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作文题目  最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。     60％的同学认为   40％的同学认为 1．不应该收门票 2公园是公众休闲的地方 3l如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象 1．应收门票，但票价不要太高 2．支付园林工人工资 3．购新花木 注意：1．信的开头已为你写好。    2．词数：100左右。    3．参考词汇：门票---entrance fee Dear Editor．    I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we havehad about whether an entrance  fee should be charged for parks． 高考满分作文1 Dear editor,　　I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.　　With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Yours truly,　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Li Hua 高考满分作文2 Dear editor, 　　I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Sixty students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should not be bought before one enters a park, for it is a place for the public to go to when they are free. If a ticket must be bought, a gate and walls have to be built for a park, which will make a city look ugly. Forty students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should be bought before one enters a park, but that the price of the ticket should be reasonable. Money that is got from ticket selling can be used to pay the gardening workers and buy different kinds of flowers and trees. As for myself, I really think parks are good places to go to at weekends and on holidays. At the same time, we, as visitors, should pay the entrance fee when we enter a park. After all, it takes a lot of money to maintain a park in good working order. Do you agree with me, dear editor?  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Yours truly, 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Li Hua  高考满分作文3 Dear editor, 　　I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Sixty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee should not be forced on the public. They believe parks are the place where the public enjoy themselves at their leisure. They think that a gate and wails are to be built if an entrance fee is to be charged. The city will not look so beautiful as it should have. Forty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee is OK, but it shouldn’t be out of control. Entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new types of flowers and trees. For myself, I’d like to say that if we all work hard to build our city into a flower garden, who cares about the entrance fee for parks? 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Yours truly, 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Li Hua  高考满分作文4 Dear editor, 　　I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had a