中英语读后续写——情绪描写
读后续写评分标准解读:
1)与题⽬已给信息的衔接;
2)划线词语的应⽤(划线词—分成名词、形容词和副词/动词 三个类别)
3)语法和词汇的应⽤:准确、丰富。(从句堆叠⻓句、简单句、谓语、虚拟语⽓、倒装句、强调句等)
4)故事中的衔接成分——衔接词 如 at this moment,unfortunately 情节顺畅、层次分明
5)其他因素-字数符合要求,字迹⼯整,卷⾯整洁,与原⽂⼀致⻛格,结尾不留悬念
读后续写高频词汇
开⼼
高兴的 delighted/ cheerful /joyful
精神⾼涨的 in high / cheerful spirits
令某⼈开⼼的是 to one’s delight
狂喜 be wild with joy
⾯带微笑 wear a shining smile
内⼼迸发喜悦 joy wells up inside sb.
⼼情好 in a good mood
开⼼地哼着⼩曲 hum a tune merrily
内⼼充满快乐 be overwhelmed with delight
愤怒
感到愤怒 feel furious / irritated
脸⽓的通红 flush with anger
怒⽓冲天 anger boils over sb.
⽓的直跺脚 stamp one’s feet in anger
怒视某⼈ glare at sb.
脸因为愤怒⽽扭曲one’s face twists with rage
咬⽛切⻮ gnash one’s teeth
攥紧拳头 clench one’s fists
害怕
害怕地 in panic
恐惧地 in terror
全身颤抖 tremble from head t toe
⼀股寒意袭上脊背:
a chill feeling creeps over one’s spine
⼀阵惧意涌上⼼头:
a surge of fear wells up in sb.
因害怕⽽哽咽 choke with fear
脸⾊发⽩ one's face turns pale
⼤脑⼀⽚空⽩ one's mind goes blank
难过
难过的 depressed/ wretched
沮丧的 discouraged /frustrated
眼睛湿润的 one’s eyes are wet
低垂着头 with one’s head drooping
⼼情不好 in low spirits
⽤双⼿捂着脸:
hide one’s face in his/her hands
沉浸在悲伤中:
be immersed in sorrow/be overcome with sorrow
泪⽔流过脸颊 tears roll down one’s cheeks
沉溺于悲伤⽆法⾃拔:
float in an ocean sadness
⼼沉下去 one’s heart sinks
困惑
迷茫的 at a loss 头脑空⽩ one’s mind goes blank
眉头紧锁 one’s eyebrows knot together/with a frown on one’s face
疑惑不解的 puzzled / confused /bewildered
挠头 scratch one’s head
感动
⼀股暖流涌上⼼头 a warm current rises in one’s heart
热泪盈眶 tears well up in one’s eyes/one’s eyes be brimming