新高考英语读后续写——故事编写思路（素材）.doc

读后续写 写作重点及步骤 写作重点 1.重在描写(画面感) 描述过程应加入更多的具体动作描述和情感描写，用具体动作代替抽象表达。同学们比较擅长写“结论性”语言，如“She felt really nervous and cold.”这样的句子虽然没有错误，但是直接地形容词表达，会导致续写指呈现抽象的结论，没有“画面感”。 [例]我每天去学校。I go to school every day. 扩写：With the sun rising from the east, I, together with Tom and Jerry, ride to school at 6:00 every morning, laughing and talking. 2.关注语言 避免句型结构单一，否则会显得对各种句型掌握不充分。应有意识地使用非谓语、形容词做状语、虚拟语气等。 3.注意衔接 要使用清晰的逻辑衔接。如明确的时间线索，很好地承接上下文。 4.正向结局 设计的结局应是正向的化险为夷。 八步成文法 (注意：这八步并不是固定的，可以不按这个顺序，也可以省略一些环节。) 1. 情绪：情绪描写 & 2. 细节：进一步解释描写 细节描写 实例 笑 (看到直升机，Jane高兴地笑了起来。 (1)At the sight of the helicopter, Jane beamed with wild joy. (2)Seeing the helicopter, Jane beamed with wild joy. (3)The moment she caught sight of the helicopter, Jane’s eyes/face lit up with delight. (4)The moment she caught sight of the helicopter, a bright smile lit up Jane’s face/eyes. (其他 ①The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。 ②A smile of understanding flashed across his face.他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。 ③She wore a shining smile on her face.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。 高兴激动 (当她知道考试结果时，她兴奋极了。 (1)When she knew the result of the test, she felt excited/thrilled. (2)When she knew the result of the test, her eyes twinkled with excitement. (3)When she knew the result of the test, her heart was pounding with wild joy. (4)When she knew the result of the test, a wild excitement took hold of her. (5)Knowing the result of the test, she felt a surge of excitement. (6)Knowing the result of the test, she was overcome with excitement. (其他 ①A ripple of excitement ran through them.一阵激动声穿过他们。 ②Laughter lingered around the room.笑声在房间里萦绕。 ③His eyes twinkled with pleasure.他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。 ④A wild gaiety took hold of her.一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。 ⑤Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steady smile. 令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光，嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。 ⑥I was wild with joy.我欣喜若狂。 ⑦I was pleased beyond description.我高兴得难以形容。 哭 (她哭了。 (1)A lump came to her throat.她哽咽欲哭。 (2)Her eyes were red from crying.她的双眼哭得通红。 (3)Her eyes brimmed with tears.她的眼里满含泪水。 (4)Tears coursed /trickled/streamed /ran down her cheeks.眼泪沿着她的面颊流下来。 伤心痛哭 (她伤心不已。 (1)She felt extremely sad. (2)A sadness came over her. (3)Her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks. (4)Numb with grief, she became speechless. (5)Feeling a surge of sadness, she couldn’t help crying bitterly. (6)Sadness surging within her, she burst into tears. (其他 ①He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。 ②I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。 ③Her hands were shaking. She was on the verge of tears.她的手在颤抖。她快要哭了。 ④Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine.听到这个消息，他绝望地把悲伤淹没在酒里。 ⑤She burst into tears and ran out of the room.她突然哭了起来，跑出了房间。 ⑥ She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.她掩面哭泣。 ⑦I tried to fight back tears. /My eyes were filled with tears.我努力忍住眼泪。/ 我的眼里充满了泪水。 ⑧A frown（皱眉）now stood on his face.他皱起了眉头。 ⑨They sat there with glum looks on their faces.他们坐在那里，带着一脸忧郁。 ⑩The news cast a cloud of gloom over his face.这消息使他脸上蒙上了一层阴影。 害怕 (我感到害怕。 (1)I felt very frightened/scared/panicked. (2)I was in (a) panic/ was full of fear. (3)I stood rooted to the spot, brimming with fear/filled with fear. (4) I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak. (5) I froze with terror, too scared to move. (6) I was seized by a strong sense of honor; my palms sweating. (其他 ①He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。 ②Fear slowly creeps upon her.恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。 ③She was struck with horror when...她感到恐惧… ④She was choked by fear.她因恐惧而窒息。 ⑤Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.她脸色苍白地站在那里，舌头打结。 ⑥A flood of fear welled up in him. / Fear flooded over him.他心中涌起一阵恐惧。/ 恐惧淹没了他。 ⑦Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly suffocated.她的心跳得厉害，几乎窒息而死。 ⑧She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles. 她浑身颤抖，觉得如坐针毡。 生气愤怒 (Sam感到非常生气。 (1)Sam felt very angry. (2)Sam stood rooted to the spot, his eyes blazing with anger. (3)Sam felt so angry that he stormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him. (4)Boiling with rage, Sam shook his fist at me. (5) fulled with fury, Sam was unable to utter a single word. (其他 ①I was seized by anger.我充满了愤怒。 ②He was fuming with rage.他气得大发雷霆。 ③His anger boiled over.他的愤怒爆发了。 ④He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.他几乎控制不住怒火。 ⑤He was breathing fire and fury.他充满着怒火。 ⑥His voice trembled with anger.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。 ⑦He gave me a look of burning anger.他愤怒地看了我一眼。 ⑧He glared at me with burning eyes.他用灼热的目光怒视着我。 ⑨He flared up at the word.他一听到这个字就勃然大怒。 ⑩His face clouded with anger.他气得脸色阴沉。 感动 ①Touched deeply/immensely, we…被深深感动，我们… ②Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.她热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢。 ③With tears streaming down her face, she... 泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来，... 3. 转折：个人努力或借助外界 解决途径：他人、他物、自己、自然(突出和谐，时间与成长) 解决冲突的具体方案基本如下： 1.encouragement(某人的鼓励) 2.comfort(某人的安慰) 3.inspiration(突然灵机一动) 4.effort(自己的努力训练) 5.calm(冷静思考) 6.kindness(某人的善良) 7.courage(勇敢) 8.love(爱心，需要与move(感动)和patience(耐心)等适当结合) 9.help(及时帮助) (当然解决方案并不限于某一种，还可以是以上多种方式的结合) 鼓起勇气；他人的鼓励 pluck up/take/gather one’s courage (to do...) 毫不犹豫 (1)sb could hardly wait to do sth. (2)without a second thought (3)without even thinking (4)without delay (5)without hesitation 4. 转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰 似乎 (1)It was like doing sth (2) It seemed as if that.. 希望 (1)hoping that (2)see/feel a glimmer of hope (3)trying hard to do sth. 欣慰 (1)...breathed a sign of relief = sighed with relief松了一口气 (2) (a wave of) relief flooded through /washed over sb. (3)to one's relief, ...是人欣慰的/放心的是... 5. 失望：但是问题还未解决或出现了新问题 不幸的是 (1)but bad luck for sb, ... (2) ..., but in vain (3)..., but without success (4)..., but no use 不知道做什么 (1)sb did sth, wondering what to do next. (2)sb did sth, not knowing what to do next. (3)sb did sth, unsure of what to do next. (4) sb was at a loss what to do. (5)sb was in a dilemma about whether to do sth or not. 6. 想法：突然有了一个想法（一句话说明这个想法） 某人想到/明白...； 有了主意 It suddenly occurred to sb that + 从句 =It hit/struck sb that + 从句=It dawned on sb that+从句 (an idea, thought....) occurred /came to sb=....came/flashed into one’s mind=....crowded in one’s mind (3)one’s mind began to race 7. 结局：过段时间，事情有了最后的转折 过了一段时间 (1)not long after that,...=shortly afterwards,... = before long, ... = It didn’t take long before+从句=It took some time before +从句 (2) for an instant/moment 事情有了转折 (1)To one’s surprise (delight) / Strangely enough, it turned out that +从句 (2)But no second thoughts,... (3)But what happened next was pure magic. 8. 总结：点题，呼应前文 直到...才意识到 (1)倒装句：Not until+时间状语+did sb realize/notice that + 从句 (2)强调句：It was only +时间状语+ that sb realized that + 从句 还记得某人的话； 还在某人的脑海中 (1)One's word echoed/rang out in one’s ears. (2)One’s words/voice/song lingered/whispered in one’s mind/ head. (3)One’s head was still full of... 经历与教训 (1)感叹句：What a/an valued/useful/great/painful lesson sb taught me/sb learned from sb.! What a/an enjoyable / pleasant / wonderful / unforgettable / memorable / interesting / valued experience sb had! (3)Down deep in one’s heart,...在某人的内心深处 题型专练 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. As he walked along Park Avenue near the First National Bank, he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car. He tried again and again but couldn’t get the car moving. Arthur turned and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried. Arthur stopped and asked, “It looks like you’ve got a problem,” Arthur said. “I’m afraid so. I’m in a big hurry and I can’t start my car.” “Is there something I can do to help?” Arthur asked. The young man looked at the two suitcases in the back seat and then said, “Thanks. If you’re su