高考书面表达之读后续写（共3篇，含范文）.doc

走进高考书面表达之读后续写一题型解读1读后续写作为英语高考新题型是一种给材料作文它要求学生在阅读完一篇还未写完的文章之后根据所给出的开头语把这篇未写完的文章补充完整读后续写要紧扣文章前文所述去推想之后可能出现的情况要展开合理充分的想象构思适当的情节写成一篇完整的文章读后续写有助于培养学生的想象能力创新思维能力和语言表达能力合理忠于原文精神2读后续写之要求合情思想正面向上选材特点1所需阅读的短文词数在350以内2多以记叙文故事类文章为主3将续写内容发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接情节和结构完整的短文读后续写得分点总结1内容切题读2语言高级写3逻辑连贯写二解题步骤15分钟读300词阅读材料掐首尾读首尾段找人事找到文章的人物和事件3分钟编转折加升华在草稿上根据所给出的开头语写简略取中文续写大纲根据中文大纲17分钟用亮眼词加美颜句凑成两段各6080词的短文具体如下150词三专项练兵场I2021全国新高考卷I6080词68句话从句非谓语表达情绪6080词68句话从句非谓语表达情绪阅读下面材料根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段使之构成一篇完整的短文AMOTHERSDAYSURPRISEThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMothersDayHowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbedTheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridgeTheyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchenTherewasnothingtoitJennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodoThebigdaycameatlastThealarmrangat6amThepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchenTheydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirstTheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoastJeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilkJennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixtureNextJeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpanEverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebreadThepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinsecondsJennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbreadThistimesheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicelyThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshakeThenextminutetheporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefireJennapanickedThankfullyJeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquicklyButthestovewasamessnowJennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridgeButJeffshandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpainJennamadehimputhishandincoldwaterThenshecaughtthesmellofburningOhdearThepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell注意1续写词数应为150左右2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答AsthetwinslookedaroundthemindismaytheirfatherappearedThetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup解析本文是根据短文进行续写使之成为一个完整的故事略读原文首段ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMothersDayHowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbedTheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridgeTheyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchenTherewasnothingtoitJennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo和尾段ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshakeThenextminutetheporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefireJennapanickedThankfullyJeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquicklyButthestovewasamessnowJennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridgeButJeffshandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpainJennamadehimputhishandincoldwaterThenshecaughtthesmellofburningOhdearThepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell得知双胞胎Jenna和Jeff准备在母亲节那天给他们的妈妈一个惊喜计划做早餐然后在做早餐的过程中手忙脚乱弄得厨房一地鸡毛根据所给材料确定文章主题Jenna和Jeff如何给母亲制作惊喜的早餐的续写部分应和前面的文章衔接得上并且与原文情节发展和人物性格相一致故事情节的向后延续发展要合乎情理根据第一段首句Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindismaytheirfatherappeared当双胞胎沮丧地环顾四周时他们的父亲出现了可以针对父亲面对双胞胎的表情展开进行构思所以第二句Seeingtheburntbreadandspilledporridgeinthekitchendadstaredatthekidsinastonishment接下来编转折Jeff告诉爸爸计划爸爸笑了决定帮助他们WhenJeffstammeredouttheirplanasmileofunderstandingflashedacrossdadsfaceWithoutasecondthoughtdaddecidedtohelpthem根据第二段首句Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup双胞胎把早餐拿到楼上并喊醒了母亲可以针对妈妈吃到孩子们送来的早餐的感觉展开进行构思逆推第一段尾句Anddadaskedthekidstocarryouttheirplan根据第二段第一句推出第二句TheyyelledHappyMothersDayAbigsurpriseforyou第二段最后一句AfeelingoflovefilledtheroomWhatabeautifulsurprise发出感慨使主题升华答案AsthetwinslookedaroundthemindismaytheirfatherappearedSeeingtheburntbreadandspilledporridgeinthekitchendadstaredatthekidsinastonishmentWhenJeffstammeredouttheirplanasmileofunderstandingflashedacrossdadsfaceWithoutasecondthoughtdaddecidedtohelpthemThekidscleanedupthemessykitchenwhiledadwasoccupiedcookingadelicioussandwichandsomeporridgeSoonthedelicioussmellofbreakfastfilledthekitchenAnddadaskedthekidstocarryouttheirplanThetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherupTheyyelledHappyMothersDayAbigsurpriseforyouThemomentmomsawthebreakfasthereyeswidenedandtwinkledwithjoyShetastedtheperfectsandwichaswellastheporridgesayingthatitwasthebestpresentthatshehadeverreceivedAndthenshetookthelittleangelsinherarmsandkissedthemAfeelingoflovefilledtheroomWhatabeautifulsurpriseII阅读下面材料根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段使之构成一篇完整的短文AfriendofminewhosenamewasJohnSmithhadabadmemorywhichmadehimfamousHewassoforgetfulthathesometimesforgotwhathewastalkingaboutinthemiddleofasentenceHiswifehadtoconstantlyremindhimabouthismeetingshisclassesevenhismealsOnceheforgothehadeatenbreakfasttwiceathomeandatschoolHiswifelikedtoremindherneighborsIfJohndidnthavehisheadtiedonhewouldforgetthattooSinceSmithwasaprofessoratawellknownuniversityhisforgetfulnesswasoftenanembarrassmenttohimItwasntthathewasnotcleverassomecriticalpeopletendedtosaybutjustveryveryabsentmindedOnehotsummerdayprofessorSmithdecidedtotakehischildrentoaseasidetownaboutathreehourtrainrideawayTomakethetripmoreinterestingforhisyoungchildrenhekeptthenameofthetownasecretHoweverbythetimetheyarrivedatthestationSmithforgotthenameofthetownhewasplanningtovisitLuckilyafriendofhishappenedtobeinthestationHeofferedtotakecareofthechildrenwhileSmithhurriedbackhometofindoutwherehewasgoingTheprofessorswifewassurprisedtoseehimagainsosoonOhmydearIforgotthenameofthetownWhatYouforgotthenameMaybeonedayyouwillforgetmynameNowIllwritethenameofthattownonapieceofpaperandyouputitinyourpocketandpleasepleasedontforgetwhereyouputitSatisfiedthatshehadsolvedtheproblemshesentherhusbandoffagainTenminuteslatershewasastonishedtoseehimoutsidethehouseforthethirdtime注意1续写词数应为150左右2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答Para1WhatsthematternowaskedhiswifePara2Hearingthecryoutrushedtheirneighborstryingtofindoutwhathadhappened答案WhatisthematternowaskedhiswifeIjustcantrememberwhyIcomebackandwhereIamsupposedtobegoingonsuchahotsummerdayrepliedtheprofessorHowevertherealreasonwasthatheforgotwherehehadlefthischildrenSensingsomethingwrongMrsSmithdidntbelievehiswordsbecausewheneverhetoldaliehewouldblinkhiseyesusuallyquicklyTellmethetruthorderedhiswifeAsyoutoldmeIdidntforgetwhereIputthenameofthattownbutIforgetthestationwhereIleftourchildrenwhisperedtheprofessorhisvoicetremblingWhatabadmemoryshoutedthewifeHearingthecryoutrushedtheirneighborstryingtofindoutwhathadhappenedAfightbetweenthecouplewasabouttostartwhentheprofessorscellphonebegantoringHisfriendwhosepatiencehadwornthinphonedtocomplainTheprofessorapologizedgotintohiscaranddroveawayleavingbehindabunchofpeopleoutsidethehouseBeingafraidthathewouldmakemattersworseagainMrsSmithdecidedtofollowhimwhothencalledataxiBythetimeshecaughtupwithherhusbandthechildrenwerealreadybackhomesafeIII阅读下面材料根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段使之构成一篇完整的短文EveryoneintheseasidetownknowsthatFlisshasaspecialbondwithherdogMollyTheyworktogetherlivetogetherandplaytogetherTheLabrador拉布拉多猎犬isactuallyatFlissssideallthetimeIfapersonspentthismuchtimewithafriendtheywouldprobablyhavefallenoutbynowbutthebondbetweenMollyandherownerjustgetsstrongerovertimeFlissgrewupinthecityIn2017shemovedtotheseasidewheresheopenedabathandskincareshopUponarrivalshecouldntbelievehowmuchlitterwasleftsenselesslyonthebeachInfactshewasshockedbytheunavoidableamountoflittershefoundwhiletakingMollyforwalksBeingapersonwhocaresalotabouthersurroundingsFlissdecidedthatshehadtodosomethingaboutitbeforethetidecarriedthelitterintotheseathreateningmarinelifeOnedaywhilecollectinglitteronthebeachFlisssawMollyrunningtowardsherwithanemptywaterbottleinhermouthAsMollydrewnearshedroppedthebottleandsetouttofindotherwasteThisgaveFlissanideawhatifshecouldtrainMollytofindallthoseplasticbottlesandbagsandmakegooduseofthemThetrainingstartedandFlisswassurprisedathowfastMollylearnedBeforelongtheclevergirlwouldventure冒险totheseasideonherownandcomehomewithherprizeShehadsoonfilledFlissshousewithpiecesofrubbishfromthelocalbeachAtonepointFlisssgaragewas60filledwithbeachlitterwaitingtobedistributedtolocalartistsforuseintheirartworkWhenFlissheardpawsonthedoortheotherdayshewenttogreethergoodgirlasusualTohersurpriseshesawMollycarryingasmallplasticpurseinhermouthFlissopenedthepurseandgasped喘气Insidewasapassportseveralcreditcardsandabunchofkeys注意1续写词数应为150左右2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答FlissimmediatelytookthepursetothelocalpolicestationwithMollyWhenthejournalistcametheytwowereonthebeach解答FlissimmediatelytookthepursetothelocalpolicestationwithMollyWhentheyarrivedFlisstiedMollytoafireplugoutsideandwentinherselfShehandedthepursetoapoliceofficerandexplainedeverythingGreatlytouchedheshookherhandandthankedherfordoingherdutypromisingthathewoulddohisbesttofindtheownerFlissfeltreassuredandwentbackwithMollyThenextdayajournalistcalledtomakeanappointmentforaninterviewWhenthejournalistcametheytwowereonthebeachThejournalistwassurprisedtofindthatMollywaspickinguplitterfollowinghermasterFlisstoldthejournalistitwasonthewaytocollectinglitterthatMollyhadfoundthepurseHearingthisMollystoppedwagginghertailasifsheunderstoodthewholesituationHavinglearnedaboutthewholestorythejournalistgottoknowwhattheydidtoprotectthelocalbeachSurprisedandimpressedthejournalisttooksomepicturesThenextdaytheywereonthefrontpageofthenewspaperAminoractioncouldmakewonders162wordsIV阅读下面材料根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段使之构成一篇完整的短文续写的词数应为150左右一角硬币会诊长袍解答DressedinhisdoctorsgownhewentintoseeherHesawherlieonthebedandrecognizedheratonceHerlovelyfacelookedpaleHewentbacktotheconsultationroomanddeterminedtodohisbesttosaveherlifeFromthatdayonhegavespecialattentiontohercaseLuckilyafteralongstrugglethebattlewaswonDoctorKellyrequestedthebusinessofficetopassthefinalbillforapprovalHelookedatitandthenwrotesomethingonthesideParagraph2ThebillwassenttoherroomHesitantlyshetookitShewasafraidtoopenitbecauseshewassurethatitwouldtaketherestofherlifetopayitoffFinallysheopenedthebillontheothersideofwhichanotecaughtherattentionShereadthesewordsPaidinfullwithaglassofmilksignedDrHowardKellyTearsofjoyfloodedhereyesassheprayedsilentlyThankyouGodV阅读下面材料根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段使之构成一篇完整的短文续写的词数应为150左右OnafreezingmorningofDecembertwopoliceofficerswerepatrolling巡逻thestreetsSuddenlythewalkietalkie对讲机onAlanoneoftheofficersrangThecakeshopneartheCityMuseumhasreportedaburglaryPleaserushtothesceneimmediatelysaidtheelectronicvoiceThetwopolicemenquicklyarrivedattheshoponlytofindthatthesceneshowednosignofcrimesatallCuriouslytheycheckedthemonitorandfoundthatathinwomanbrokeopenthewindowandclimbedintothestoreat520amInsteadofsearchingaroundshewalkedstraightintothestorageroomstolecheesechocolatebutterandotheringredients原料foracakeandthenranawaydowntheroadBothpolicemenfeltquiteconfusedaboutherbehaviorOneoftheshopassistantsidentifiedthethiefasClaraasinglemotherwholivednearbyShehasaneightyearoldboytotakecareofandlivesapoorlifeMomentslaterthetwoofficersarrivedatClarashouseBobanotherofficerpulledoutagunandwasabouttobreakinButAlantoldhimtoputthegunawayandknockedgentlyThedooropenedandoutcameaverythinwomanFromtheoutlineofherfigureAlanrecognizedthatshewasexactlythethiefThewomanClaraimmediatelyunderstoodthesituationwhenshesawthetwopolicemenSheburiedherfaceinherhandsandsatdownonthefloorAtthatverymomentachildsvoicebrokethesilenceMomisanyonecomingformybirthdayInvitetheminpleaseAfterhearingtheboyswordsClarastoodupandbeggedinalowvoiceOfficerIdidstealthosethingsbuttheresnothingelseIcoulddoItsmybabysbirthdayandIvegotneitherjobnormoneyPleasedonttakethosethingsawayIvejustusedthemtomakehimacake注意1续写词数应为150左右2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答LookingintothewomanstearyeyesAlanunderstoodandwalkedintothehouseBobnoddedthoughtfullyandaskedWhataboutthethingsshestole解答LookingintothewomanstearyeyesAlanunderstoodandwalkedintothehouseHetookaquickglanceattheboywhowasjoyfullyeatinghiscakeandsighedItisbestifweclosethecaseinadifferentwayHegesturedClaratocomeoutwithhimandclosedthedoorbehindherStillwithbutterfliesinherstomachClareextendedherhandsreadytobehandcuffed戴上手铐ThisisnotnecessaryAlansaidHeexplainedthatifClaraagreedtohelpoutatthecakeshopandpayforthecakethereisnoneedtoarrestherWithtearssparklinginhereyesandagracioussmiledecoratingherfaceClaraagreedandboweddeeplytoexpressherthanksBobnoddedthoughtfullyandaskedWhataboutthethingsshestoleAftersomediscussionthetwoofficersdecidedtotemporarilypayoffthelostingredientsforacakebythemselvesTheycamebacktothecakeshopandbroughttheshopassistantssomemoneyHeresthemoneyforingredientsforacakefromthewomanwhowassosorrybecauseofherbehaviorAndthenAlanandBobexplainedthesituationofClaratohimandalsodescribedthebeautifulcakeClaramadeHavingheardwhattheofficerssaidtheshopassistantrefusedthemoneyInsteadheofferedajobtoClarainhisshopVI阅读下面材料根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段使之构成一篇完整的短文续写的词数应为150左右MarytriedtoholdherbreathShemovedawayslightlybutAmyonlymovedcloserandcontinuedtalkingMarythoughttoherselfWhydoesshealwayshavetositnexttomeAmydidntseemtonoticethatMarywastryingtomoveawayandsheleanedincloserMarywantedbadlytotellAmythatshedidntsmellverygoodbuthowcouldshewithouthurtingherfeelingsWhenMarygothomefromschoolshecomplainedtohermotherTheresagirlnamedAmywholikestositnexttomeinschoolbutshesmellsbadNobodyelselikestositnexttohereitherWelltrytobenicetohersaidhermotherMaybesheshavingahardtimeathomeYouneverknowwhatapersonshomelifeislikeFortherestoftheweekMarytriedtobeagoodfriendtoAmyThereweretimeswhentheyhadfuntalkingandplayingtogetherespeciallyonthedayswhenAmybathedButonthedayswhenshesmelledbadMarystillfounditveryhardtobeherfriendOnemorningwhilegettingherhaircombedforschoolMarybroughtthesubjectupagainwithhermotherIdontwanttobefriendswithAmyanymoreshetoldhermotherHermothershandsfrozeinmidairMaryturnedtoseewhatthematterwasHermotherlookedupsetMarywonderedwhatshehadsaidmadehermotherreactthiswayIdontthinkyouunderstandAmyssituationsoletmeaskyouthisHermotherstonewasseriousWhomakessurethatyourhairiscombedeverymorningsoyoulllooknicewhenyougotoschoolWhomakessureyourebathedandcleanedeverydayAndyourclothesarewashedandneatlyironedYouandDaddyansweredMaryDoyouliveinahappyfamilyDoyouhaveagoodDadandMumThenhermotherencouragedhertolearnmoreaboutAmybeforeshedecidedwhetherornottobefriendswithAmy注意续写词数应为150左右2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答ThenextdayafterschoolMaryhadatalkwithAmySadnessorAmyfilledherheartandMarydecidedtomakefriendswithAmy解答ThenextdayafterschoolMaryhadatalkwithAmySheapologizedforbeingunkindthesedaysIdontknowwhathashappenedtoyousaidMaryandIamreallysorryforbeingsuchanunkindfriendHearingthatAmycouldntholdbackhertearsThankyouMaryThatsOKTotellyouthetruthmymotherdiedofcancertwoyearsagoandmyfatherisalwaysbusywithhisworkItwasatthattimethatMarycompletelyunderstoodthesituationAmywaslivinginShegaveAmyahugSadnessforAmyfilledherheartandMarydecidedtomakeFriendswithAmyAschoolMaryletAmysitnexttoherandhelpedherwithherschoolworkWhatevershedidshewasalwayscarefulnottohurtAmysfeelingsAsmonthspassedMarydiscoveredthatsheenjoyedtalkingandhangingoutwithAmyShenolongersawherasthegirlwhosmelledbadbutasafriendwithakindandwarmheartNotonlydidtheyestablishadeepandlastingfriendshipbuttheyalsomadegreatprogressintheirstudiesVII2022年全国新高考1阅读下面材料根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段使之构成一篇完整的短文续写的词数应为150左右ItwasthedayofthebigcrosscountryrunStudentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute路线throughthickevergreenforestIlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavidwhowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafenceHewassmallfortenyearsoldHisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttodayIwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasntwiththeotherchildrenHehesitatedandthensaidhehaddecidednottorunWhatwaswrongHehadworkedsohardforthiseventIquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschoolscoachandaskedhimwhathadhappenedIwasafraidthatkidsfromotherschoolswouldlaughathimheexplaineduncomfortablyIgavehimthechoicetorunornotandlethimdecideIbitbackmyfrustration懊恼IknewthecoachmeantwellhethoughthewasdoingtherightthingAftermakingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewantedIturnedtofindhimcomingtowardsmehissmallbodyrockingfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforwardDavidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildrenbutatschoolhisclassmatesthoughtofhimasaregularkidHealwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoingThatwaswhynoneofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhecrosscountryteamItjusttookhimlongerthatsallDavidhadnotmissedasinglepracticeandalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildrenhedidalwaysfinishAsaspecialeducationteacherattheDavidfacedandwasschoolIwasfamiliarwiththechallengesthechallengesproudofhisstrongdetermination注意1续写词数应为150左右2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答WesatdownnexttoeachotherbutDavidwouldntlookatmeIwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners