Writing——关于急救的小故事
本单元的写作任务是读一篇介绍急救方法的文章,了解有关急救的写作方法和技巧,然后再写一篇有关急救的小故事。
Ⅰ.Pre-writing
(Ⅰ)Learning to write after the model
(Ⅱ)Preparation for writing—words and phrases
①interrupt vi.& vt. 打断;打扰
vt. 使暂停;使中断
②scream v. (因愤怒或恐惧)高声喊;大声叫
n. 尖叫;尖锐刺耳的声音
③fellow adj. 同类的;同事的;同伴的;同情况的
n. 男人;家伙;同事;同辈;同类
④diner n. (尤指餐馆的)就餐者
⑤choke vi.&vt. (使)窒息;(使)哽咽
⑥steak n. 牛排;肉排
⑦throat n. 咽喉;喉咙
⑧desperate adj. 绝望的;孤注一掷的;非常需要的
⑨slap vt. (用手掌)打、拍
n. (用手掌)打、拍;拍击
⑩help__sb__to__one’s__feet 帮助某人站起身来
⑪practical adj. 切实可行的;实际的;实践的
⑫obstruction n. 阻碍;堵塞;阻塞物
⑬fist n. 拳;拳头
⑭grab vt. 抓住;攫取
n. 抓取;抢夺
⑮tightly adv. 紧紧地;牢固地;紧密地
⑯tight adj. 牢固的;紧身的;绷紧的;严密的
adv. 紧紧地;牢固地
Ⅱ.While-writing
在“世界急救日”即将到来之际,你校英语报计划出版一期急救常识专刊,现面向全校学生公开征集稿件,你有意参加。请你根据下面提示内容,用英语写一篇短文,介绍在车祸现场对伤者进行急救的方法和步骤。
1.确保现场的安全;
2.询问伤者,确保其呼吸正常;
3.检查伤口,如流血则应采取止血措施;
4.如需急救,确保其处于康复位置。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:康复位置 recovery position
Step 1 List the outline of the passage.
Paragraph 1:First__aid__is__very__important.
Paragraph 2:Introduce__the__methods__and__steps__of__giving__first__aid__to__the__injured__at__the__scene__of__the__traffic__accident.
Paragraph 3:“Do__remember”__is__emphasized__to__highlight__the__importance__of__first__aid.
Step 2 List the words, phrases and sentences.
1.Words and phrases
①in__the__first__place 首先 ②make__sure 确保
③get__hurt 受伤 ④what’s__more 再者
⑤too__much 太多 ⑥as__soon__as 一……就
⑦vital adj. 至关重要的 ⑧apply...to 把……应用于
⑨as__we__all__know 众所周知
⑩have__a__knowledge__of 了解;知道
⑪make__a__great__difference 有很大的影响
⑫the__following__steps 下面的步骤
⑬if__necessary 如果必要的话
⑭in__our__daily__life 在我们日常生活中
2.Sentences
①我们应确保事故现场是安全的以便于我们不会受伤。(so that)
We should make sure that the accident scene is safe so__that__we__won’t__get__hurt.
②这是因为如果一个人失血过多,他有可能死亡。(because引导的表语从句)
This is because__if__a__person__loses__too__much__blood,__he may die.
③如果有必要,尽快把伤者送到医院。
If__necessary,__take the injured person to the hospital as__soon__as__possible.
④一定记住:当给予急救时,请确保其处于康复位置。(do表示强调)
Do__remember:when giving first aid, please__make__sure to place the person in a recovery position.
Step 3 Draft the article by using the following words and phrases.
eq \x(as, if,so that,what’s more,because)
As we all know, having a knowledge of first aid can make a great difference in our daily life.If a traffic accident happens and someone is injured, the following steps can be used to treat the injured.
In the first place, we should make sure that the accident scene is safe so that we won’t get hurt.We should ask the injured person if he is OK, and see if he is breathing.What