can help you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Mrs. Wang 5．假如你是李华，你在劳动技能课上学会了制作贺卡，昨天是母亲节，你为妈妈亲手做了一张卡片作为礼物。请根据下面提示给你的外国好友Julie写一封信，介绍贺卡的制作过程及相关情况。 要点：1. 贺卡的制作过程： 1）准备卡片、彩色铅笔和剪刀； 2）把纸剪成心形，画上漂亮的图画； 3）写下了对妈妈的祝福并表达感谢； 2. 妈妈收到卡片时的感受和评价； 3. 询问Julie是如何庆祝母亲节的。 参考词汇：卡纸：cardboard [u.]             彩色铅笔：colored pencils             剪刀：scissors 剪成心形：cut...into a heart shape 要求：1. 词数80-100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数） 2. 要点齐全，语句通顺连贯，书写规范。 Dear Julie, How’s everything? Recently I have learnt how to make greeting cards in the labor class. Yesterday was Mother’s Day. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 6．中国传统文化深受世界各国人们的喜爱，而广东则以岭南文化而出名，假如你是李华，你们学校将要举办岭南文化节（Lingnan Cultural Festival）活动，你美国的笔友Mike想了解本次活动的细节。请你给他回信，内容包括： （1）时间：下周六上午；地点：学校操场；参加人员：全体师生； （2）介绍岭南文化节的活动（至少两项），注意事项（至少一点）； （3）邀请他通过网络观看和体验本次活动。 作文要求： （1）不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。 （2）语句连贯，字数80词以上，作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数也不必抄写在答题卡上。 Dear Mike, How are you? I’m glad to hear from you. It’s known that Guangdong is a birthplace of Lingnan Culture in China. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope you’ll enjoy the festival online. Yours, Li Hua 7．2022年10月10日是第31个“世界精神卫生日”。今年的主题是“青春之心灵，青春之少年”。我校准备开展宣传活动，现需要向全校征集一名形象大使，班长李华准备推荐张丽参加选拔，请根据要点提示，写一篇100词左右的推荐信给主办方。 要点： 1. 充满自信，擅长演讲，总是面带微笑； 2. 勤奋谦虛，通过努力，学业取得进步； 3. 乐手助人……（举一例）； 4. 最喜欢的颜色是……（说明原因）； 5. 乐意接受他人的建议……（举一例）。 注意：文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；短文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Sir or Madam, Our class strongly recommend Zhang Li as this year’s School Mental Health Ambassador. We believe that she has many strong personal qualities for this position. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________        We think Zhang Li is the most suitable person to be this year’s School Mental Health Ambassador. We hope that you will agree with us. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 8．即将进入初三，学习开始变得越来越紧张。假如你是李明，你朋友Linda感到压力很大，很焦虑。请你写封信，给她一些好的建议，帮她调整状态。 内容要点如下： 1. 早睡早起，保证充足睡眠： 2. 课上认真听讲，课下不懂就问； 3. 多与他人交流，改进学习方法； 4. 合理安排时间，学会自我放松； 5、补充一两点个人想法。 注意： 1. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； 2. 词数：60-80； 3. 内容连贯，不要逐条翻译； 4. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：communicate v. 交流   improve v. 改进   manage v.管理；安排 Dear Linda, How is everything going? How are you getting along with your study? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming 9．近年来我国的发展世人瞩目，中国传统文化正受到越来越多外国朋友的关注。假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Nancy对中国传统佳节——中秋节特别感兴趣。请根据提示，向她介绍中秋节，并向她发出邀请。 / 要求： （1）80词左右； （2）注意书信格式。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （3）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 Dear Nancy,        I’m glad to hear that you are interested in the Mid-Autumn Festival.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 10．假设你叫李明，你们班级要选一名班长，你想向王老师推荐Tom，并附带了一张照片。请根据表格内容，写一封100词左右的推荐信。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 姓名  Tom   照片描述  黄色T恤和蓝色牛仔裤，因为黄色……，蓝色……（自由发挥两点）   特长  精通电脑，擅长演讲，迎接挑战   性格、品质  自信、谦虚、有条理、乐于助人等（举例说明）   个人事迹  经常花很多时间组织课外活动，从不介意为班级做额外工作，总是尽最大努力帮助同学，深受同学们欢迎。   总结  班长最适合人选   Dear Mr Wang, I’m writing to recommend Tom as our new monitor._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Ming 参考答案 1．例文 Dear Sandy, I am really glad that you can share your problems and feelings with me. Here is my advice. First, it’s a good choice to take up a hobby to help you relax and reduce your pressure. Second, you can make plans for your everyday life. After you study for about two hours, you can take a walk outside and try to relax. Besides, don’t stay up late. It’s not good for your health. Third, never argue with your parents. You should learn to understand them and spend some time communicating with them. Discuss your problems with them and tell them your ideas. They will help you find better ways to solve them. In a word, you will have a happier life with less pressure as long as you study hard and often talk with your parents. Yours, Nancy 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态综合使用“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要结合提示问题，针对Sandy的问题给出建议，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“给出建议”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“如何舒缓目前的压力、如何安排好每天的学习和休息、如何处理与父母的关系”三个方面重点介绍； 第三步，书写结语。表达“希望对方有一个更快乐、压力更小的生活”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①share...with...和……分享…… ②take up a hobby养成一种兴趣爱好 ③make plans for为……制定计划 ④stay up late熬夜 [高分句型] ①You should learn to understand them and spend some time communicating with them.（and连接并列结构） ②In a word, you will have a happier life with less pressure as long as you study hard and often talk with your parents.（as long as引导的条件状语从句） 2．Dear Tom, You are not alone. Don’t worry about your study too much. You should trust yourself. And here is my advice for you. First, you should learn how to relax yourself. You can try taking exercise or listening to music. These can help you feel less worried. Second, you should keep a healthy diet. Eat more green vegetables and fresh fruit instead of junk food. Third, you’d better go to bed early and have enough sleep. Enough sleep can provide you with the energy you need and make you active during the day. Finally, you should talk with your friends, parents or teachers often. They can give you some advice on how to relieve the worries. Follow these tips and you’ll feel better. I hope you can do well in your exam. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，而且要对要点进行适当的发挥，丰富文章的内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，安慰和鼓励对方不要太焦虑，要相信自己； 第二步，从自我放松、饮食和睡眠等方面给出建议，帮助其缓解考前焦虑； 第三步，书写结语，并表达自己的希望。 [亮点词汇] ① trust 相信；信任 ② relax oneself 放松自我 ③ keep a healthy diet 保持健康饮食 ④ instead of 代替，而不是 [高分句型] ① First, you should learn how to relax yourself.（疑问词+不定式作宾语） ② Third, you’d better go to bed early and have enough sleep.（had better do sth. 最好做某事） 3．[例文] Dear Tony, I’m extremely excited to hear that you’re coming to China during the summer vacation. My practical plans for you are as follows. Talking about tourist attractions, the Great Wall is on your must-see list. Located in Beijing, the capital of China, the Great Wall is so popular that it attracts millions of people from all over the world. It’s about 4000 miles long and wide enough for ten men to walk side by side. How difficult it is to build such a great man-made wonder in the ancient days without any modern technologies! Besides, Beijing Opera can’t be missed. With a long history of more than 200 years, Beijing Opera has been regarded as an important part of Chinese culture. Though it is difficult for you to understand, I’m sure you’ll fall in love with it, especially the dressing of actors. What do you think of my plans for you? If there are any questions, please let me know. Looking forward to seeing you! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题型：本文是书信写作； ②时态：主要是一般现在时； ③提示：文章格式已给出，考生应注意描述的全面性，文章必须将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，给Tony暑假旅行计划提供建议并讲述原因。本文主要是第一和第三人称，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总起全文，告知对方计划如下。 第二步，结合提示要点详细描述推荐内容。 第三步，询问对方是否满意，并期待对方的回信。 [亮点词汇] ①tourist attraction旅游胜地 ② all over the world全世界 ③regard as视为 ④fall in love with爱上 [高分句型] ①Located in Beijing, the capital of China, the Great Wall is so popular that it attracts millions of people from all over the world.（非谓语动词做状语，综合使用that引导的结果状语） ②Though it is difficult for you to understand, I’m sure you’ll fall in love with it, especially the dressing of actors.（使用though引导的让步状语从句） 4．例文 Dear Peter, Thanks for your letter. I hope I can help you. You said you have some trouble with your height now. I think height doesn’t matter. As we know, Spud Webb, the famous NBA star is short but very successful. Moreover, it’s their fault to play jokes on you. It’s not wise of you to fight w