2023年中考作文素材专题 作文素材运用.doc

中考作文素材专题 写作专题：作文素材运用 个人成长类 谈个人成长是比较常见的类型，相关素材的运用也相对比较广泛，学生可以运用生活中的具体示例体现自己的成长方面，谈谈收获和认识。具体运用方面，比方说：一次学校活动的成长；谈谈个人的一些分享；自己不再是小孩子了；成功地做完某一件事；某个人或某件事改变了我或者给我带来什么体会；某一年或某一阶段的个人总结；从某件事中学会了什么；谈谈初中阶段的感受与收获；生活学习中碰到的问题等等。 素材一 Last summer vacation, I took part in the volunteer activities of our community organizations. I worked as a volunteer in a children’s hospital in our city. I read stories, danced and sang to the sick children. I cheered them up. That morning I felt tired but happy. This will never forget it in my mind. The unforgettable experience was not only a volunteer work, but also a small society to me. I learned how to get on well with children. I not only felt good about helping others but also got to spend time doing what I love to do. 素材二 I used to write badly, especially in English. It affected my performance every composition. I felt annoyed because I didn’t know how to do it. Several months ago, our English teacher reminded us to pay attention to our English Writing. He prepared a copybook for each student. We were asked to practice every day. I tried my best to copy well. The teacher encouraged me and kept on telling me what to do next. With the help of my English teacher, I made progress in writing. 素材三 We shouldn’t break our promise. The one who can’t keep his promise is not reliable. Once, my friend asked me to company him, because he was alone at home and his parents were busy with their work. At first, I said yes to him. But I had a lot of things to do that afternoon. When I finished all the things, I found it was dark. I wanted to give up to company my friend. But thinking about his disappointed face, finally, I decided to keep my words. When my friend saw me, he was very happy and moved. He said he believed that I would come. 素材四 When I was in Grade 7, I went to a new school because my family moved to a new town. I was a little shy. So I was worried about how I could get along with my new classmates and teachers. I worried that I can’t get used to teachers’ new ways of teaching. I also worried that I couldn’t make new friends there. On the night before the school started, my mom came to my room, sat on the bed and told me, “There is no need to worry. When you are friendly to people around you, they will be friendly to you. Believe in yourself.” Listening to these words, I had some courage. That day came. When I entered the classroom, I saw many smiling faces. I felt relaxed at once. 素材五 Mr. Hu is our science teacher. Last week he gave us one of the most valuable lessons. In his class, He told us the importance of protecting the environment. Our planet faces many problems. Our planet faces many problems, such as air pollution, water pollution, noise pollution and so on. After this lesson, I know better that we should protect our planet. Protecting the environment starts with me. 素材六 I used to do nothing to help you at home, but now I can do a large amount of housework by myself. Moreover，I’m a girl full of love, when old man cross the street, I will go and help him. And I can get along well with my friends; we can do many things by ourselves, which makes us stronger and stronger. 真题在线 根据我们上面所讲述了个人成长类素材内容，我们以2018中考真题为例，来看一下这类素材在实际考试中的应用。 Write at least 60 words on the topic ＂My progress＂ （以＂进步了＂为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） 你在生活或学习中一定取得过不少进步，比如生活技能的获得、学习方法的掌握、良好习慣的养成。请选取其中一个方面，结合自身经历，谈一谈你是如何取得这一进步的。 注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。 The following is for reference only （以下表达仅供参考） used to do/be… try my best to do… make progress in( doing)… My progress I used to write badly, especially in English. It affected my performance every composition. I felt annoyed because I didn’t know how to do it. Several months ago, our English teacher reminded us to pay attention to our English Writing. He prepared a copybook for each student. We were asked to practice every day. I tried my best to copy well. The teacher encouraged me and kept on telling me what to do next. With the help of my English teacher, I made progress in writing. No pains no gains. I will study hard to achieve greater progress and I believe I will do better and better. 随堂练习 Write at least 60 words on the topic "I am no longer a little child"（以“我不再是一个孩子”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 背景：如今，我们的父母一方面对我们百般呵护，一方面又时常抱怨我们长不大。请给你的父母写一封信，证明你不再是一个孩子了（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入字数）。 The following is for reference only (以下表达和图片仅供参考)： used to make me... (be) full of


Dear parents ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours XXX I am not a child any more .So，dear mother and father，please don't treat me as a little baby . I used to do nothing to help you at home, but now I can do a large amount of housework by myself. Moreover，I’m a girl full of love, when old man cross the street, I will go and help him. And I can get along well with my friends; we can do many things by ourselves, which makes us stronger and stronger. So，dear mother and father，I am no longer a little child. 【教师详解】 1、题干解读：本文属于一片话题作文，所以时态可以根据句意确定。在写作时需阐明自己的观点，并举出例子。 2、高分词组和句式： 短语：any more; treat sb. as ;full of; a larger amount; used to do；some day ；sooner or later；worry about；with great care/very carefully；be responsible for; no longer...;be independent of；spread one’s wings等 句式： when 引导的时间状语从句； Hope that+从句 Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者，事竟成 Action is more important than words。事实胜于雄辩。 2.兴趣爱好类 兴趣爱好类作文主要结合自身的具体兴趣爱好来写，再结合题目所体现的方向具体展开正文，一般会在题干中有具体指明谈谈自身的兴趣爱好或者对命题本身有正确的解读，具体运用方面，比方说：**使你的生活充满欢乐；学校组织的某项活动或某某节日；全命题式的题目如谈好书伴我成长；以及书信应用文中谈谈介绍自己的兴趣爱好。 素材一 I think reading has a lot of benefits. It can open up our mind because books are full of knowledge and they make us wise and rich in life. I like reading newspapers and magazines. Because by reading them, I can know what is going on around the world in time. I also read storybooks and novels in my spare time, which makes me relaxed and happy. On weekends, I usually spend a whole afternoon in the library. 素材二 I played the piano about six hours a day. Sometimes I failed to make progress though I had practiced very hard. I never give up because I am sure my dream will come true. Now the piano has become my good friend. When I play it, I feel like we are talking with each other. I love my piano so much because it has brought me a lot of happiness, and confidence. 素材三 I like watching basketball games, especially NBA games. It can make up for the pity that I can't play basketball often. Also, it is the best way for me to relax. While watching those excellent players dribbling or shooting, I am so excited that I can't help rising from the seat and yelling. Most importantly, nearly all the famous players used to be nobody from nowhere, but they succeed through hard work, which inspires me to believe in myself and face difficulties bravely. 真题在线 根据我们上面所讲述了兴趣爱好类素材内容，我们以一篇2019嘉定一模作文为例，来看一下这类素材在实际考试中的应用。 Write at least 60 words on the topic “________ Makes My Life Full of Fun”（以“________使我的 生活充满乐趣”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 初三的生活虽然紧张，但学习体验、集体活动、兴趣爱好……仍能为我们